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Star Wars: The Tickling Menace (1)

Gaius

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[ This is a story I found on a site that isn't around anymore, though I can't remember the name. It's mainly foot tickling, but I wrote a second half myself which is upper body tickling. If you enjoy it, I might post the part I wrote myself. Remember, I did NOT write the following story, so don't give me (too much) credit. ]

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Chapter I: The Trade Federation
"What are we going to do? The queen must sign that treaty or our position will dissolve in the Senate and the Trade Federation will crumple!" exclaimed the frantic counselor.
"I understand our position, " the Viceroy snapped. "We'll give her one more opportunity before resorting to more desperate measures. The problem is that Amidala knows that we can't harm her and her love for her people is great. Insolent child!" he spat after voicing his displeasure. "Send in the Queen!" commanded the Viceroy.
The queen and her hand maidens were ushered in by the droids and brought before the Viceroy. "Queen Amidala, surely you must see the necessity of this treaty. Your people are suffering needlessly, your position on the senate is wavering and you have the power to stop it within your grasp. Why do insist on defying a course of action which can no longer be stopped ?" inquired the Viceroy.
"You assume too much, Viceroy" stated the queen in her flat tone. The Federation had discovered her body double ploy, so she now stood in plain clothes before the towering alien. The adorned queen decoy and other hand maiden stood behind her supportively. "I will never sign your treaty as written, and your Federation trade blockade will be broken once we have a new Supreme Chancellor in the Senate. Your only hope is to release my people and leave Naboo at once. Any other course of action will lead to a needless war that you can not win," coolly stated Queen Amidala.
The Viceroy was visibly angered, but tried to keep his compusure. "Very well. Captain, take these three to Bay #4 in our camand ship and secure them in the Interrogation Room. Also have K' ree Soth report to me at once." ordered the Viceroy. "Roger, Roger," replied the droid and escorted the three young ladies as ordered
Chapter II: K'ree Soth cometh
K' ree Soth entered the Interrogation Room about thirty minutes later. She was a sinister looking woman with sharp features, long raven-colored hair and dressed in outworld garb which was also a deep black. Most noticeable were her long, chrome-plated fingernails. " I have spoken to the Viceroy and he needs the treaty to be signed. I will employ whatever means necessary in order to accomplish my task. I suggest that you cooperate and save yourselvess any unnecessary stress and suffering," stated the dark lady. Her demeanor remained indifferent as she looked over the bound captives.
Queen Amidala unimpressed by her interogator replied, "You will not harm me, K'ree Soth. Your fear of Republic's retaliation is too great. My hand maidens are the most loyal in the galaxy and they will not be broken no matter what sort of tactics you employ. Therefore, if you will please spare us the imminent torture rhetoric." K'ree Soth unmoved by the Queen's reply continued her discussion of future misfortune, "Very confident, young queen. I like that. But you see, I don't like to resort to painful torture techniques ----they are too barbaric....too messy. I have my own little method which I hope you will appreciate." At that moment, K'ree Soth turned to the guards and gave them some orders: "Captain, secure the hand maidens in the suspension field by their ankles and bind Queen Amidala to that chair so that she can have a front row seat for the show." The droid replied, "Roger, roger." The decoy, who was still wearing the ornate white ceremonial robes and headdress was brought over to one of the three large tables and set down. The droid then fetched four alloy anklets and secured two of them on the maiden's ankles just above the rim of her white leather boots. The Captain of the droids then brought over the second girl, dressed plainly in crimson- orange robes, and attached the second set of anklets to her. The droid stepped away and hit a switch on the nearby column, sending a "whirr and crackle" throught the room as a five foot high energy field appeared at the end of the two tables. The field was transparent and glowed a dull blue; it encircled the anklets on the two maidens.
Pleased with the technology, K'ree Soth remarked," This is quite ingenious. Captain, untie the two girls. You see, your friends can lie on the table, unbound and comfortable, while their ankles are immobilized in this field. You can see and hear through this field, but cannot penetrate it unless you have these special conductors, " she pounded her hand against the unwavering force field and then motioned to the anklets.
The queen looked on as she was bound to a chair facing the two pair of feet sticking out from the force field. She watched her two most trusted hand maidens and friends struggle against the field and try, in vain, to escape their plight. They pounded their fists against the field, bent their knees and twisted their bodies, but nothing helped.
