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Stuck #1: Hole in the Wall

TickleMantis

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Stuck #1: Hole in the Wall

M/f





Lilly had always been curious about the hole. With that small exception the high rise apartment building where she and her roommate, Kelly, stayed was very well kept. But right there behind the waist-high book shelf on the left as you walked in the door of the young women's 14th story apartment was the mysterious hole. Lily knew it had been there since the day her and Kelly moved in, and they'd never bothered to move the book shelf since. But Lily, the short voluptuous olive skinned twenty year old she was, couldn't help but wonder.

Came the day Lilly found out. Common sense told the green eyed girl it was simply a gaping wound in the wall that lead to the neighboring apartment, but common sense never lead anyone to adventure. Had the big breasted amateur detective known what such adventures would entail, Lilly would have tossed her curiosity sailing out the window. Of course she wasn't really a detective of any sort, she worked in a coffee shop thus her experience with adventure proved somewhat limited. None the less, today was her day off so she could be a detective.

The hole itself began at the carpet and wasn't very high at all. It looked like a small cave, or a giant cartoon mouse house door. The edges were slightly jagged where whatever, or whoever it was, had once smashed through. Dragging the book case in short sharp tugs across the floor Lilly took a moment to gather herself, titled forward and with a raised eyebrow peered through. Straight through to the neighboring apartment.

"Huh." Lily sighed to herself somewhat disappointed at the uneventful discovery while she stood in her tight denim blue jeans, thin white cotton socks and casual yellow t-shirt.

Crouching down to her knees Lilly placed her hands on the floor and performed a half push up. Bringing her head close to the soft thick carpet Lilly turned her head and squinted comically while she observed the utterly mundane view through the once intriguing hole. The bottom half of a couch, a book case, some kitchen cabinets at the far back. And empty.

It was certainly a tight squeeze as the sultry young woman squirmed on her well toned tummy through the hole. When it came to her firm plum like butt Lilly found herself having to claw and pull at the carpet only to pop out suddenly startling the young home invader. Climbing to her feet Lilly examined the apartment, it was much the same layout as her own, the carpet was identical.

There were some movie posters, a rather extensive DVD collection on a rack against the wall she'd just wiggled through and the book shelf appeared to be stocked mostly by graphic novels. It was well kept, the kitchen was tidy. There were some magazines and two T.V remotes on a small table next to the couch. The bedroom had more movie posters and a technical book Lilly didn't bother investigating sitting on the bedside table.

After nearly an hour Lilly had her fill of snooping around and crouched back toward the carpet as she mentally planned the rest of her day. Scooting along her stomach once again Lilly reached her arms through the secret hole and pulled herself forward, the small of her back stroking the wall a moment before the young trespasser's shapely behind struggled to squeeze pass.

"Unh!" Lilly gritted her teeth and tried jolting herself through to no avail.

Laughing to herself Lilly pushed at the wall and scrapped at the carpet while the thought she could have simply used the door popped into her mind. It had been no easy task jamming herself through the first time, what had changed Lilly couldn't possibly fathom but the silly girl was now well and truly trapped.

A half hour or more passed before Lilly succumbed to the fact she wasn't going anywhere under her own strength. Kelly would get a shock upon arriving home, and it would be hours. Sighing with a sense of irony and good natured humor Lilly folded her arms on the floor and rested her head. A moment later the dark haired girl's eyes opened widely when the distinct click of her neighbor's door could be heard from behind.

Dennis closed the door behind him, turned with laptop under one arm and keys swinging in the other and saw a pair of denim blue jeans and white cotton socks sticking out from his wall. Raising his dark eye brows over the rim of his expensive glasses Dennis took a step closer and examined what was quite clearly a young woman's lower half. The wall appeared to cut off about half way along her apparently very well toned butt.

Looking around his apartment curiously Dennis wandered to the kitchen bench where he slowly placed the laptop and keys. Scratching the top of his head, the handsome thirty two year old ruffled his sensible hair cut slightly and blinked with a sense of disbelief. Removing his navy blue over shirt Dennis lay that next to the laptop and stood in his khaki pants, white t-shirt and business shoes.

