Ticklish_witch
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Part one:
http://ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=89978&highlight=Pirates+punishment
Heres part two for some people who wanted it::
As Jack stepped out of the small room he felt the sea breeze press up against his face, calming him down immensly from the adrenaline rush he had been feeding a moment ago. He walked past where Will and Elizabeth stood together looking out at the sea. Still in mischeif mode, he backed up and grabbed Elizabeth by the waist making her shriek in ticklish surprise and Will to turn around, startled. At the sight of Jack he merely smirked and Elizabeth slapped Jacks hand away still giggling. "Thats not funny"! She exclaimed, trying not to laugh, herself. "Then why are you laughing"? Jack asked, crab pinching her sides up and down making her squirm around giggling. Will grinned at his wife. "Jack stop it"! She squealed, "Will help me"! She said through her giggles, but Will did the opposite and grabbed her arms exclaiming, "Go for her hips" Jack grinned and so did Will as they slowed their assault to a stop, Elizabeth glared at both of them, still hiccuping the last of her giggles. "I hate it when you do that"! She exclaimed. Jack grinned and Gibbs called for him, he turned on his heel and went up to the top deck. "Your so mean" Elizabeth said, turning to Will, smiling anyway. "Mhm, sure" he said grinning. The sky suddenly turned dark. Really dark. Not like, cloud coverin the sun dark. Like creepy and irregular dark. The crew panicked and the boat jolted to a stop as though it had hit a reef. Elizabeth was jerked forward and nearly fell over the front of the boat.Will grabbed her waist and pulled her back up. The boat shook again with the same effect as when it had stopped the first time, but this time Wil held his wife fast, not letting her fall. Jack rushed to them. "Hide" He exclaimed and nothing else. Without another word, Will grabbed Elizabeth and ran into Jacks quarters. The crew panicked even more outside and the couple saw tentacles climbing up the sides of the ship. Will held Elizabeth close to him but it wasn't enough for what was about to happen. The door burst open and at least 10 members of Davey Jones crew lumbered in. Wills grip on his wifes body tightened. The members halted and addressed them. "You there" One said, pointing a massive burn-covered finger at Elizabeth. She whimpered. "Come with us" Before Will could do anything, they grabbed Elizabeth. He yanked out his sword, but all ten of the undead monsters raised a gun and pointed it at him, clicking it to prove it was ready to fire. Will faltered and the creature looked at something behind Will. "You! Sparrow! On your feet" Will turned expecting to see Jack but saw Pearl. Pearl stood, and unlike Elizabeth seemed to be keeping herself fairly calm looking. The creature threw Elizabeth into the crowd of his fellow undead beasts and grabbed Pearl, still pointing his gun at Wills head, stepped out of the Cabin, and off the front deck, splashing into the water. The tentacles slid back into the water and the crew all came forth from their hiding places, cheering. Jack came in to where Will was. "Wheres Lizabeth"? He slurred. "They've taken her" Will said, angrily, getting ready for a battle. "Wait-"Jack said, "Wheres Pearl"? Will looked up at Jack and didnt say anything. The look on Jacks face didnt physically change, but Will saw his eyes darken and flames seemed to spit up in his pupils. Jack began shouting orders to his crew and they all jumped and set sail again.