K'ree Soth pulled up a stool and set it next to the two struggling feet of the decoy. "Very clever using an identical decoy adorned in the ceremonial dress, while you secretly run the capital froma servant's robes behind the scenes." She slipped oof the girl's boot revealing a white stocking-clad foot underneath. "I wonder how close you are to this girl. Perhaps we shall soon see," and the black clad woman drug one chrome nail along the instep of the girl's helpless foot.
"Eeep!" exclaimed the girl as her toes curled reflexively. But she quickly regained her composure and shrugged off the attack. The woman repated the maneuver and the maiden clenched her teeth. "Valiant effort young maiden, but I've been doing this far too long to be fooled. You are going to be a delicious victim and the white stockings are going to magnify your experience by ten fold. " stated K'ree Soth. Upon completion of her sentence, K'ree Soth wildly scratched all five fingers up and down the maiden's foot concentrating on the girl's sensitive instep.
The girl exploded into laughter and began to pound on the table frantically. "Haaa haa aaah ha ha haaa haa haaaa! Ha ha haaa haaa ah aha ha ha ha ha haaaa ----S--st----STOOOOP! ha ha haa ha ha ha haa ahhhhhhh n-nooooooo he heeee ha ha haaaaaa ha haaaaa." laughed the Queen's decoy.
After a few minutes the woman stopped her assault and let the captive catch her breath. She was slick with sweat, and her once perfect headdress and hair were wild and disheveled. "Outstanding performance, don't you think Amidala ? I wonder how ticklish she is around those cute little toes," and she grabbed the maiden's digits, held them back and attacked the ball of her foot with the chrome-plated claws. Amidala looked on with aversion as her confidante wildly flung her arms and screamed in hysterical laughter.
"Waaa ha ha ha ha haaa ha ha ha haaaa ahhhhhh ha ha haaaaa haaa!! Not my toessss heeeeeeeee ha ha ha ha ha haaa ha ha (cough) (cough) ha ha ha ha Pleeeee (cough) ....pleease stop ahhh ha ha !" The torturer had found the girl's most ticklish spot and would concentrate her efforts there until either the Queen broke down and signed the treaty or her victim passed out. K'ree Soth felt both fortunate and excited that the first girl turned out to be so ticklish on her feet and continued to rake her nails across her sensitive flesh. "Kootchie kootchie koo. Tickle, tickle young maiden. Would you like to try it Amidala ? By not signing the treaty you are in essence, tickling her feet. Hmm, what sensitive little toes - perhaps I should inspect them more closely" K'ree Soth punctured one nail through the toe of the stocking and tore the fabric down to reveal her well manicured wiggling toes beneath; each toenail was painted perfectly in pink. "They look so yummy - maybe even good enough to eat." The woman in black then leaned down and began to lick and gnaw on the girl's susceptible toes and the ball of her foot. Her tongue slid in and out of her toes, while her teeth nibbled on the most ticklish areas of her foot.
This sent the servant into a frenzy of laughter and struggling. Amidala didn't think that the young girl could react any more violently than before, but K'ree Soth had obviously proven her wrong. Her cries were now barely coherent as the woman continued the assault on her bare toes. "Waaaa haha haaa ha ha ha ha! Ha! ha ha ha ha ha ha....Y---y---your majesty! P...p...please make her s---st--st--stop. Ha ha ha haaa ha haa ha! Waaa ahhhh ahhhhh ha ha ha ! I'll do anything...ha ha ha ! Noo no more....please make it stop.! Ha ha ha ha!" The other maiden looked on with horror as her friend screamed and bucked uncontrollably. She was literally going mad from the woman's torture and it had only been about ten minutes. With dread she wondered when she would have her turn.
"O-Kay, enough!" shouted Amidala, "let the poor girl catch her breath. I'll review this treaty of yours." Anything to buy time thought the Queen, and give her maiden a much needed break. She was soaked with sweat from struggling, and frothed at the mouth from the uncontrollable laughter.
Chapter III: The Attack of the Waardins
When K'ree finally stopped the girl, the girl could only whimper and continue to giggle from the ordeal and collapse on the table from exhaustion. "Certainly, young queen," and motioned or the droid to retrieve the document from a nearby table.and bring it over to the bound leader. "Untie one of her hands, but watch her closely!" The droid did as directed."And while you look over the treaty, I'm going to introduce myself to myself to this other young maiden of yours. My, they do resemble you don't they ?" The torturer slid her stool over to the other pair of bound feet and began to slip off the left boot. "What are the odds that our friend here is as ticklish as the other one ? I'd say one in a thousand, but I'm hopeful." She let the boot fall to floor with a thud and admired her socked foot. "This one certainly has bigger feet - I'd say about 10 1/2 - am I right? What size are your feet, young queen ? " She didn't wait for a response and slipped off the girl's sock. K'ree looked up at the bound girl. She was much younger and looked at K'ree's actions with absolute dire. The fear in her eyes told K'ree that for this servant's anticipation of being tickled would be almost as bad as the actual torture. She would play this one out very dramatically and have some fun with her prisoner.
Amidala could also see the girl's look of complete terror at the prospect of being subjected to the same maddening fate of her friend. "Why don't you just leave her be for a moment while I read this. I may decide to sign it and there would be no need to subject her to it all." She doubted that her ploy would work, but it was worth a shot and save her friend the anguish of being insanely tickled.