It took a moment of starring at the squirming legs sticking out of his wall before surprise slowly began to give way to amusement. Opening the fridge Dennis removed a cold can of beer and with a crack and a hiss opened the cool beverage. Smiling at the young intruder's predicament he took a sip and leaned against the bench top casually while trying to decide what one does in such a unique situation.

On the other side of the wall Lilly had been struggling in a fruitless attempt to free herself. If only she could pull herself through whoever was behind her would never see her face and she could deny all knowledge of the incident. Alas, it was not to be and the highly embarrassed girl soon decided it was time to ask for help, hoping whoever owned the apartment she'd snooped around in wasn't already calling the police.

"H-hellooo? Is someone there?" Lilly turned as best she could and called toward the blank wall. "Listen I…I'm really sorry about this…I swear I didn't take anything, I was just interested and I know it was stupid…I'm really trapped here!"

She let a moment pass for response but nothing came. In fact Lilly hadn't heard a thing since the click of the door, perhaps her imagination was getting the better of her. Maybe the door didn't click, it could have been something else, although what was a mystery. Propping herself up on one arm Lilly reached behind her with the other and tried banging on the wall but this too elicited no result.

"Seriously is someone there? Hello? I'm really sorry!" Lilly called again to the faceless wall that kept her in position, her calls seeming to fall only be heard by herself until she felt movement atop her calve muscles. "Hey! Hey who's there?! What are you doing?!"

With his back facing the wall Dennis put his knees either side of the confused girl's lower legs and straddled them comfortably. Placing his beer on the carpet next to him the smiling hunk sat down pinning the two squirming legs underneath. From between his own legs poked two cute little wiggling cotton socked feet. A sudden frantic banging on the wall didn't phase Dennis as he laughed to himself and shook his head at the hilarity of this poor girl's situation.

"Hey! Help me out!" Lilly called as she felt the weight on her lower legs before suddenly feeling someone's finger lightly stroking her sock covered left sole. "Eee-ahh! Hey! Eeeeiii! Don't! Stop that!"

Wiggling his five fingers on the trapped sole Dennis could hear the slightly muffled squeals coming from behind. The girl's right foot began trying to defend it's friend but the kneeling man made short work of that by employing his other hand to dance it's fingers all over it. With increasing speed ten fingers scribbled around the frantically squirming sock covered soles and caused a hail of girlish giggles to project from the wall.

Beating at the wall soon proved to require too much coordination and Lilly began beating and clawing at the carpet before her. Unfortunately for the pleading young woman she just so happened to be incredibly ticklish, worse still she couldn't stand the thought, let alone the actual act. Being unable to even have a chance at escape was a virtual nightmare, suddenly made all too real.

"Eeeeiiihh! Nono! Heehee stop stop!" Lilly begged as she felt the ten fingers spidering carelessly about the thin cotton covering her delicate soles. "Oh pleaseheeheese! Stopiiiiit! Eeeheee! Stop tickling mehahaha!"

Raking four fingers on each foot from the balls of the helpless feet to the white cotton heels produced new deeper laughter. Dennis turned his head and looked back to see the girl's knees and thighs bouncing on the carpet, the lower half of her trapped butt tensing randomly as he admired the peachy denim cheeks. With a half grin the handsome dark haired man turned his attention to his captive's heels and began drawing small speedy circles with the tips of his index fingers.

"Listen to mehee! Stop! Please! Aha!" Lilly pleaded as she managed to regain some measure of sanity as the heel tickling forced sporadic giggles while she tried to reason with her mystery tickler. "Can yahano! Can you hear me!? Haha! Stop tickling me! Oh no! Please DON'T!"

Pinching the middle of the right thin cotton sock Dennis ceased the tickling and began to slowly slide it from the begging young woman's foot. The muffled pleas from the faceless girl began in panicked earnest and once again loud banging drummed from the other side. Purposely taking his time the intensely amused man watched as a soft wrinkly sole was revealed, high arches and well defined delicate balls that once the sock was finally gone flowed flawlessly down onto five cute nervous looking toes.

"Nono please! I'm sorry! Okay please don't do this!" Screaming at the wall Lilly could scarcely believe her situation as in her heart of hearts she knew what was about to happen. "Don't! No! StopstopstAAAAEEEE!"

