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The word "retarded" is a derogatory term for people with intellectual disabilities. I thought you might want to know that many people would find your story offensive for that. In addition, your use of the phrase "Tom never liked smart women," plays upon the stereotype that people with...

Beautiful. This takes the "playing her like an instrument" simile to a whole new level. ;-)

This was great! Can't wait to see more...

This story is wonderfully erotic. Thanks!

I really liked the plot of the story--especially the *fun* ending! ;-) I would love/hate/love to show up to an experiment like this... I wonder, though, if there's a way to flesh out the dialogue a bit? It seems a little abrupt, and repetitive. Tell us what is different about this...

Hey Jersey, Love the story! Don't stop... Love of Mystery

Very imaginative story! Looking forward to part 2.

Good premise...I'm a fan of people getting what they deserve. But I think the use of the words "retarded" and "gay" really took away from the story. They're offensive in the way they were used, and it didn't add any depth or characterization to the story. And the girl begging to be raped so...

This was a good story! I like the concept, the British flavoring, and the sensuality. I almost didn't check it out, though, because I find it much harder to follow "script" structured stories. They don't flow in the same way, for me. Nice job, though.

Light, teasing tickles. For me, tickling should be a slow, simmering kind of torture...that way, it can last for hours.

I have to second some of the others' comments about danger. Even though I'm all for some tickling fun, I would feel very uncomfortable having a session with someone I've only met online. Even meeting someone with the eventual "goal" of having a session might make the situation strange, I think.

Amazing, as always, Greenfeather.

I'm with Haribish on this one. I would imagine that if you enjoyed your session, and continue to enjoy tickling people, you still get turned on by it. Now the bar's raised is all.

Very nice! TGIF, indeed.

I find a description of the laughter much more effective in creating the tone of the story. Giggling, gasping, chuckling, snorting, hysteria etc., are all different anyway...and "feel" different when they're written and read...

Oooh, I've never enjoyed a tickling story without tickling *quite* so much....very hot.

I have to agree with all of the above: The surrendering of control, if only for a few moments, and the amazing sensations that are both sensual and exciting.

Approve. :D

Love the setup here. Looking forward to the rest!

I love this story. Just thought I'd bump it up for those who might have missed it!