The sadistic woman thought for a moment and then responded in a friendly tone, "Perhaps you're right. I'll prepare a special treat for this young lovely here; if you sign the treaty then we'll simply let her go. If you don't, then I'll initiate the torture." She looked at the bound girl and winked, "Oh you'll love this. It's a real treat for the tootsies." She got up and walked over to one of the many cabinets in the room and opened it up - looking for something special.
Amidala feigned to read the treaty, although she had no intention oof signing it. She was trying to stall for as long as she could, although she knew that no one could save them. The Queen tried to tell herself that watching this woman mercilessly tickle the feet of her lifelong friends was miserable, but she couldn't deny a certain swelling in her groin as she watched the maiden scream in laughter and writhe all over the table in ticklish agony. In fact she almost enjoyed watching K'ree Soth's mouth suckle and tease the decoy's bound feet. Amidala tried to stop thinking about it and silently wondered whether she could endure K'ree Soth's tickle torture. Queen Amidala had always been extremely ticklish on the bottoms of her feet and would have been screaming as loud as her decoy maident if she were put through that type of torture.
K'ree Soth returned to the foot of the table with a pouch and shook the Queen from her thoughts. "Now I'm going to applly this dust to the bottoms of your foot. So I hope that you're not ticklish." She withdrew a a soft brislted brush from the pouch and bean to generously apply the golden dust to the girl's bare foot.
The maiden tried desperately to remain stoic, but the swirling bristles of the brush teased her very sensitive feet. "You know," K'ree cooed, "perhaps we should put this on both feet." K'ree then removed the other maiden's other boot and sock before applying the dust to both soles.
Hee hee heh he he eeee he heee," giggled the girl as the brush danced along the arches of her feet. She knew that if K'ree Soth found out how ticklish her arches were then she was finished. Unfortunately she couldn't suppress her laughter as the woman brushed the dust on her large soles.
The torturer smiled to herself with satisfaction. The girl's arches were insanely ticklish, and this was perfect for what she had in mind. "How's that treaty looking, young queen ? I'm almost done with part one of our little torture."
Amidalla tried to stall for more time, "There are a very few items that I have questions about. Perhaps I could talk to the Viceroy about them before I sign." It was a weak ploy but she could not think of anything else. "Certianly. Just let me set everything up for your friend here - can't have my boss coming down here and thinking that I'm going to be easy on you girls." She walked over into the adjourning room.
"My Queen " whimpered the maiden, "What is she going to do to me ? Forgive my weakness, but I can not take such a tickling."
"I know, Arielle. Be strong - I'll try to figure something out." The queen could hardly sound confident, but tried to work her other hand free as she spoke. Guard droids weren't very perceptive, so maybe she had a chance. If she could just get her hands free and grab the droid's blaster. "Found them," announced K'ree Soth happily from the other room. She emerged holding a small cage with three cat-like creatures in it. "These are Waardins - almost identical to the old earth cats. What is unique about them is that they have an insatiable desire for Durian honey dust. Almost comical to watch, really. They love the taste of the dust and will go crazy to have it. She grabbed a small table on her way to the prisoner and slid it up to her dust coated feet. K'ree then set the cage on the table and stood back to admire her pets. "Look at them - they can already smell the sweet nectar." The small animals became visibly excited and began to extend their paws through the bars to get the treasure. "Now I'll just open the cage door and send for the Viceroy"
"oh God please don't let them out," begged the girl as she struggled violently to free her trapped feet. "I'll go insane !" The woman in black was very pleased with the girl's outburst and decided to toy with her some more, "I hear that it's almost pleasant sensation. Their paws are very soft, while their tongues are coated with fine hair which creates an interesting feeling on sensitive arches (K'ree emphasized the word arches). This sent a look of terror across the girl's face and she began to struggle eben harder. "I'll let one out so that you can have a little taste." She opened the door and pulled out the small brown animal. K'ree set her pet down on the table in front of the girl's feet. It began to playfully paw at the dust on her soles.
"Hee hee heee he, t---that tickles. Hee hee heeee, cut it out!" Heee eeee!" "Oh he's just playing. Once he gets a taste of the honey from his paws, the fun will really begin. The small furry creature did exactly that and began to lick the girl's helpless feet. "Haa ha haaa ha haaa haaa haa ahhh ahh aaaaaaaah ! S---Sstop....Ahhhh ha ha ha.....it tickless! it tickles AHHHHHHHHH! ....(silence) Ha haa ha haa. Arielle tried to curl and flex her toes and cover one foot with the other, but nothing helped. The animal's torturous tongue glided up and down her ticklish soles relentlessly. "Haaa ha ha ha ha ha....cough....please ...cough...cough please Amidala.....ha ha ha (silence) Amidala....ha ha ha ha haa. No more....ha hah haaa! " Amidala looked on with great interest as her friend's large feet twisted and struggled against the tiny animal's attack. "Ooooh Oooohh hee hee heee haa ha ha ha ha ha hah....NOOO NOO not there ha ha ha ha !