Clenching her eyes shut Lilly slammed the carpet with the bottoms of her fists when five cruel fingers suddenly skated around her silky smooth bare foot. Spreading her cute toes Lilly's still sock covered left foot now tried in vain to protect it's bare friend only to be viciously pounced upon by the other five fingers. The two sensations were driving the poor girl into hysterics as the cotton sock forced girlish squealing and playful giggles while the bare foot assault drowned out everything else producing loud belly laughter and screams for mercy.

In Lilly's wild state of mind she had no manor of time keeping but it was nearly two whole minutes before tears of laughter and dread began streaming down her quickly reddening cheeks. Tears weren't the only thing flowing freely as helpless laughter burst from between the poor girl's full red lips. Although pointless she continued to beat and flail her arms atop the carpet while rolling side to side squishing her large fleshy boobs against the carpet producing beautiful cleavage.

Dennis had never done anything quite like this before, although he was quickly getting the hang of it. Releasing the socked left foot the fast learner took the vulnerable toes of the bare right and pulled them back, forcing the bare sole to stretch taut and holding it firmly immobile. To a chorus of heavy breathing and screaming protest Dennis took his free hand and slowly raked his nails down the bare sole causing a howl of tickled terror.

"Aaaahahaha! Noohohooo!" Lilly screeched trying to bury her face in the carpet and dig her fingers into the soft floor as the maddening digits danced around her totally trapped and extremely sensitive toes. "Plehahaha! Naahah! Nomoreehahaaaaaa!"

Not content with simply showing the cheeky intruder whose boss Dennis was developing quite a taste for the horrified muffled shrieks that his fingers created with such ease. Sending all ten fingers on a lightning fast attack to the bare foot caused wordless strained cries of laughter to bellow from behind. Without warning Dennis soon deployed all ten fingers to the socked sole causing wild giggles and throat wrenching prayers for a cease fire. Back and forth went the ten wicked fingers, dancing over every inch of the bare right sole and it's wiggling toes then to the twisting socked foot that longed to be left alone.

The conflicting sensations of socked foot and bare were splitting Lilly's increasingly fragile psyche. Thinking straight was no longer an option, a thousand broken thoughts stampeded through the screaming olive skinned girl's mind all of which were reaching toward the same conclusion, more than anything she wanted this to stop. Unfortunately as Lilly grit her teeth and stressed to block out the overwhelming sensations constantly stroking her feet she once again felt the ghastly shock of her left cotton sock being quickly pulled away.

Both anxious feet now naked before him Dennis took a moment to admire the smoothness of his tickle toy's soles. Those five cute little toes, the high arches, the creamy balls, soft sides and flawless heels. He'd never had any particular fondness for a woman's feet before but as the handsome attacker pondered the extraordinary effects his lightest touch could cause a new thankfulness dawned on him.

Raising his hands high above him Dennis began wiggling his fingers and slowly descending them towards the helpless panicked bare soles. Each foot was frantically trying to cover it's partner as if they could see what was coming, awaiting the inevitable onslaught with stomach sinking dread. Grinning boisterously Dennis watched as the defenseless soles sensed the warmth of his hands less than half an inch away when the adorable toes spread wide.

"Anything but that! PLEASE!" Lilly gasped for much needed breath and weakly battered the wall with what strength she could muster as she felt the coming assault. "AHA! Noho! NOHO! NOOHOOOO!"

Recognizable words were swiftly swallowed up by uncontrollable laughter as ten fingers ran rampant over every fully exposed inch of bare upturned feet. Tears of tickled terror freely streamed down Lilly's reddened stretched cheeks. Thrashing, pulling, pushing, nothing worked and it drove her completely mad. The dark haired girl's feet were totally trapped and being merciless tickled, it was all encompassing full blown torture.

In his new found intoxication Dennis had lost track of time almost as much as the girl on the other side of the wall. Unwilling to pry his gaze from the quivering feet beneath him the glasses sporting gentleman had no intention of slowing down. Dennis' fingers stroked, poked and evilly caressed the young woman's soles, digging under her unguarded toes. It was quite some time before his conscious mind registered the rock hard erection straining the zipper of his khakis.

Laying her palms flat on the thick carpet Lilly rested her head face down and sobbed in deep desperate breaths. The weight had finally lifted from her now limp jelly like legs. Lilly didn't know, and didn't want to know, how long whoever-it-was had been entertaining themselves with her luckless bare soles. However long it had been it was far longer than the exhausted girl would ever imagined she could have survived under such ticklish circumstances.

