Dancing On the Edge of Insanity

[theObsessed1]

nowehte;alhjgw'[iu

[theObsessed1]

wpeitghasdf'g

[spareme]

I liked your style. it had a "Turn of the Screw" literary sense to it. Insane or not who knows? You are new I see, I am too, maybe regular members don't want to bombard you at first. Be optomistic, I don't have to say be free, I see that you are. Great start continue!

[milagros317]

Wow! Nearly 200 people have read the story? But, nobody replied. :illogical Does that mean you don't want to read more or that you just didn't respond? Inquiring minds want to know.




Don't read too much into that. This is one of my earliest stories, a nonfiction account of a tickling and BDSM session with Mistress Zara. It has over 46,000 views and only 2 responses. Moreover, the two who responded where Mistress Zara and me. So nobody who wasn't in the story responded. I have no idea why, but I'm happy that over forty thousand people read my story.

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=12717

PS:
I liked your story and would like to see it continued.

[theObsessed1]

Thanks fellas. Continue I shall.

[theniteavenger]

i think its awesome and made me question my reasons? :illogical

[sensitivegirl]

When I write I write to empty my soul, to make the thoughts come alive, to give life to my fantasies. I have to say that your descriptions are so vivid and that I totally relate to what you are saying. As a woman always in control, in business, in my home, in raising my child, as someone who has a need to put in her two cents whether asked for or not, I also cannot understand my burning desire to be totally helpless at the hands of my "LER". Some of the things you wrote were so dead on to my thoughts and feelings that I felt as if I was reading one of my own. What is it about a man with total power over us, exploiting our body's natural weaknesses, leaving us a giggling, begging mess somewhere over Pluto that is so darn appealing? When you find out , please let me know...although I hope I never do know. Its just too wonderful and mind altering to explain. And your line about tickling being better than sex, I don't know if I'd call it better, but I'd call it more powerful, at least for people like us. Sex is the easiest commodity on Earth to find. Good sex, a bit harder, and great sex, the elusive brass ring. But a man who lives to break you, to own you, to make you go places you can't go from sex alone, that is someone I treasure.

Please keep your fine works coming.

[isabeau]

don't worry about people reading and not responding..most of the members here are lurkers, meaning they never post..i say please do continue..fantastic and original concept..i want to see where this all leads..you have a great talent for getting into the head of your reader..

[theObsessed1]

:woot: sagkh

[theObsessed1]

(continued from above)

[theObsessed1]

I'm not certain if I'll have time to write any more this week. Next week, I'll be gone all week for a training seminar. So, it may be a bit before I post more.

[Wally West]

Cool story.

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, hon. Stick around. More to come. Same tickle time, same tickle channel.

[isabeau]

rats you stopped at a very interesting place..so far it's terrific..i don't want to say too much on the forum, i'll pm you..but you write how many feel.

[theObsessed1]

dsag;oiyha

[Spenser]

Magnificent!

A masterpiece. The best tickling tale I have --ever-- read.

Spenser


[ "... would you rather be sick in a sane society, or sane in a sick society."
.... Dr. Abraham Maslow ]

[TickleSlaveinTn]

Very unique story angle! Quite entertaining. Just wish I could meet a girl like her in real life--minus the losing control of car incident, haha.

[Tickling_bully]

Your Obsession is serving you well....so much passion and keen observation ...such a wonderfully expressed hate/fear/love/craving....this window to your sould has a lovely view...

write more (we have ways of making you comply)
Chris

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, hon!

[ShadowTklr]

It isn't often that someone makes an attempt to understand, let alone be understood. I think you've made both cases very well.

As someone who is also a VERY deep thinker, I truly appreciated your revelations and even more, your ability to convey some interesting and complicated thoughts through your writing. I will look forward to your return and continuation in upcoming weeks.

[theObsessed1]

ads;goh

[Mitchell]

I just read both parts. Very good story, Hazel. Thanks. I look forward to reading more when you get the chance, oh, and great siggy picture too, very sexy.

