Hot and fun. One question it raised is whether "Karen" and Priscilla Montenegro from the Cheyenne story are the some person. Both Bessie and Cheyenne have been recruited (presumably under false pretenses) to work at a school. Cheyenne is suppose to be a servant (servicer?) at Priscilla's...
Hmm. This looks like it might be pretty good. Let's see what it's like when it isn't a giant text wall with insuffient punctuation.
So, with added punctuation, spelling corrections and the text wall broken into readable paragraphs, it's not bad. There was still way too much "YELL TEXT" for...
I think the more interesting question is "Will our heroine want to stop them?"
Beneath all the tickling, orgasms and etc. Darby is a person struggling with shame and fear for... being who and what she is - a woman whose sexual orientation is toward other women. Perhaps it will turn out that...
I admit that I find Michelle's "top-heaviness" to be a bit ridiculous in a "no human could actual function like that" way, but this is definitely one of my favorite tickle stories. The whole "nipples as more accessible clits" thing she has is pretty cool.
And... I'm a moron. For some reason I thought this was going to be Joey Lynx 6, but no. This is pretty much the same comic I spent a year eagerly reading month by month on Bandito's Patreon page. Still, the .pdf does make it a little easier to read, so good enough.