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Ultimate payback, started by TTD, finished by me, isabeau.

isabeau

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TTD asked me to finish his story if i would. i didn't think that i had the imagination to do this wonderful story justice, but finally decided to give it a try..the first part is written by Tickledtodeath.. the last part by yours truly.. not sure it will live up to his fantastic descriptions, but it was the best i could do.. so without further ado, here is the complete story..

Ultimate Payback
by TickledToDeath



She had heard enough. All the talk about all the women he had tickled...tickle tortured. All the talk about how he would never give up or surrender no matter how long he was tickled or how many women tickled him. All the women she had SEEN him tickle torure, including herself, mercilessly. She had him tickled before and had as many as 5 women including herself tickle him silly for a couple of hours and she knew he was extremely ticklish damn near everywhere on his body! Enough was enough and it was time to put him in his place! To finally shut him up and put an end to his boasting and bragging! She would have to plan this carefully and quietly so he would not see this coming. The element of surprise would hopefully help not that it mattered really as she was on a mission to break this man. To tickle torture him far beyond anything he had ever experienced and to pay him back for all the tickle torment he as inflicted on herself and every woman he had ever tickled. The ultimate payback. There would be absolutely NO mercy whatsoever regardless of how much he begged and pleaded for it. She would have to get as many women as possible for this venture. She wanted as many women as she could get so that every single ticklish spot on his body could and would be tickled at the same time and so that the tickling would remain constant and only stop long enough to prevent him from passing out and becoming desentisized from tickle overload. She wanted him to endure 24 hours of pure tickle torture!
They have had many tickle parties and were planning another one real soon. She saw that as the perfect opportunity for he would suspect nothing. She could have as many women there as she wanted and could get and he would suspect nothing. She could set him up, big time and he would suspect nothing. She could even have him HELP her get more gals (assistants) to come to his own demise and he would suspect nothing. He could even have fun tickling all of the ladies that show up and who are ticklish, setting him up for his own downfall into ticklish hell for he would even allow them to tie and tickle him but not knowing just what he was letting himself in for! The perfect plan. Fool proof. It couldn't get any easier. All she needed were the "players" and she knew there already were and it would take no convincing at all to get them to take part in her devious plan.
Closer and closer the weekend came....a Friday night. A weekend she knew they both had free.
She knew who was coming to the party...now a party within a party. A party of revenge within a party of fun and laughter and ending with his trip into hysterical insanity. There would be at least 8 women there at this event. At least 16 hands. 80 tickling fingers and his screaming laughter and pleas for mercy that will fall upon 16 deaf ears.
Little did he know that there was contact between her and a few of the other gals attending. Little did he know that secrets of his ticklish spots and how to make him so hyper ticklish eventually that his screams would be glass shatteringly loud and that once they see him in this insanely ticklish state....they would never want to stop tickling him. She told secrets of his every single ticklish spot on his body and gave them all free reign to tickle him as they wish without limitations. This was all to easy and he would never know what was going to happen until it was too late. The plan was set. Everything would go as normally as it would and was expected. There were about 18 people expected for the gathering. 10 guys and 8 women.


Friday evening came. People started to arrive and all was going very well. Good food good drink and lots of laughter filled the night.
Everything went as planned and the only ones' who knew were the gals. Everyone had taken their turn getting tickled wildly. Only 6 of the gals were both lers and lees...the other two were just ticklers. Out of the 10 guys...7 were switches three were just lers. All had taken their turn as well. The gals were tickled mercilessly as usual buy both the guy and a few of the other girls.
The gals had their way with all of the Lee guys and they too were ruthlessly tickled. All the gals were made to beg and scream for mercy and most if not all eventually surrendered not being able to handle another moment of their tickle torment. A couple of them were able to take more but they had a mission planned and gave up sooner than needed.
While he knew he was being saved for last by the gals.....and he knew they were going to tickle him silly what he did not know what devious evil and totally unmerciful tickle torture that was to be inflicted upon him. He would soon find out.