Mitch

[Ace Riley]

I didn't think anyone would ever write a story like this.

I love this.

I simply love this form of writing. The whispers of the mind. The way you delve into feeling. I love to write like this myself, just, let the imagination go... expression, not neccesarily write to entertain but to FEEL, that which is so hard to feel on a daily basis.

Nobody ever gets a chance to truly open up when they go to work, come home, go to sleep, wake up, go to work, like I do. The daily grind, where even if you have an open social atmosphere in your life, you rarely truly express yourself.

Writing is a way to do this, but so often it feels to me like a chore. Like I have a duty to entertain and write in a format that others would find exciting or appreciable. It's less of a freedom then, and more of a restriction. Why write then?

Yet here I see someone doing that which I yearn to do. The format, the character and the way your words flow make me want to think, and dive into my own maelstrom of imagination. I find my thoughts wandering when I read this, imagining my own dark scenarios, how I wish to share them much like this. You've taken me places with this story.

You've made my day. You really have.

[Ace Riley]

I replied in the first post. I just couldn't wait anymore to click on the continuation to post here.

You've simply dazzled me. Much like I'm sure plenty of others.

As Isa said, this touches base with people in a way some stories just can't.

There is an incessant frustration in all of us. Those of us who write these stories, and many of us who read them, feel or have felt it in their lives.

Thank you, for taking the time to weave these feelings into words. They are echoed in the imaginations of those who take the time to listen.

Truly your captive audience,
Ace

[cloudgazer2k]

to be honest...i was unsure what to think. the way the story is put together reminded me of "The House of Leaves" in terms of the way the story was told. i do have to admit, though...i am intrigued and will have to put off reading part 2 until later...but i am very much impressed with this.

p.s.: do me a favor and drop me a line when you have a moment. i sense a possible collaboration in the future.

[theObsessed1]

adsg'ijh.

[theObsessed1]

as'd;gpius[e0r9tu

[theObsessed1]

sad;ogiyuag

[theObsessed1]

asdgo'iha

[isabeau]

wow super fantastic..so very well-written, and with a plot..i'm not sure about you, but teeth can tickle the soles of the feet extremely badly..lol..but please don't tell me this is the end? who was that Santa? could it have been the doctor? i must know...i demand it lolol...

keep up the good work..

[slap'n'ticklee]

My God Hazel you are a fantastic writer. I have now read all Parts to this amazing story and everyone's comments.

I was spellbound reading this and like everyone here I really look forward to reading more.

You are very talented in drawing the reader in... I love that style. :xpulcy:

:firedevil

[theObsessed1]

sag'pihbj

[cloudgazer2k]

great work, hazel. this is something you have thought about for awhile.

[theObsessed1]

this is something you have thought about for awhile.

Only my entire life! Glad you're enjoying it. :Kiss1:

[AffectionateDan]

OutSTANDing read! Best writing I've read in here in a long while!

[theObsessed1]

Wow! Thanks, hon!

[theObsessed1]

sagopjzv'Kn

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[isabeau]

hmm well for one thing..wow were there surprises in this installment..first of all, Hank isn't real???? second of all, they are giving her meds to prevent her from feeling sensations? and last but not least, she was married? and he said he would wait? and didn't? what a creep...hmm i think she should escape and have further torments down the road..ok what am i saying? am i a sadistic bitch? she has been through so much, i'm not sure she should have to be put through anymore..

excellent installment..love this concept..talk about originality..o and hon..sorry about you being sick..get well soon...

[theObsessed1]

asgiphbh

[slap'n'ticklee]

Well I've been drawn in again, excellent work Hazel :p

I love the uncertainty and the surprises with the story's twists and turns... for me I love the unexpected, I shall wait and read what the next instalment shall bring :firedevil

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :bubble:

[theObsessed1]

Part 5 will be up either later tonight or tomorrow, just to give people a heads up. :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

a'hoihzvc

[isabeau]

damn that girl gets tickling no matter where she is..imagine escaping and running into video makes, who are making tickle videos..sort of a dream come true..hmm and poor Hank..i mean if Hank is real, that is..this series just gets better and better..fantastic job...keeps me wondering what on earth is in store for her next..

