Great start, looking forward to reading the continuation. Hope this is a story that continues for a while as the possibilities are broad with this premise
Yes you should definitely continue :) Whether its the group in the garage who continue the story with another or Irene's story continuing it seems greatly promising either way. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Realized I didn't comment on this chapter; this one was so good. Delivered so well on the setup from Chapter 1; masterful. I can only wait with baited breath for how you deliver on the setup from Chapter 3 (hint hint Chapter 4 in the works possibly XD)
Awesome start, looking forward to part 2 now that we're starting to get into the meat of the story. Why do I feel like Lisa will be all over her friend once she gets a chance :P
Really enjoying this so far. Was hoping Molly would come back in at this part but it certainly didn't disappoint anyway and that just builds the excitement for the next one.
Another great part. Seems like in each one things get worse and worse for Jessica. NGL I would still like to see everyone get their comeuppance at the end but in the meantime I'm enjoying seeing how things can continue to get worse for her at each step.
Another fantastic story from you, not that I expected anything less. I will say though that I found the ending a bit anti-climatic. Felt like you built up to her mom getting involved but then when she finally did it ended in one paragraph. Guess you figured she had enough XD
Really nice start (guessing this will have more parts and I'd look forward to those). Only thing I would say is its a bit jarring how this went from Tucker thinking about his admiration for Astrid to after he already caught her stealing. Felt like it might make more sense to show him catching...
Nice chapter. Kind of sad Jessica didn't keep the upper hand on Amber longer but oh well. Also not sure whether I want her sister to actually save her (call the police or something since this bunch REALLY deserves to get busted) or just get caught and tickled with her? Maybe both? Caught and...