Tickle My Feet!
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I'm sitting on a busy tube train with my legs crossed. Suddenly someone knocks off one of my high heeled shoes, but where its so packed I can't see to put it back ok. All of a sudden someone starts tickling my feet, but I can't see who. Then another pair of hands takes off my other shoe and starts tickling.
Their fingers are just scurrying over my delicate little feet and I'm laughing hysterically and begging them to stop everyone on teh train is looking at me as if I'm crazy.
But the tickling just continues. I miss my stop and people start leaving the train. After about hour of tickling it stops and I assume the people got off the train but they took my shoes with them. So I hobble off the train looking for the people it my shoes, but I find them on the stairs leading out of the station so i slip them on and walk off.
But before long i start laughing to myslef again but I don't know why, so I get a taxi and go home. All the while in the taxi my feet have are being tickled but i cant work out why. Its only when I get in I see that tiny mechanical devices with feathers attached have been fitted inside my shoes tickling my feet all along!
(I know its rubbish but its my first story, so go easy on me
)
Their fingers are just scurrying over my delicate little feet and I'm laughing hysterically and begging them to stop everyone on teh train is looking at me as if I'm crazy.
But the tickling just continues. I miss my stop and people start leaving the train. After about hour of tickling it stops and I assume the people got off the train but they took my shoes with them. So I hobble off the train looking for the people it my shoes, but I find them on the stairs leading out of the station so i slip them on and walk off.
But before long i start laughing to myslef again but I don't know why, so I get a taxi and go home. All the while in the taxi my feet have are being tickled but i cant work out why. Its only when I get in I see that tiny mechanical devices with feathers attached have been fitted inside my shoes tickling my feet all along!
(I know its rubbish but its my first story, so go easy on me
)
It was a cute story. Don't be afraid to write more. 
Relax, take your time, try to expand on how the tickling feels while it's being done to you, what thoughts you're having, what emotions the tickling evoked, all like that, to flesh it out. 