Gaining what little composure she could muster Lilly proped herself up with her elbows and wiped the tears from her blurred vision. Still breathing heavily another hopeless tug at the hole proved nothing as she once again collapsed lying flat on the floor. Once her mind had gathered enough sense to reform real thoughts the idea of calling for help soon occurred, shortly followed by the incredibly disappointing fact that if help were coming it would have arrived by now.

"…HEY! Oh my God!" Lilly turned as her eyes shot wide open when a distinct pinching of her lower butt was felt. "Let go! Stop!"

Kicking her legs and bashing at the wall with what limited maneuverability she had Lilly was dismayed to feel room temperature air brushing the back of her right thigh. Someone was holding, and somehow opening, her jeans just below Lilly's well held butt. No amount of bashing or kicking seemed to deter her would be stripper eventually had exposed the entire back of the panicked girl's left thigh.

Gripping the bottom of the left pants leg Dennis used one smooth motion to whisk the carefully cut piece of material away. Discarding the useless piece of denim behind him the proud scissor wielding man lustfully starred at the long smooth leg he had uncovered. Wasting no time imaging what was under the other trouser leg Dennis pinched the material just below his prisoner's butt and began cutting.

Barely able to comprehend her ever worsening situation Lilly felt her second pant leg disappear. With both legs now bare it seemed she lay only in a pair of very short shorts that would make Daisy Duke blush. Squirming her long tanned legs as best she could Lilly froze a moment before pursing her lips and stifling a most involuntary giggle when a single finger stroked the back of her fully exposed thigh. Closing her eyes tight the sensitive young woman clenched her fists and strained to block out more light stroking.

"Mmfff!" Lilly muffled herself as more fingers joined the slow dancing just below her peach like cheeks, chipping away with painful ease at her wall of protest. "Mmmno…nnnn….eenonnehee! Heeheeno!"

Knowing she wouldn't be able to hold out much longer Dennis skipped the gradual deconstruction of his victim's shield and rapidly spidered all ten fingers over the soft backs of her thighs. His reward was instant as a hail of pleading squeals came through the wall. The eager tickler had never imagined anyone could be so ticklish in that spot, but evidently it was more than enough to turn this young woman into a silly school girl.

Her legs were no longer held in place but Lilly still had no escape from the menacing fingers. The begging girl could kick and dance as much as her limited freedom would allow but five fingers stubbornly followed the exposed flesh in every direction. Poking under her cheeks, raking down her thighs and skating carelessly behind her knees. On several occasions Lilly even tried bringing her feet up for protection, only to receive a quick warning tickle on her soles to hastily scare them away.

Keeping with his theme of cruel variety Dennis gripped the very top of the bare legs where they met the shapely butt and squeezed viciously. Roaring laughter sounded in response as he squeezed all the way down until reaching her knees. Digging his fingers in behind her knees caused the girl to kick up and down wildly, the blue eyed man ever aware of his ravenous lust that grew with every touch and scream.

"Aheeheeno! No! Stahap!" Fighting giggles that playfully turned her expression from serious terror to playful idiot Lilly felt that terrible weight descend upon her legs again, although this time higher, just above her knees. "What are you ahaha! going to stopstop! Please nahahahee!"

Once again kneeling either side of her legs Dennis straddled the young woman's thighs. Free to kick up and back to the carpet from the knees down the smooth helpless feet did just that. Even faster did they kick after the smiling tormentor took a refreshing sip of beer and then proceeded to pour the rest of his can all over the bare soles.

The fizzy liquid caused a sudden tingling and a burst of high pitch giggles and sporadic spreading of toes ensued. Ignoring the results of the intentional spill, and the now damp carpet beneath the distracted girl's feet, Dennis took an ankle in each hand and pulled them toward him. Pressing the heels to his strong chest the wickedly leering man wrapped his arms tight around the panicked woman's shins and with a tilt of his head now had the sweet beer soaked soles only a half inch from his face.

Lilly didn't even laugh at first. The fingers were one thing, truly shocking and horrible but a sensation she had felt before. Of course, having fingers dance about her bare feet had never been dished out in such large quantities but it wasn't an unimaginable feeling, as terrible as it was. This however, was something new entirely and it took more than a couple of seconds to even fathom what was going on. Someone, as much as the wincing young woman didn't want to admit even to herself, was licking her tingling bare soles.