It may have only been 10 minutes but it felt like hours since they had started looking for the Flying Dutchman. Jack hadnt relaxed a bit since then either, and Will didnt either. But then, off in the distance they could all see a huge ship, at least twice the size of the Black Pearl with ripped up gray sails. The Flying Dutchman. The Black Pearl pulled up through the fog, smoothly to the huge vessel and aboard Will and Jack could see both of their wives tied with a huge thick rope to one of the ships masts. "Do you feel near death yet"? One of the creatures was taunting, four of tentacles to each of the womens bare feet that were sticking out under the ropes. Rubbing against them. Tickling them. Jack and Will could hardly believe how effective it was, too. Even from where they stood, on the deck of the Pearl, it was easy to hear both of them screaming with laughter and pleas for mercy. "Are you kidding me"? Will whispered next to Jack, to no one in particular. He couldn't help but feel almost like laughing. Jack was already swinging a rope up to the Flying Dutchman. "What are you doing"? Will hissed at Jack. Jack looked back at him. "Saving them" he said ironically. Will went to grab for his pant leg, "Its not like they're being hurt" he missed Jacks leg and grabbed his foot through his thin boot. Jack snorted and yanked his foot away. "You kidding? Its torture" He continued to climb the rope. Will said nothing but followed. "How would you know" Jack froze. "Because....of Pearl" He said, thinking fast. Will just said nothing and followed suit. Jack threw a dead fish across the deck of the flying dutchman and the creature chased it off, leaving Elizabeth and Pearl to pant, tears streaming down their faces. Jack quickly sliipped up on the deck followed by Will and they desperately tried to untie the women. Seeing the creature beginning to return, Jack and Will leapt behind some crates and hid for another few minutes, watching in terror and irony as their wives poor bare soles were torturously tickled into insanity. Finally, after what must have seemed like hours to the women, the creature left again, and Jack and Will ran from their hiding place. Jack pulled out a knife and began to saw at the rope holding the girls to the mast, but realised that beneath that rope, both women were individually tied by their wrists and ankles. Will started to saw through Elizabeths individual ropes, but Jack stopped him, "No time!" He whispered frantically. "Just carry them like this"! He sounded panicked, but Will did as he was told and lifted Elizabeth up and Jack did Pearl, and they climbed back into the black pearl. The boats sails lifted and it quickly slid through the water, away to safety. It was only until they were far enough from the flying dutchman that they started to untie Elizabeth and Pearl. But, by this time, they had already reached Tortuga. "Hey"! Pearl called, she and Elizabeth laying helplessly on their backs on the deck, waiting for Jack and Will. "Can you untie us? like, NOW? PLEASE?" Elizabeth called. Jack turned and grinned and turned back to the steering wheel. Little did their wives know that Jack and Will were going to have a little fun first...
When the black pearl was finally in good cruising waters, Jack left the wheel followed by Will.
They made a great scene of trying to untie the girls ankles, ever
to lightly stroking their feet in the process, producing a few occasional sweet giggles. "Thought...you...were...*giggle*...mad...at...*gigg le*...me...Jack." Pearl teased, though she was really in no position to do so at the current situation, but Jack just grinned and slid one single finger from her heel to the balls of her toes quickly. She gave another tiny giggle and squirmed in nervousness. Neither she nor Elizabeth wanted to say anything about the tickling they were being forced to endure, in case they weren't doing it on purpose, and were reminded of their ability to, since they were both tied up anyway. Next to Pearl, Elizabeth was getting quite the same torture herself. Will thought it ironic that Pearl, a complete badass, and Elizabeth, pure and innocent, both beautiful in their own way, were having the same reaction to the tickling, both squirming, both grinning, both giggling like little school girls. "Y'know, Jack", Will teased, "I'm having trouble here, can you help me out" Jack grinned "Oh yeah sure" and left Pearl to hyperventilate from all the ticklish laughter she was holding in. Elizabeth squealed and didn't even bother covering it up anymore as Jack and Will both worked on her feet at once. Of course, Jack and Will weren't doing much to hide that they were tickling her either. Completely abandoning the ropes around her legs, Jack and Will started each tickling her feet and ankles like mad, making her even unable to beg or plead through all of her laughter. She had the sweetest laugh ever, squirming and thrashing around trying to get away from having her poor bare feet tickled mercilessly.
"Ahahahahahahaha nnoooooooo" Elizabeth giggled
"I'm sorry, what was that"? Will teased
"Dont!!!... *giggle* Stop!!!" She squealed
"Don't stop? Is that what you said" Will mocked
"NOOOOOOOO" Elizabeth cried
Meanwhile Pearl was inching away from Jack, Will, and Elizabeth, by inching her back to one side and clawing at the railing behind her with her tied together wrists. Elizabeth wasn't about to let Pearl get away and have to endure all of this torture herself though.
"Gettt...Pearl...instead..." Elizabeth gasped between laughter
Jack turned and grabbed Pearl by the waist and pulled her closer to him. He rested her upper body in his lap and had his way with the smooth hollows of her underarms while Will continued to torment Elizabeths soles. Both the womens laughter combined mingled into one beautiful noise
"Willl!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOOOOOO" Elizabeth shrieked
"Jack!! DONNNTTT!!! AHAHAHAHAH STOAHAHHAHAP" Pearl giggled, squirming harder in his arms, trying as hard as she could to pull away. Finally, at least 10 minutes later Jack and Will stopped, leaving Pearl and Elizabeth to pant for breath before untying them properly.
"I...hate...you..." Pearl panted
"No...kidding...." Elizabeth panted
Jack and Will just grinned. They had no idea what was in store for them. But then again, Pearl and Elizabeth thought that they were done being tickled...