His time had come. His gf made it known by experience, that he liked the room warm and she knew that a warm room made him more ticklish. He was given a tall glass of the punch they had made for the party/gathering. He was indeed thirsty. Tickling is hard work and all the tickling he had done throughout the evening made him as well as the rest rather thirsty and the punch was tastey and gave everyone a very calm and nice little buzz. It was a very happy group and the gals even happier especially since they knew what they had in store for the poor man.

After he stripped down to just his shorts he was instructed to lie down on the bed face up. Leather cuffs were placed on his ankles, wrists and calves just below his knees and the forearms just above the elbows.
They wanted him in a very secure and tight spread eagle position. His feet hung off the end of the bed and were tied securely to each corner then to the middle of the foot of the bed then two other lengths of rope were tied to the opposite lower sides of the bed and the same was done with his calves so that he could not move his legs or feet in any direction.
The same method of attaching the ropes was used on his wrists and forearms making him unable to get free and he would become totally immoble once one of the gals straddled his waist.
A nice tall ice filled glass of soda was placed on the end table next to the bed. Liquer will dehidrate the body and they did not want that and when thrist set in, they wanted to make sure it was quenched quickly and that he was quite hydrated for the entire session which was planed to last a very long time.
Once he was totally secured to the bed, his gf called the rest of the gals out of the room. He sort of knew what she was up to.....and that was telling them all the secrets and methods to use and how to keep him at the height of ticklishness constantly for the entire ordeal.

