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Hostel 2(Scene we’d LOVE to see)

Sadistickler1

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Hostel 2(Scene we’d LOVE to see)
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Sadistickler



Opening scene, we see a gorgeous blonde walking through the lobby. She’s Tall, about 5’9”, slim, nice hips and round butt that we all love, long lean legs wearing tight jeans that hug every curve. She’s wearing a tank top with open back, showing her golden tan beneath her golden mound of cascading hair halfway down her back. Her shoes are open toed Candie’s, red leather with a 4-inch heel that shows her perfect, straight toes with freshly pedicured toes and bright pink polish.
Her name is Suzan Wright. She’s an American College student touring Europe for the summer while on break from school.
You watch her smiling and laughing with other kids as she lounges on the couch in the lobby. Then the camera pans left to see a couple other girls with sly grins on their faces as they walk up to her and start talking.
Then all three girls walk out the door and get into a cab and the screen fades to black.
Scene slowly fades in and you hear screaming laughter as the scene brightens.
In a darkened room there is only an overhead bulb hanging over the center of the room bathing the victim in light.
The blonde American College student is tied completely naked with shackles on each wrist and ankle. Large chains are welded to each chain and are stretched tightly in 4 different directions. Suzan is pulled tightly in a spread eagle and is completely suspended in the air 4 feet off of the dingy floor.
There are 5 other people in the room with her. 4 German dominatrixes decked out in leather corsettes, black hose and black high heels., and one old man with frumpy hair, no teeth and dirty clothes. He looks a complete mess.
There are two dominatrixes standing over her one on each side, another one sitting in a chair at her left foot, and the other Dominatrix is sitting in a chair between Suzan’s legs. The old man is sitting in a chair at her right foot.
The girl on Suzan’s left side bends down and starts sucking her nipple while fluttering her fingers of her right hand in Suzan’s left armpit. While her left hand is kneading her ribs. The girl on the right is doing the same to Suzan’s right side. The girl sitting at Suzan’s crotch is busy with her face buried in Suzan’s womanhood while crab tickling the insides of her thighs roughly.
The girl sitting at Suzan’s left foot is licking, sucking and nibbling on Suzan’s toes with reckless abandon as her fingernails scratch up and down the ball of her foot. Now, the old man sitting at Suzan’s right foot is busy scratching his dirty fingernails up and down her sole from heel to toe viciously and laughing to himself with glee.
Suzan is beside herself with agony. She laughs and screams loud, causing her whole body to shudder and the chains rattle as she struggles to get away from the torment. Her head hangs down and her lovely hair is almost touching the floor as she screams in agony. As the tickling of her whole body progresses, she whips her head around shaking it trying to do ANYTHING to stop this incessant torture. She begs, pleading with her captors to stop She promises them anything, money, and sex, anything they want if they would only stop the tickling torture. They ignore her of course and continue, all smiling evilly as they enjoy hearing her screams and laughter. One girl says in German, “Silly American girls are sooo pampered, so spoiled, this must really be driving her Insane. They not used to such rough treatment, even a simple thing as tickling makes her feel agony. Listen to her, she hysterical already and we just start. Let us really give her vicious tickles. We only have 8 hours or so to do this before she finished.” All the girls laugh and escalate their torturous ministrations to an even higher degree.
The girls at her sides stop sucking her nipples and dig into her ribs rubbing up and down fast and furiously. The girl on her right starts pouring some sort of oil, like baby oil all over Suzan’s upper body. Then continues digging into the ribs on her side with a vengeance.
The girl on her left foot starts biting and nibbling the sole, covering every inch of Suzan’s pampered soft sole with nibbles as she rakes her nails up and down the soles viciously.
The girl at Suzan’s crotch stands up and rubs Suzan’s clit back and forth with two fingers very fast making Suzan scream no in a high pitched squeal.
The old man at Suzan’s right foot holds her chained foot under his arm and scratches up and down her sole quickly and methodically as a dog would scratch nonstop at fleas.
Suzan’s agony is very apparent. She flails and shakes as much as the tight chains would allow, which isn’t much since she is stretched out so very tight.
Then the camera shows a close up of some sort of old and rusty mechanical ratchet system. You see the ratchet flip up 2 more cogs and hear Suzan’s blood curdling scream from a distance.
Basically what is happening is this.... The ratcheting system is hooked to the chains and every 15 minutes it clicks up 2 notches and tightens the chains 1/4 of an inch. so after a certain period of time, Suzan will basically be drawn and quartered by the ever-tightening chains. During this time though, the German Dominatrixes will tickle torture poor Suzan and keep her on the verge of orgasm at the same time. Soon, her struggles will lead to muscle fatigue, the joints will pop and pull loose, the tendons will stretch and separate from the muscle and surrounding tissue, bones will pull apart, and all of this will be agonizingly painful as well as her nerves dealing with all the tickling and sexual tension.
Best guestimation, is she could be stretched about 4-6 inches before the arms and legs completely separate from the torso. So the whole torture would probably last 8-10 hours before she snapped and bled out.
(Author’s note... I do not advocate death and this type of torture, but this story goes along with what the premise of the Hostel movie is all about. People paying to torture some one to death. And usually it is in a slow painful sick twisted way. Hence the drawn and quartered part of the scene. I think it would probably take a couple of days to completely tickle torture a person to death if it is even possible. Don’t judge me until you know me. I write true and fictional stories to entertain fantasy. I’m not really this cruel and mean. (except when it comes to tickling itself. LOL!)Hope you enjoy MY version of what Hollywood would be too afraid to film.
 
Wow, great little story, and a great idea for a scene. We should really try to pitch this to them, lol. The actual tickle torturing someone to death wouldn't work but this one could actually work with the movie as it's slow, painful, tortorous death.
 
Tickling wouldn't work as a main dish in a movie like Hostel, but would make a sick side dish in a scene where pain is in contrast with tickling.

Such as electric play, or bastinado. If the torture is that which would cause pain, and then alternatively she is forced to laugh through tickling, this would be a squeamish situation indeed. Especially for an audience, who by now is used to scenes of torture of the Saw/Hostel variety.

I have seen girls crying who are forced to laugh by tickling. This in itself is cruel, but it's an interesting phenominon. Forced to react in laughter at the premise of suffering. It's what makes the concept of 'tickle torture', a myserious experience to all. Some may enjoy tickling, but tickling in itself is not an 'enjoyable' sensation.

We are all masochistic and sadistic to a degree. To enjoy tickling is to enjoy an alternative form of pain in itself.
 
YOU TOTALLY COULD HAVE STOPPED WITH THE RATCHETS!
awesome idea though, dialogue needs a little work though!
sweet :witchy: post!
 
Interesting,and really good story. It would be kool to watch it on the movie.:wahooo:
 
Damn this was intense the tickling is agony on it’s own but yes the movies of hostel were brutal and gruesome so it fits the ending of the victim. I do wish these movies have scenes like this, like the purge there was tickling I one scene. Great story!
 
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