Still Want more? Look for part three! (coming soon!)
http://ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=89978&highlight=Pirates+punishment
Heres part two for some people who wanted it::
As Jack stepped out of the small room he felt the sea breeze press up against his face, calming him down immensly from the adrenaline rush he had been feeding a moment ago. He walked past where Will and Elizabeth stood together looking out at the sea. Still in mischeif mode, he backed up and grabbed Elizabeth by the waist making her shriek in ticklish surprise and Will to turn around, startled. At the sight of Jack he merely smirked and Elizabeth slapped Jacks hand away still giggling. "Thats not funny"! She exclaimed, trying not to laugh, herself. "Then why are you laughing"? Jack asked, crab pinching her sides up and down making her squirm around giggling. Will grinned at his wife. "Jack stop it"! She squealed, "Will help me"! She said through her giggles, but Will did the opposite and grabbed her arms exclaiming, "Go for her hips" Jack grinned and so did Will as they slowed their assault to a stop, Elizabeth glared at both of them, still hiccuping the last of her giggles. "I hate it when you do that"! She exclaimed. Jack grinned and Gibbs called for him, he turned on his heel and went up to the top deck. "Your so mean" Elizabeth said, turning to Will, smiling anyway. "Mhm, sure" he said grinning. The sky suddenly turned dark. Really dark. Not like, cloud coverin the sun dark. Like creepy and irregular dark. The crew panicked and the boat jolted to a stop as though it had hit a reef. Elizabeth was jerked forward and nearly fell over the front of the boat.Will grabbed her waist and pulled her back up. The boat shook again with the same effect as when it had stopped the first time, but this time Wil held his wife fast, not letting her fall. Jack rushed to them. "Hide" He exclaimed and nothing else. Without another word, Will grabbed Elizabeth and ran into Jacks quarters. The crew panicked even more outside and the couple saw tentacles climbing up the sides of the ship. Will held Elizabeth close to him but it wasn't enough for what was about to happen. The door burst open and at least 10 members of Davey Jones crew lumbered in. Wills grip on his wifes body tightened. The members halted and addressed them. "You there" One said, pointing a massive burn-covered finger at Elizabeth. She whimpered. "Come with us" Before Will could do anything, they grabbed Elizabeth. He yanked out his sword, but all ten of the undead monsters raised a gun and pointed it at him, clicking it to prove it was ready to fire. Will faltered and the creature looked at something behind Will. "You! Sparrow! On your feet" Will turned expecting to see Jack but saw Pearl. Pearl stood, and unlike Elizabeth seemed to be keeping herself fairly calm looking. The creature threw Elizabeth into the crowd of his fellow undead beasts and grabbed Pearl, still pointing his gun at Wills head, stepped out of the Cabin, and off the front deck, splashing into the water. The tentacles slid back into the water and the crew all came forth from their hiding places, cheering. Jack came in to where Will was. "Wheres Lizabeth"? He slurred. "They've taken her" Will said, angrily, getting ready for a battle. "Wait-"Jack said, "Wheres Pearl"? Will looked up at Jack and didnt say anything. The look on Jacks face didnt physically change, but Will saw his eyes darken and flames seemed to spit up in his pupils. Jack began shouting orders to his crew and they all jumped and set sail again.