"How's that treaty coming along Queen. You seem distracted --- this may hasten your decision. " K'ree then released the other two animals. They quickly joined their friend and a frenzy ensued. Their pays and tongues began to shuffled and cover every inch of her exposed feet.
"Waaaa ha ha ha ha ha aaaaaahhhhh! Get them off! Haa! ha! haaaa aaaaaah aha ah haaaa! Ha! M-make them stop! " Arielle was bucking and thrusting her body against the table and force field, but neither gave an inch. Her laughter echoed throughout the small room as the torture continued. Amidala was mortified that she found herself sexually excited while watching the odd sight. Pleasee ahhhhh please aaahhh sign it....sign it ha ha ha " Queen Amidala looked on as her maiden's torture continued, still trying to work her other hand loose from the bonds that held her to the chair.
Arielle was now soaked with sweat and felt dizzy. The furry animals continued to attack her ticklish peds. Her cries were incoherent as she pleaded with the woman to pull the creatures away from her feet. After almost fifteen minutes K'ree Soth collected her pets and put them back in the cage. "Well," she expressed dramatically, "that was quite interesting. I can't wait for round two. That is unless the Queen would like to sign the treaty. " She looked over to the bound monarch.
Amidala looked at her maidens in agony, then firmed her resolve and spoke in her flat command voice, "I can not sign this treaty, K'ree Soth. It ails me to see my maidens tortured so, but I must consider the millions of citizens who will suffer if I cave into your persecution. Tell the viceroy that he is wasting his time.
The woman looked at the Queen squarely for a long moment, then proceeded to say, "Perhaps, your resolve will not be as strong when you are lying on the table. Captain, secure the queen to the last table so that her hands are over her head and her feet are secured hanging over the edge." The droid did as directed, and although Amidala struggled, she could not overpower the strong machine. In minutes, she was bound helpless to the table.
In the meantime, I shall take care of your friends. She withdrew her pouch of honey dust and dumped it generously all over the Arielle's bare feet. K'ree Soth then slid over to the other maiden and slipped off her other boot. She tore away the white stocking to match the first, and applied the contents of the pouch to her bare feet. Once complete, she picked up the girls' leather boots and slipped them back onto the maiden''s wiggling feet. "I applied some Gervarian dust to your feet - it will start to tingle in a few minutes. Then it will become more and more intense until it causes a relentless itching/tingling sensation along the soles of your feet. It has been known to drive women into complete madness. When you beg me to itch the bottoms of your feet, I will do so with every one of my long fingernails and drive you even deeper into misery. And for you Arielle, I will let your little Waardin friends tickle your feet until all of the dust is gone. K'ree then opened the cage releasing the Waardins. Ariele screamed uncontrollably. The decoy stared wildly as her feet began to tingle. "Oh God....no noooo ha ha ha ha ha ha please wipe it off ha ha ha ha"
K'ree Soth ignored the girls' pitiful request and focused her attention on the bound Queen laying before her. Although the other maidens resembled her, Amidala had a strong mixture of youth and power which made her beauty intoxicating. Even through her simple clothes it was obvious that she possessed a perfect figure. "Where should I begin, Amidala? Normally I would take hours of exploration on a subject such as you to find your most ticklish spot, but I'm a bit pressed for time. Perhaps you could save me some time and yourself some agony by telling where your most ticklish spot is. Hmmm?”
 
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Cool! Star Wars stories are few and far-between. I'd love to see what you've written for the next part.:cool:
 
hm...

I know who wrote this...is anyone familar with DC soles. somethign like that. www.swtickle.com has that link to more of his stories, but it's dead. This is the bomb......thanx u gaius for finding it!!!
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The second half will be posted around Thursday, maybe sooner if I get more positive feedback..

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By all means...

I remember reading this story before. It was a great story, but I was disappointed that Amidala never got it. By all means, post your sequel. I'm sure it will rock.
 
I had some pictures up, but they don't seem to be working anymore.. anyone know why that might be?
 
Great story. This is one of my favorite stories. Great job.
 
I'm trying to think of a topic for another story. Any ideas?
 
great

Great story. :)
Ever thought about writing SW stories in the other SW eras?
 
i could always do that, u know :p:p:p:p Does ANYBODY look at my sig?! XD
 
Good Star Wars Story!

Nice!

Done very well!

I remember seeing that story once at another website as well. Can't remember the name though.

It was "a long time ago in a galaxy far far away". lol

Happy HA HAs!
 
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