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Death by tickling part 4

Ticklish_witch

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If you haven't already, I suggest you read parts 1 2 & 3 first!

Catherine shook her head angrily.
“So what the fuck are we going to do”?! She spat.
“We can’t do anything. This is horrible, we have to wait for another victim” Nick said solemnly, as he, Warrick and Greg stepped into the room.
“There HAS to be another way” Sara said, as she started pacing the room.
“Baiting” Greg said softly.
“What”?! Catherine and Sara both said, Sara stopped her pacing and looked up.
“We could bait him. With a woman. But it couldn’t be one of you two, since he obviously knows its you two, but if we found someone to bait him with, it could work…” Greg finished.
“Alex has been caught leaving to Miami”!! Grissom said, running into the room and panting. It was clear that he had been running.
“WHAT”?!!?! Everyone exclaimed at once.
“Yeah, apparently Alex left for Miami as soon as he left” Grissom added, glancing around at everyone and taking in their reactions.
“That solves the baiting problem” Greg said, trying to be optimistic.
“Greg, this hardly is the…” Warrick started, but Sara cut him off.
“No wait! That’s brilliant”! Sara said. Greg beamed.
“If we could get down to Miami, we could get someone from the Miami Dade CSI team to bait him”! She exclaimed, bouncing on the balls of her feet with excitement.
“She’s right” Catherine said thoughtfully.
“How many women are on that team”? Sara asked quickly. She hadn’t met anyone from the Miami Dade squad yet.
“There’s Alexx… and Calleigh”! Nick exclaimed.
“Yeah, Calleigh”! Catherine said, her eyes lighting up.
“Who’s Calleigh”? Sara asked.
“She would be perfect” Greg said, ignoring Sara for a moment.
“Who’s Calleigh”? Sara tried again.
“Blonde hair, blue eyes, southern accent… perfect” Catherine said
“Who IS CALLEIGH”?! Sara exclaimed and everyone turned to her as if they just realised she was in the room.
“You’ll find out soon enough” Catherine said, looking back to the group.
“Lets get a chopper down there as soon as possible” Catherine said.
“We’re going to Miami”?! Sara asked excitedly.
“Yeah…” Grissom said slowly.
“Am I coming”?! Sara asked.
“…Yeah, your coming” Grissom said, breaking into a smile.
Sara gave the most un-sara-sidle-ish squeal ever and flung herself from the room. Everyone stood still for a moment and Sara popped her head back in the door.
“I’ll be in the lab” She said, still grinning, before vanishing again behind the steel door.
***
Within the next 2 hours the entire Las Vegas CSI team was held in two choppers, flying over Miami. As soon as they landed, they fled towards the Miami lab.
“Sara Sidle, this is Horatio Caine” Grissom introduced his partner to his old friend.
“Calleigh”! Catherine exclaimed. Sara turned and saw a beautiful blonde haired woman who looked in her late 20’s or early 30’s walked up to the group.
“Catherine”! Calleigh exclaimed back in her thick southern accent. She and Catherine hugged as if they were childhood friends.
Catherine couldn’t help but feel pretty glad about it, seeing as at the beginning of the first visit they had was a pretty bumpy road for the two of them. She was just glad that all the hard feelings were cleared up.
“Calleigh, this is Sara Sidle, she wasn’t here on the Las Vegas team’s last visit” Horatio said, gesturing to Sara.
“Hi Sara, I’m Calleigh, don’t ask how I spell it” Calleigh said lightly, smiling and shaking Sara’s hand.
“Calleigh, I’ve been told that they want to use you as a baiting in another murder case” Horatio said.
“Really now,” Calleigh said looking mildly interested.
“Yes, they say that there isn’t enough evidence to find out for sure, and apart from baiting the only option would be to wait for another victim”
“Which of course, is out of the question” Calleigh finished for him.
Calleigh looked down at the ground for a moment.
“What’s the scenario”? Calleigh asked.
“2 victims, both from lack of oxygen.”
“Rape”? Calleigh asked
“It depends” Horatio said. “Both found with arms restrained, mouths bound, and major bruising on their ribs.”
Calleigh looked up.
“Are you kidding me”?! She asked. “That sounds like they were…”
“That’s what the best theory is” Horatio smoothly interjected.
“You know I can’t do that”! Calleigh exclaimed.
“Why not”? Eric asked from behind her.
“You know very well why!” Calleigh exclaimed again.
“He wont even touch you” Horatio said, his voice calm.
“You know we would never put you in any situation where he would ever be able to hurt you” Horatio said, pulling off his aviator sunglasses and looking deep into her eyes.
“I’m not really worried about him hurting me” she said, looking down.
“Calleigh” Horatio said, she looked up into his eyes.
“Okay” she said softly and looked away. Ryan put his hand on her shoulder.
“We’re gonna take care of you” He said. “Don’t worry”
Sara smiled with understanding, and Calleigh looked up, returning her smile.
“Yeah, I can do it”.

Review please!
 
Absolute Genius incorporating the Miami team and DEFINITELY the right choice of tream maber for the bait.

Please kepp it going
 
I like it. The story is interesting so far, and your writing is vivid and engaging. Oh and it's refreshing to read porn with good grammar and spelling, for a change.
 
Nice twist!

You`ve got a great story going here,TW! I love the way you combined the various casts! I can`t wait to see what happens next! And you can always provide little treats for us!(Sliding off shoes during interrogation! :couch: )

Keep up the good work!
 
this great; i really get into it and right when things start to heat up, "to be continued" muahahah so evil :firedevil , i love it :dogpile:
 
I will give a proper review next time to this chapter, but it looks good.

Again it does look really good, it just seems everyone has their heart set on this one dude, which sometimes works on CSI. But sometimes it doesn't. I'm going to pm you with an idea, you're free to try it if you want but you don't have to.
 
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Omg Sorry!

I AM SO SORRY THAT I HAVENT BEEN ON!

I was busy with a lot of other stuff! Part 5 will be written and posted tommorow... maybe tonight? Probably not, but tommorow the latest!
 
Ticklish_witch said:
I AM SO SORRY THAT I HAVENT BEEN ON!

I was busy with a lot of other stuff! Part 5 will be written and posted tommorow... maybe tonight? Probably not, but tommorow the latest!

Its okay I hope you decide to use some of my ideas I gave you in my pm
 
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