In they walked slowly....single file.......taking positions stationing themselves at his ticklish spots.
One sat at the head of the bed readying herself to attack the armpits. The second, straddled his waist convering the sides and ribs real soon. The third kneeling on his left getting ready for the thighs and the hip/pocket. The fourth on his right for the other knee and thigh and other hip pocket. The fifth on his left readying for the left knee and the sixth on his right for the right knee. The seventh and eighth at his bare oh so ticklish bare feet. A blow drier gets turned on to warm the soles after a generous amount of lotion and baby oil was applied to both feet and the hairdrier made them nice and toastyticklish warm and was kept warming them until it was time to tickle them for they had a plan to start things off. They all had big evil smiles on their faces.
The first gal began at the pits. Slowly wiggling her fingers all around and in the hollows of his armpits. Immediatly his steady giggling began as he looked into their grinning faces and bright eyes! Soon those smiling faces and bright eyes, throught HIS eyes will be somewhat out of focus.
After a moment of light tickling in his pits, the tickling increased there to faster somewhat harder tickles sending him into a steady laughter. Light struggles had no effect for he was indeed imobile.
Another minute passed and the tickling stopped in the pits and was taken over by fingers wiggling up and down his ribs and sides. Not so light, as the second gal straddling his hips pretty much dug right in and the steady laughter turned up a notch to a harder laughter. A minute or so passed and fingers were joining in with the ones digging into the ribs back in the pits and now the laughter grew even more yet the struggling was impossible for the binds and the straddling prevented him to do no more than think about struggling.
Another moment or two passed and the tickling stopped for maybe a few seconds when two new set of probing fingers danced and dug into those hip pockets and just above them right on the hips themselves'. Hard loud laughter bellowed out of him. Inside he was bucking but the physical movement didn't show such a movement. He had an idea now of the pattern being followed buy these eight witchy women. A moment or so and in came the first two gals and fingers were joining those on the hips and pits dancing and digging and wiggling on the sides, ribs and pits. "Ohaaaaaahahahahaaaaaaaaaagooaaaaaahahdhdhahahahahahahhasstapahahahahahahithahahahahpleashhhhehseehahhahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa". Feable attempts to pull free or even so much as evade those wicked fingers were all he could do.
Again, a moment or two passed and the tickling stopped. He heard their enjoyment finding out just how ticklish each spot was and how more ticklish he bacame when other spots were tickled while and after another spot was tickled or being tickled. The grins became wide smiles on the girls faces.
"Oh you are sooooooooo gonna suffer little man" said the one straddling his waist. "We are gonna tickle you into insanity" "And then some" added the one at his pits. "The two kneeling on the floor at his bare feet added themselves" "we are gonna tickle torture you for the rest of the night no matter what you say or do, if you know what we mean, little boy"!
He had an idea what they meant by no matter what he says but was stumped somewhat as to what was meant by no matter what he "does". Before he could ponder this thought more, hands and fingers were squeezing and kneeding his thighs and knees. "Aaahahaaaaaaahahahahnoooooohahahahahnhhahahanaonononononaohahahahahahahaaaa" the laughter was ringing out again from him. "Oh god no" he thought briefly to himself. Two minutes or so passed and well, in came the tickling on the hips, pockets, ribs, sides and pits. The laughter was approaching screams and tried as me might to escape and struggle, it did nothing. It was if he were a block of steel on a big flat magnet.
Another pair of minutes, which felt more like half an hour, drifted by and the tickling once again ceased. Heavy gasps for air and composer set in nicely. Too nice. Too quick. His girlfriend who was one of those stationed at his bare, still being warmed nicely and lotioned and oiled, propped her head up and got his attention and told him "we are gonna tickle torture you" "we will break you, chimed in the waist straddler" "and if we don't we will still tickle you into insanity and tickle torture you all night" this rang in buy the gals on his knees and thighs. "Tickled till sunrise" added the other ready at the foot smiling gleefully gal. Before he could even react to that remark, ten fingers were dancing up and down both of his bare very warm very soft, very oiled and lotioned feet. Wales of laughter poured out of him, inside he was struggling like a madman but outside he was moving hardly an inch or two if that much. Up and down the bottoms of his bare feet, from the toes to the heels briskly and intently. His toes scrunched and to stop this reaction the gals tickled both the tops and bottoms of his feet at the same time and this sent him into yet another level of hysteria. Toes flexing back and scrunching back and scrunching. Feet arching and flexing trying to aviod the tickling finters but to no avil. His mind had a flash of a thought and in that flash all the gals joined in tickling their spots and now both feet, pits, ribs, sides, knees, thighs, pockets and hips were being relentlessly tickled at once. Madness flowed within him and tears formed in his eyes. Minutes went by without those tickling fingers missing a single poke stroke or dig. " AAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA..." ! Screaming hysteria engulfed him and the unmerciful tickling continuted.
Several minutes dragged by and the tickling stopped. After he was composed again, he was given a heafty drink much needed.
The tickling resumed back on the feet and in his ribs. Hysteria resumed. The tickling continued for several minutes relentlessly. Each gal taking control of her area with a mind of her own loving every second of his tickling torment and the hard loud hysterical laughter coming out from within their helpless and ticklish victim for the night.
He was going totally wild with mad laughter, each gal tickling their spot without mercy and loving every second, every minute.
Deeper and deeper into hysteria he went really not knowing how serious these gals were about tickling him into the sunrise and into insanity. Again they stopped briefly knowing that this was the way to keep him sensitive but each tickle period lasted a minute or so longer. Severaly minutes turned into several MORE minutes. They would tickle in various intensities. Tickle in pairs and different numbered teams and at times one at a time. They would trade places so each gal had the chance to tickle each spot. The tickling resumed again and again he was engulfed in absolute hysterics. Again they taunted him telling him how much they were going to tickle torture him for the rest of the night that they would pay him back big time for all the tickling he did not only to them but for all the women he tickled in his life and for all the talking and boasting he had done about being unbreakable. Again they mentioned that they would tickle him into insanity and continue to tickle him no matter what he said nor did. Again that part of the taunting haunted him. What did they mean by no matter what he DID?
The tickling continued still. Ribs. Then feet. Then Hips and sides. Then knees, Spot by spot. Two spots. Then three spots then all spots. Maddening tickle torment. Total hysteria. When will this end?


YOU can finish the story. What will happen to him. When will they stop tickling him?
What did they mean by tickling him no matter what he said or DID?
Will he go ticklishly insane?
What happens to him is all up to you!


TTD

here is where TTD stopped his tale, and i begin..

