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CaliGirl19

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• Apr 12, 2006

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well i posted my first 2 stories...lol...tell me what you think. i need feedback....

 

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• Apr 12, 2006

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I think they're way too short. They're more like descriptions of fantasies than stories. Otherwise, they're clear and fun.

 

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• Apr 12, 2006

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True stories

Another thing. True stories belong in the true stories forum. At least one of these sounded like a true story.

 

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• Apr 12, 2006

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Write on Hayley! Write on!
Love,
Heather and Anna
P.S Lovely situation use! As for length... well fictional stories last about 2-5 pages! Or more!!!! Still lovely start to a fine young writer!