She tensed and frowned, and then her mouth opened a little, the corners of her lips dropping like a sad clown. Lilly's body didn't know how to react for the briefest of moments. Such a thought, such a concept, the frozen young woman had no idea what was happening. A broken gasp wavered in through her trembling lips, and then the laughter came, but not in volume. Silent, tormented laughter that squeezed tears from Lilly's eyes.

Nothing came from the wall but Dennis knew after a brief moment that he was certainly getting a reaction. Savoring every sweet drop as his long tongue slid it's tender point along the bare wrinkly arches the ravenous gent could feel the tension in his captive's legs. Every muscle was tensing and her feet were wriggling in a fruitless attempt for escape. Those ten cute little toes were spreading and making tight desperate little curls.

Lilly had gone berserk, her long dark hair an utter mess, her face drenched in sweat and tears. Every time she felt that cruel tongue cruise over the balls of her feet and inbetween her toes it would cause a brand new fright and squeal, every single time. The poor girl's mind was now utterly unhinged, all she could do was react to what could only be defined as pure unbridled tickle torture. It was beyond any playful tickle she'd experienced as a child, beyond even the cruelest of tickles dispensed by ex boyfriends or older cousins. If Lilly's mind hadn't of been so broken she'd have soon realized whoever was doing this to her was obviously enjoying it a great deal.

It took longer than expected to clean all the beer from the silently suffering girl's vulnerable soles, not that having lapped it all up was any reason to stop. With an ever increasing hunger in his eyes Dennis took the big toe of the girl's right foot and it's two neighbors into his mouth and swirled his tongue around as if they were the most delicious candy. Naturally the left foot pressed against his cheek trying helplessly to assist it's friend but by that point whoever this girl was had grown so weak the protest was barely even a blip on his radar.

A long strained breath rushed into Lilly's lungs when finally she collapsed to the carpet and felt her feet do the same. The weight from her legs lifted and with a loud sob the olive skinned girl lay thoroughly shattered. As it was the young damsel's awful ordeal wasn't over and perhaps worse still was the fact Lilly was unsurprised. Feeling the pinching of her butt once again she knew the intent of her cruel neighbor and would have figured it out sooner had she not been totally insane with ticklish sensations. Of course, just because she'd figured out what they were doing didn't mean she wanted it to happen.

"N-NOOO!" Lilly wrenched her throat and weakly patted the wall with the bottom of her loosely clenched fist as she felt the tug of the scissors slicing just above the very bottom of her sexy butt. "Please NOHO! Don't do this!"

Cutting across the top was easy enough but the bottom half would have to be torn. Tossing the scissors behind him Dennis clutched a side each of the half sliced short shorts and pulled slowly. With a satisfying shrrrrip the lustful chap easily removed the small strip of denim over the bare legs sticking out from his wall and revealed a pair of thin cotton panties. He took a moment to admire the shapely woman's butt pressed down by the top of the hole until his attention was interrupted by the portion of material between her legs that sat closest to the carpet.

Taking a step back Dennis scratched the back of his head as he wasn't quite sure what to make of it. None the less, there it was, plain as day. Right there between her thighs, on that sweet pink cotton covering this intruder's womanhood was a soaking wet patch. He considered the possibilities, it could be sweat, she may have wet herself. She was certainly sweating, but not enough for such obvious soak through. Opposingly if the young ticklish girl had indeed wet herself they'd be far more of it. No, this was what it was, as undeniable as Dennis' near aching boner, the tickling turned her on.

A minute passed by, Lilly couldn't see the clock in her kitchen. It had to have been at least a minute, maybe more, her ability to guess time was slowly returning. Hope, that dangerous little light in the back of her mind, began to shine. The mystery neighbor, more than likely a man the young woman had decided, had seemingly disappeared. Lilly knew he could be right there, only an inch away, even less. In her hyper alert state she could have felt the warmth of his breath, but there was nothing. Maybe at last he'd set her free, or maybe he was on the phone inviting his buddies around. Various scenarios battled one another, Lilly's imagination unwilling to suggest anything but the worst possibilities.