That poor man, let's call him Ed.. was being tickle tortured beyond his endurance. He wondered what they could possibly mean, by saying no matter what he did, they would continue to tickle him into hysteria and madness. The tickling stopped for a minute, and Ed got some much needed air into his lungs. His girlfriend came up to him, smiled at him, and offered him some water. He lifted his head as she held the glass of water to his lips, and smiled as Ed gulped the complete glass empty.

Ed saw her lean into the girl who was still straddling his hips, and whisper something in her ear. That girl in turned smiled a gleefully evil smile, removed her body from his hips, and left the room without a word.

"I do believe you are getting a bit too warm, Ed." his girlfriend then said. "What say we make you more comfortable?"

And with that, another girl handed the girlfriend some scissors, and she proceeded to snip away at his shorts, leaving poor Ed entirely in the nude, and with something which seemed a bit up.

"O lookit girls, Ed seems to be enjoying this torture a bit too much, judging by that reaction." the girlfriend smirked.

All eyes looked at Ed's stiffening and throbbing penis.

"We can't have you loving this, it's not what this night is about" taunted the girlfriend again.

At that moment the girl who had been straddling his hips came back into the room, followed by ten buzzed guys, who were smiling and laughing. When they saw the predicament Ed was in, they began laughing even harder.

"We thought you might like a bit more of an audience to view and witness your downfall and your final breaking and submitting to us" replied his girlfriend.

"Just wait til i get loose." threatened Ed, pulling fruitlessly at his bonds.

"Let the tickling begin again girls, and remember, this time it will be all of us, tickling every vulnerable part of his ticklish body."

And with that, all eight girls began tickling everywhere on Ed's body they could touch. Some of the touches were light, other's harder, but never letting up one bit. Ed thrashed back and forth, shaking his head, pulling and straining at his bonds. Bellowing with laughter and frustration, he tried his hardest to break free, yet couldn't withstand all those flying fingers tickling everywhere. The taunting also continued, with "ah does this tickle? and what's the matter, Ed? Don't you know this will last all night?" All those words only made Ed that much more ticklish.

He then felt fingers tickling lightly around his balls. At that he roared, and tried to buckle up off the bed. That was one place that literally drove him wild, because it tickled past all endurance.

"Girls, we found a really sensitive area, i see" crowed his girlfriend. "Keep that up, and you other girls, tickle him as if your life depended on it."

The ten males, meanwhile, were enjoying this immensely, even adding their own taunts to the general populace. Ed, even through his laughter and yelling, managed to hear them, and it only made the tickling that much worse, knowing his friends were witnessing his humiliation. The tickling around and under his balls was driving him insane, and he had long since lost his erection, as another intense sensation overcame that one. Ed needed to pee. Regretting all the punch he had consumed, and remembering how he had gulped down that glass of water, he knew it would only be a matter of time, before that urge would become very insistent. Ed hoped no one would notice his distress.

But someone did. His girlfriend, who was in tune with all his feelings, could read his face, and knew exactly what was going through Ed's brain. She began tickling around his lower stomach, and pressing hard where his bladder was located. The girl tickling his balls, teased them lightly and began running her fingers brushingly against the head of his limp penis. And all the girls kept up their tickling assault on all the parts of his body, his underarms, hips, sides, legs, and especially those warm oiled feet. When suddenly Ed felt someone actually bouncing up and down on his bladder, he knew he wouldn't last long.

"You bitches," Ed managed to gasp out. "I'm going to pee, quit tickling me now."

Everyone laughed and someone then replied,

"You better not mess up this bed, or it will only get worse for you". taunting and laughing at poor Ed.

"Fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkk" Ed cried out, as a sudden stream of pee came erupting from his bladder.

"Tsk tsk, Ed. That will cost you so much more tickling" said his girlfriend, in a severe tone of voice.

Now Ed had tickled all the girls present into peeing before, and relished that fact, however he had himself never been tickled to the point of urination, and also given the fact that his humiliation was being viewed by ten smirking males, made the situation even that much worse. Straining against his bonds, he yelled out as loudly as he could,

"Just you wait. When i get free, you all will pay".

"Now Ed," purred his girlfriend, stroking his hair, "I wouldn't be threatening anyone in your precarious situation." And with that, she wiped his sweaty brow, and offered him another drink before the tickling would resume.