[theObsessed1]

:blaugh:

[slap'n'ticklee]

Aw I'm with Mel poor Hank (if he exists lol ;))

I think I'm going insane reading this... its taking me in deeper and deeper... love reading this epic.... love to see what happens next and if she does escape or if she loves it that much, does she stay and be their tickle slave for ever more and acting in the videos hehe!

[theObsessed1]

:wavingguy

[theObsessed1]

ahbfhivpz '/n

[liero]

i like the story (have read em all)

[theObsessed1]

Thanks hon! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[siamese dream]

This is a great story...I'm late getting to read it :D but wow, you really created something very different and interesting... and in the 1st person, I find that's a difficult angle to write from. Unique and excellent idea, you're nominated for a golden feather for this and I think it's very much deserved!

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

ab'opijh

[isabeau]

wowow if i hadn't decided to scroll through the posts on this thread i would never have known that the chapters have been combined..hmm wonder who that voice belongs to? is it her imagination? is it real? she can't seem to escape being tickled no matter what..fantastic installment..good luck with the nomination..you definitely have my vote..

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[Iluv2Btickled]

I like it. continue please :)

[theObsessed1]

For anyone who'd like to read the story uninterrupted, I've created a page where you can do that. Just go HERE. (http://home.comcast.net/~hazeljenks/Dancing.html)

[Strider]

The psychological aspect of this is absolutely fucking fascinating. Just wanted to point that out.

[Sunjob]

Great story. A complete mindfuck but in a good way.

Think that last chapter was my favourite.

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, fellas! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :bubble:

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

afbiho'/

[isabeau]

well damn..now who does that voice belong to????? and now she can feel the tickling as well? wowow..this story just gets more interesting and interestinger..lol to quote from Alice..curious and curiouser...love it so far..you are a fantastic writer..

[theObsessed1]

Thanks, hon. Glad you're continuing to enjoy it.

[theObsessed1]

asd'giphnz/l

[liero]

it was very good ...as always

[theObsessed1]

hehe :manicd:

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

afbpijnADZ

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[isabeau]

nooooooooooooooooooooooo it can't have been a dream damn it...lolol..crap poor thing..excellent installment...you never fail to amaze me with your creative imagination..

[theObsessed1]

:evilha:

[theObsessed1]

asdg'iphaDZ

[theObsessed1]

afbcviohb/an

[theObsessed1]

af'bvihbbn

[isabeau]

I had a dream the other night that this story was made into a movie. In it, Drew Barrymore played Hazel, with Robin Williams as the doctor and Chris Noth as Hank. I wonder what the possibility of that would be! lol

I thought the dream presented an opportunity for a fun game of sorts as I wrap up this portion of our tale. Who would YOU cast as the characters of the story…either as these three or any of the other characters? Tell us who and why. But, there’s a little catch. They have to be people who’ve proven themselves open to tickling.

So.... Anyone care to offer any suggestions?

cool dream..hmm as Hazel, i see Keira Knightley...as the doctor, Sean Bean..Hank would be well i don't care. lol..that ass hole that traitor..that creep...wowowowowowowow i had no idea you added and then finished this o so excellent story..damn girl, you put me to shame..i can't write anything nearly that original or fascinating. you have such a talent for this..

on second thought the doctor could be John Hurt...and Sean Bean as Hank...

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

:Kiss1:

[theObsessed1]

:upsidedow

[theObsessed1]

;) asdoig

[tickish_f_23]

Awesome story, I really enjoyed reading it.:)

[theObsessed1]

:upsidedow

[PokeyinMich]

theObsessed1, I finally got enough time to sit down and read thru your story. Very amazing bit of writing! I enjoyed reading it and the imagination you displayed thru the story. Thank you for sharing it and taking the time to write it. :wavingguy I shall move on to the next one very soon. :woot:

[theObsessed1]

Hazel :Kiss1: