No Pity { Illustration Included}

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• May 18, 2001

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• May 19, 2001

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great story

great story,mtjpub. I hope you find the guy who drew that picture because it is really good. keep up the good work with the magazine and everything!
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• Feb 1, 2004

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the pic isn't working, I would love to see it! BTW isn't their longer version of this story? I seem to remember a version where Frank puts rubber wedges into her mouth and she sucks him off just berore he tickles her stomach. or maybe I am just confused???? thanks!

 

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britt007,

Here is the illustration…

There was a slightly longer and darker version of the story that I wrote as a special request. I don’t usually like to mix heavy sexual elements in my writing so I prefer this to be the official version of the story.

Morandilas
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• Feb 1, 2004

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damn, no pic! but this story is one of the all time greats!

 

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• Feb 1, 2004

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well done

very good writing.

 

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• Feb 1, 2004

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MTJ,
Thanks for reposting the photo. Thanks also for the info. I always love your stories!
Britt

 

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• Feb 3, 2004

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This was one of my favorite "dark and scary" stories. I love your writing and am very glad to see you posting some of it. Kudos! This one was fantastic!

 

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• Feb 5, 2004

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Excellent

It's a classic. I like reading it again and again.
"hundreds of hours of video tape"... now that's sadistic.

 

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Great story,one of the best if not the best I have ever read.Thanks.

Ten years is a long time

 

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Sorry to bump an old thread, but I had to just say how awesome this story was. This was one of my inspirations for my "Felicia the Cheerleader" stories. I may be behind on this, but was the illustration taken off because I can't see anything. Whatever the case, this was an incredible, INCREDIBLE story!

 

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• Mar 27, 2006

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MTJpub said:

britt007,

Here is the illustration…

There was a slightly longer and darker version of the story that I wrote as a special request. I don’t usually like to mix heavy sexual elements in my writing so I prefer this to be the official version of the story.

Morandilas
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fantastic story. and i would love to read the longer, darker version. if i pm you my email addy could you send it to me? and the illustration isnt there anymore..

jkb dont be sorry for bumping this up, stories such as these deserve to be bumped up for more readers to enjoy. so thats what inspired your felicia cheerleader story? great

isabeau

 

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• Mar 27, 2006

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That's one of the things that inspired me, yeah. Uhh you wouldn't happen to have the illustration for this story, would you? Because I want to see it!

 

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• Mar 27, 2006

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speaking of felicia, how long until the next installment?

 

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I don't know. I haven't done to much work on it.

 

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MTJpub said:

I no longer have a copy of the darker version:-(

However here is the illustration

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rats o well. this story was fantastic of course i just wanted to read the darker version

and thanks Morandilas for that wonderful illustration. shows how truly maniacal he was and the look on her face is priceless.

isabeau

 

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• Mar 28, 2006

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Hey Morandillas,
I've always been a fan of this story, but I haven't read it in some time. Good to see it again. Great job, and I love the illustration.

Did someone say "A darker version?" Hmmmm

 

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ShadowTklr said:

Hey Morandillas,
I've always been a fan of this story, but I haven't read it in some time. Good to see it again. Great job, and I love the illustration.

Did someone say "A darker version?" Hmmmm

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i did i did....... write one ok??? please? i know you can do it Shadowtklr..

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