This was a great story. I was very entertained by it. You really painted a picture with your words.
I hope you will create many more*of these stories.
Thank you for your efforts!
I like it! You can fill in things with your own imagination. You can envision the people, how old, etc. That way you make the story yours. What ElFewja has given us is an outline, and a very good one at that!
Thanks again old friend!
Jersey you know how I feel about your stories. This is another great one. Looking forward to reading the rest of it. Too bad I have to go to work right now!
Once again thanks for your efforts!
Not weird but wonderful. This is real writing! It may not be the cup of tea for readers who come here for one thing alone, but it you want to experience that and more this is the kind of story to enjoy! You are a hell of a writer and I hope you continue to practice the craft!
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