The tickling continued everywhere on his body throughout the night and into the daylight. Ed lost control of his bladder four more times before the night was over. He didn't want to admit it, but the added humiliation of the males watching his torment was working to break him, a fact that he had never faced before, in all of his tickling career. With some breaks so that Ed could replenish much needed fluid, the tickling never ceased.

As the sun began to rise, Ed finally admitted defeat, after hours and hours of the worst tickling he had ever endured in his lifetime. The fact that the girls knew all his most ticklish places and used it to their advantage and to his downfall had finally done the impossible. Ed was not only drained, exhausted, humiliated beyond belief... but the best part of all... ED WAS BROKEN AT LAST.

isabeau
 
Deadsea7777 said:
You are a Gem Izzy.

aww i am? remember TTD began this wonderful story.. i just hope my finished part met with the way the story was going..thanks Deadsea xoxo
 
isabeau said:
aww i am? remember TTD began this wonderful story.. i just hope my finished part met with the way the story was going..thanks Deadsea xoxo

Yes you are "A gem with a mosquito blonde brain",you :jester: do not really expect me to tell to a man "you are a Gem". For God sake's Blondy!!! :jester: :jester:
 
Deadsea7777 said:
Yes you are "A gem with a mosquito blonde brain",you :jester: do not really expect me to tell to a man "you are a Gem". For God sake's Blondy!!! :jester: :jester:

mosquito blonde brain????? oo just you wait..that might very well be you the next time... :angel: :jester:
 
Excellent story,TTD, and, of course, Izzy. I loved it.
Two things. First, I was wondering if it would be possible to post perhaps an extension of this story, where, instead of the male lee losing control of his bladder, the tickling could instead give him a giant erection, and then, however many female lers, would tickle his private area, and other body areas, until he orgasms with a huge rush. That to me would be incredibly sexy. Of course, there can be a lot of teasing along the way. Just a suggestion.
Second, Izzy, I posted my latest story this afternoon, so please give it a look when you get a chance.
Happy writing. I loved this story. Thanks to you both.

Mitch
 
Mitchell said:
Excellent story,TTD, and, of course, Izzy. I loved it.
Two things. First, I was wondering if it would be possible to post perhaps an extension of this story, where, instead of the male lee losing control of his bladder, the tickling could instead give him a giant erection, and then, however many female lers, would tickle his private area, and other body areas, until he orgasms with a huge rush. That to me would be incredibly sexy. Of course, there can be a lot of teasing along the way. Just a suggestion.
Second, Izzy, I posted my latest story this afternoon, so please give it a look when you get a chance.
Happy writing. I loved this story. Thanks to you both.

Mitch


ahh Mitchell, i had thought about that also.. the giant erection. and that might have been humiliating to him as well, since there were those males present.. but however i heard that men can't cum when they need to pee, and i thought the peeing might be more humiliating.. lol..

ok Mitch, i'll read it tomorrow morning bright and early..

thanks so much for reading this..
 
You're welcome,. and thank you, too. Take care, my friend.

Mitch
 
Okay, I'm not usually into the */M type of stories. But this one was good. It was really descriptive. And I felt for the poor victim. But not too much. I do have to admit, it's nice to see the ladies get some revenge. Considering how many stories feature women in the victim's place, perhaps it's time the tables were turned.

What the hell am I saying?!?!?!?

Seriously, though. Nice story guys. And a pretty seamless collaboration.
 
knight said:
Okay, I'm not usually into the */M type of stories. But this one was good. It was really descriptive. And I felt for the poor victim. But not too much. I do have to admit, it's nice to see the ladies get some revenge. Considering how many stories feature women in the victim's place, perhaps it's time the tables were turned.

What the hell am I saying?!?!?!?

