After long last... Phantasia Pt. III (M/F, noncon, adult)

After long last...

....... Well. Hello. A while back I wrote a few stories... they were met with some pretty positive replies, and I intended to finish the series... but I'm a student, I've got tons going on with school and with varsity sports and other activities... and most of all, I'm lazy. Suffice it to say, I never finished the series. UNTIL NOW! That's right, the long awaited finale, awaited by nobody, is ready!

There are these few stories I follow from beginning to end, word for word. Man you have done one of the best jobs I have truly read on the TMF, there are only three series of stories that I can lable as outstanding on this forum. 1 was the Angel series by Hell's Tickler, 2 the Zombie series by Anubis and 3... YOURS! Your writing is an inspiration for me to write. These stories have always been a fav of mine here. Thankyou so much, more than you know I thank you.

I really liked this story. A lot. It reminds me a bit of a story I did called "Silent Lucidity", where the antagonist commits his acts in the confines of his own mind, his own reality. Of course, the setting and resons are different, but the story is in my Archive if you wanna check it out.

I like the descriptive. So many authors these days are just saying things like "He tickled under her arms for an hour" and add "HHAAAHAHAHAHEHEEHEE" fo six lines. Your descriptions capture the feel of her skin, the curves of her body and the things going through the antagonist's (hero's?) mind.

Excellent story. And if you want, you can always just bump your own stories up. If the other two are older and you want them on the same page, just add a reply saying "Bump" onto the end of the others. It's no crime, and it'll give newer readers the chance to catch up with the series.

Again, great job.

Thanks guys, I appreciate the kind words. Dave, I'm surprised I missed that story of yours, I usually read most of your stuff, so I'll check that out.

And shameless self-bumps away!

Excellent, very good. thanks for separating your paragraphs and using quotes... I hate it when ppl don't do that.

LD_Tickler said:

Evidently he hadn’t forgiven Darren for subjecting her to his tortures as he played out a fantasy on a high school crush not long ago.

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Noticed a typo. I apologize if me pointing that out was annoying.

This part was every bit as good as the first two. I love how it ends. And how it begins. And I love the middle. Basically, I love this story. From start to finish you had my full attention. That's saying a lot, I can hardly ever focus on anything for very long, and here you had me so entranced that I noticed a typo.

very good!.