It may have only been 10 minutes but it felt like hours since they had started looking for the Flying Dutchman. Jack hadnt relaxed a bit since then either, and Will didnt either. But then, off in the distance they could all see a huge ship, at least twice the size of the Black Pearl with ripped up gray sails. The Flying Dutchman. The Black Pearl pulled up through the fog, smoothly to the huge vessel and aboard Will and Jack could see both of their wives tied with a huge thick rope to one of the ships masts. "Do you feel near death yet"? One of the creatures was taunting, four of tentacles to each of the womens bare feet that were sticking out under the ropes. Rubbing against them. Tickling them. Jack and Will could hardly believe how effective it was, too. Even from where they stood, on the deck of the Pearl, it was easy to hear both of them screaming with laughter and pleas for mercy. "Are you kidding me"? Will whispered next to Jack, to no one in particular. He couldn't help but feel almost like laughing. Jack was already swinging a rope up to the Flying Dutchman. "What are you doing"? Will hissed at Jack. Jack looked back at him. "Saving them" he said ironically. Will went to grab for his pant leg, "Its not like they're being hurt" he missed Jacks leg and grabbed his foot through his thin boot. Jack snorted and yanked his foot away. "You kidding? Its torture" He continued to climb the rope. Will said nothing but followed. "How would you know" Jack froze. "Because....of Pearl" He said, thinking fast. Will just said nothing and followed suit. Jack threw a dead fish across the deck of the flying dutchman and the creature chased it off, leaving Elizabeth and Pearl to pant, tears streaming down their faces. Jack quickly sliipped up on the deck followed by Will and they desperately tried to untie the women. Seeing the creature beginning to return, Jack and Will leapt behind some crates and hid for another few minutes, watching in terror and irony as their wives poor bare soles were torturously tickled into insanity. Finally, after what must have seemed like hours to the women, the creature left again, and Jack and Will ran from their hiding place. Jack pulled out a knife and began to saw at the rope holding the girls to the mast, but realised that beneath that rope, both women were individually tied by their wrists and ankles. Will started to saw through Elizabeths individual ropes, but Jack stopped him, "No time!" He whispered frantically. "Just carry them like this"! He sounded panicked, but Will did as he was told and lifted Elizabeth up and Jack did Pearl, and they climbed back into the black pearl. The boats sails lifted and it quickly slid through the water, away to safety. It was only until they were far enough from the flying dutchman that they started to untie Elizabeth and Pearl. But, by this time, they had already reached Tortuga. "Hey"! Pearl called, she and Elizabeth laying helplessly on their backs on the deck, waiting for Jack and Will. "Can you untie us? like, NOW? PLEASE?" Elizabeth called. Jack turned and grinned and turned back to the steering wheel. Little did their wives know that Jack and Will were going to have a little fun first...
When the black pearl was finally in good cruising waters, Jack left the wheel followed by Will.
They made a great scene of trying to untie the girls ankles, ever
to lightly stroking their feet in the process, producing a few occasional sweet giggles. "Thought...you...were...*giggle*...mad...at...*gigg le*...me...Jack." Pearl teased, though she was really in no position to do so at the current situation, but Jack just grinned and slid one single finger from her heel to the balls of her toes quickly. She gave another tiny giggle and squirmed in nervousness. Neither she nor Elizabeth wanted to say anything about the tickling they were being forced to endure, in case they weren't doing it on purpose, and were reminded of their ability to, since they were both tied up anyway. Next to Pearl, Elizabeth was getting quite the same torture herself. Will thought it ironic that Pearl, a complete badass, and Elizabeth, pure and innocent, both beautiful in their own way, were having the same reaction to the tickling, both squirming, both grinning, both giggling like little school girls. "Y'know, Jack", Will teased, "I'm having trouble here, can you help me out" Jack grinned "Oh yeah sure" and left Pearl to hyperventilate from all the ticklish laughter she was holding in. Elizabeth squealed and didn't even bother covering it up anymore as Jack and Will both worked on her feet at once. Of course, Jack and Will weren't doing much to hide that they were tickling her either. Completely abandoning the ropes around her legs, Jack and Will started each tickling her feet and ankles like mad, making her even unable to beg or plead through all of her laughter. She had the sweetest laugh ever, squirming and thrashing around trying to get away from having her poor bare feet tickled mercilessly.
"Ahahahahahahaha nnoooooooo" Elizabeth giggled
"I'm sorry, what was that"? Will teased
"Dont!!!... *giggle* Stop!!!" She squealed
"Don't stop? Is that what you said" Will mocked
"NOOOOOOOO" Elizabeth cried
Meanwhile Pearl was inching away from Jack, Will, and Elizabeth, by inching her back to one side and clawing at the railing behind her with her tied together wrists. Elizabeth wasn't about to let Pearl get away and have to endure all of this torture herself though.
"Gettt...Pearl...instead..." Elizabeth gasped between laughter
Jack turned and grabbed Pearl by the waist and pulled her closer to him. He rested her upper body in his lap and had his way with the smooth hollows of her underarms while Will continued to torment Elizabeths soles. Both the womens laughter combined mingled into one beautiful noise
"Willl!!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOOOOOO" Elizabeth shrieked
"Jack!! DONNNTTT!!! AHAHAHAHAH STOAHAHHAHAP" Pearl giggled, squirming harder in his arms, trying as hard as she could to pull away. Finally, at least 10 minutes later Jack and Will stopped, leaving Pearl and Elizabeth to pant for breath before untying them properly.
"I...hate...you..." Pearl panted
"No...kidding...." Elizabeth panted
Jack and Will just grinned. They had no idea what was in store for them. But then again, Pearl and Elizabeth thought that they were done being tickled...
Still Want more? Look for part three! (coming soon!)