Seriously, though. Nice story guys. And a pretty seamless collaboration.

thanks again knight..although we didn't really collaborate.. he had written the first part some while ago, and wanted a female to finish. i had attempted once, but it wasn't so great.. i hope TTD likes this one. i emailed it to him first. also i based Ed on TTD.. hehe..TTD has never been broken..
 
oh izz , it is to bad i live in pa , you would not do they to me would you?????and i could take it , maybe not for 24 but long enough :firedevil
 
bobtickles said:
oh izz , it is to bad i live in pa , you would not do they to me would you?????and i could take it , maybe not for 24 but long enough :firedevil

would i do that to you? hmm that my dear bobtickles, is something you would just have to find out for yourself.. me, cruel? :angel:
 
Great start by TTD, wicked finish by Isabeau. Izzy, you have one SERIOUSLY evil mind. I hope I never find myself on your bad side (although you don't seem to have a bad side ;) )

*/m ain't my cup o' tea, but it was still a well written story. TTD set 'em up and Isabeau knocked us down ;)
 
nytoetapper said:
Great start by TTD, wicked finish by Isabeau. Izzy, you have one SERIOUSLY evil mind. I hope I never find myself on your bad side (although you don't seem to have a bad side ;) )

*/m ain't my cup o' tea, but it was still a well written story. TTD set 'em up and Isabeau knocked us down ;)

me evil??? hmm hey when revenge is the subject, i can be truly evil...thanks for reading.. i hope TTD reads this soon... i want to know how he likes it. as i said before i emailed him the finished result yesterday, but he is a busy man.
 
This is a fine F/m story, both the beginning by TTD and the end by Isabeau. I love the detailed descriptions. :D
 
milagros317 said:
This is a fine F/m story, both the beginning by TTD and the end by Isabeau. I love the detailed descriptions. :D

thank you my friend.. TTD did start out with a fantastic concept..
 
It took a long time but one HELL of a finish Isabeau, albeit from a wild imagination since no women dare do this to me for real(with or without the audience) whether it be breaking me or tickling me into peeing!
Nevertheless, a fine job indeed capping off my story begining.

Other females are welcome to write alternate endings if they so desire but Melanie, you did very very well indeed! I am proud of ya!


TTD
 
milagros317 said:
This is a fine F/m story, both the beginning by TTD and the end by Isabeau. I love the detailed descriptions. :D


Much thanks Milagros!

TTD
 
Mitchell said:
Excellent story,TTD, and, of course, Izzy. I loved it.
Two things. First, I was wondering if it would be possible to post perhaps an extension of this story, where, instead of the male lee losing control of his bladder, the tickling could instead give him a giant erection, and then, however many female lers, would tickle his private area, and other body areas, until he orgasms with a huge rush. That to me would be incredibly sexy. Of course, there can be a lot of teasing along the way. Just a suggestion.
Second, Izzy, I posted my latest story this afternoon, so please give it a look when you get a chance.
Happy writing. I loved this story. Thanks to you both.

Mitch

Thanks Mitch.......like I said earlier.......other fem lers are welcome to write alternate endings if they so desire. Yikes though, being tickled till orgasm would only make me ions more ticklish and that would be most cruel, especially being tickled by that many women!
 
knight said:
I do have to admit, it's nice to see the ladies get some revenge. Considering how many stories feature women in the victim's place, perhaps it's time the tables were turned.



.


Exactly why I wrote it! Something for the ladies(even though most wouldn't or couldn't be so evil and devious) wussetts as they are! :2poke: :evilha:
 
TickledToDeath said:
It took a long time but one HELL of a finish Isabeau, albeit from a wild imagination since no women dare do this to me for real(with or without the audience) whether it be breaking me or tickling me into peeing!
Nevertheless, a fine job indeed capping off my story begining.

Other females are welcome to write alternate endings if they so desire but Melanie, you did very very well indeed! I am proud of ya!


TTD

thanks Ed. i know i could have gone into more detail and made it longer.. hehe you know what i said.. if you can't be broken in real life, why not in fiction? as i said before, it was a tough road to follow in your footsteps, to try and come up with something to match your fantastic story.. but i tried and hopefully not a bad try at that.. thanks again..
 
TickledToDeath said:
no women dare do this to me for real(with or without the audience) whether it be breaking me or tickling me into peeing!
Nevertheless


TTD
So lucky for that:xpeepsofa
 
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