brian42
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first off, thanks to all who gave me some ideas for stories. i've stored them away in my head to be written someday, but for now, i've began writing a story starring rachel and monica from the tv show friends. i've decided to see what ppl think before i finish writing it, so let me kno what you think.
Rachel started to awake slowly. She tried to reach to rub her eyes, but found she couldn't. She looked and saw her hand was tied above her head to the bedpost. "What..." she muttered. She was still half asleep. As she started to get more awake, she found she was flat on her back with both her hands tied above her head and her ankles were tied to the bedposts too. She fidgeted, but she couldn't get out. "Monica! Phoebe!" She yelled, but nobody came. After about a minute, she saw the bedroom door open, and Monica came in.
"Monica! What's going on?" Rachel asked, starting to feel a bit scared. Monica grinned. "Well, remember when my boyfriend broke up with me because there was someone else? Well I found that that someone else was you." Monica said. It was true. Rachel had stolen Monica's boyfriend a while back, and she felt terrible about it, but she could never admit it. "So what are you going to do to me?" Rachel asked.
"Well, when I last talked to my ex-boyfriend, I asked him about this other person. He said she was great. She was smart, sweet, funny, and had a great laugh. So now, we're going to find out how great of a laugh you really have." Monica said. "What do you mean?" Rachel asked. "Well, are you ticklish at all?" Monica said with a grin. She couldn't help but smile, seeing Rachel stretched out like that, not being able to move at all.
"No..." Rachel said. She had never been good at bluffing. "Well, we'll find out." "No Monica please don't! I'm sorry I stole your boyfriend, but please don't do this!" "It's too late for that now Rachel," Monica said as she pulled a chair up to the foot of the bed. "We'll start with your feet." "N-no not my feet! Please anything but that!" Monica slowly grabbed the sock on Rachels right foot and ever so slowly, started taking it off, while Rachel could only watch in horror. Finally, she pulled the sock all the way off, revealing a small, soft, creamy foot with toenails painted bright red. Monica took one finger and traced it on the bottom of her foot, up and down slowly. "N-n-no please stop," Rachel said, starting to grin. "Oh please. I'm just teasing you," Monica said.
She then took all four of her fingers and began really tickling her foot. Rachel burst out with laughter. "HAHA! PLEASE NO STOP! HAHA I'M BEGGING YOU!" After a minute or two, Monica stopped, and Rachel was already exhausted. "Oh It's not over yet," Monica said, and she began to take off Rachels other sock. "Oh god please no..." Monica skipped the teasing this time and dove right in. She began tickling both her feet mercilessly. "PLEASE THIS IS TORTURE! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!"
This is all i have so far, but if i get good reviews, i'll finish it.
Rachel started to awake slowly. She tried to reach to rub her eyes, but found she couldn't. She looked and saw her hand was tied above her head to the bedpost. "What..." she muttered. She was still half asleep. As she started to get more awake, she found she was flat on her back with both her hands tied above her head and her ankles were tied to the bedposts too. She fidgeted, but she couldn't get out. "Monica! Phoebe!" She yelled, but nobody came. After about a minute, she saw the bedroom door open, and Monica came in.
"Monica! What's going on?" Rachel asked, starting to feel a bit scared. Monica grinned. "Well, remember when my boyfriend broke up with me because there was someone else? Well I found that that someone else was you." Monica said. It was true. Rachel had stolen Monica's boyfriend a while back, and she felt terrible about it, but she could never admit it. "So what are you going to do to me?" Rachel asked.
"Well, when I last talked to my ex-boyfriend, I asked him about this other person. He said she was great. She was smart, sweet, funny, and had a great laugh. So now, we're going to find out how great of a laugh you really have." Monica said. "What do you mean?" Rachel asked. "Well, are you ticklish at all?" Monica said with a grin. She couldn't help but smile, seeing Rachel stretched out like that, not being able to move at all.
"No..." Rachel said. She had never been good at bluffing. "Well, we'll find out." "No Monica please don't! I'm sorry I stole your boyfriend, but please don't do this!" "It's too late for that now Rachel," Monica said as she pulled a chair up to the foot of the bed. "We'll start with your feet." "N-no not my feet! Please anything but that!" Monica slowly grabbed the sock on Rachels right foot and ever so slowly, started taking it off, while Rachel could only watch in horror. Finally, she pulled the sock all the way off, revealing a small, soft, creamy foot with toenails painted bright red. Monica took one finger and traced it on the bottom of her foot, up and down slowly. "N-n-no please stop," Rachel said, starting to grin. "Oh please. I'm just teasing you," Monica said.
She then took all four of her fingers and began really tickling her foot. Rachel burst out with laughter. "HAHA! PLEASE NO STOP! HAHA I'M BEGGING YOU!" After a minute or two, Monica stopped, and Rachel was already exhausted. "Oh It's not over yet," Monica said, and she began to take off Rachels other sock. "Oh god please no..." Monica skipped the teasing this time and dove right in. She began tickling both her feet mercilessly. "PLEASE THIS IS TORTURE! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!"
This is all i have so far, but if i get good reviews, i'll finish it.