"Ahha!" A big goofy smile grew on Lilly's face before quickly transforming into a look of cheerless mirth when an abrupt invasion of light brushing was felt right between her thighs. "Naha! HeeeEeeeiiiiee!"

Dennis flicked the bright yellow feather duster rapidly around her thighs. Holding the white plastic handle the hunk of a man barely had to move his arm as a flick of the wrist was more than enough to produce a storm of girlish giggling. The long bare legs bought themselves together but couldn't help trying to escape the feather touch and parted, only to leave the beautiful center piece exposed once again. Kneeling on next squirming legs Dennis put his ear to the wall and managed a slightly better reception from his muffled wall reception.

"Hahaaaii! Ohgod! Naha!" Although somewhat of a relief from the lung straining belly laughter it was little comfort that this new sensation forced a torrent of unwanted squealing and still managed to send Lilly to the moon with ticklish terror. "Eee! Stopstop! Hahano!"

As the wet patch between her legs grew noticeably darker Dennis wondered if the silly girl was even aware of her own perverted excitement. It wasn't beyond reason, the feather duster wielding fellow mused as he brushed it behind her knees and darted it back between the hysterical girl's thighs, that with all her attention squarely focused on the near relentless tickling she hadn't even registered the randy yearning of her womanhood. Dennis then recalled something about looking at the mouths of gift horses and sped up the feather duster assault.

Unlike his randy tickle toy, Dennis was more than aware of his own enlarging lust. Something would have to be done, and soon, tossing the feather duster aside the hunk of a man was equally as careless with his stylish glasses which were thrown without a second a thought across the room. Hurriedly untucking his shirt Dennis messed his hair even more as he swooped it over his head and discarded it, revealing a smooth well toned chest. Now only in khaki trousers and socks he began to feel a slight relief from the sexual tension with the new found freedom. Picking up the scissors once again it was clear he wanted the bottom half of this young woman to feel the same.

"Ahahee aha…heehee…" Unable to quite shake the giggles Lilly lay shuddering like a lunatic as she could still feel the hundreds of feathery tips dancing atop her thin panties. "hahaohnoho….ohno what now? Please…no more…"

Pressing a knee between her thighs Dennis eased the weakly struggling girl's legs apart and kneeled comfortably between them. Using his own frame to keep the long bare legs from meeting he granted himself full access to the soaking panties which he wasted no time in hooking his index finger under. A loud disgruntled gasp muffled through the wall as the shirtless hunk stretched the thin material away from the delicate skin and easily opened the wet cotton with his scissors.

Feeling the bottom half of her panties cut away from her Lilly screamed before pursing her lips with sudden surprise and humiliation. Feeling the room temperature air caress against the bottom of her smooth shaven mound, and the fact it was spine tinglingly cold by comparison, told the young woman of her lustful problem. Taking a moment to bury her initial panic Lilly sunk deeper into the sea of disbelief that this unbearable experience was turning her on. Figuring she'd argue the facts with herself later panic quickly set back in as the last of the thin material disappeared from half way down her plum like cheeks. From her lower butt cheeks on down, Lilly was totally nude.

"Oh! Ahaha! AhaNO! NOHO! Not there! NOT THEAHOO!" Digging her nails into the carpet Lilly pressed her forehead to the floor and fought between giggles and the rush of warm pleasure, neither of which she wanted and both of which competed for attention as five fingers skated recklessly over what soaking wet mound they could reach. "PLEAAH! NAooOOO! AHR! AhahaEEE!"

Lilly had never been tickled there before, even with the limited access it sent her through the roof with a mix of involuntary reactions. This was too much, something would have to give and unfortunately the emotionally exploding girl knew exactly what it would be. Worse still she knew whoever was tormenting her on the other side knew as well. There was no stopping it, just as there had been no stopping any of what had come before. The feathers, the tongue, the fingers, the endless unmerciful fingers which tickled and tickled and just wouldn’t stop tickling.

He could sense it coming, the muscles of his helpless victim tensing and throbbing. Dennis thought about stopping here, but it would have made no difference, it was inevitable now. The gates were opening and the moans were beginning to significantly drown out the girlish squealing, there was no stopping it. With his free hand he unbuckled his belt and then took one of her lovely butt cheeks in hand, with a cruel tickling squeeze. Speeding up the five fingers down there Dennis grinned eagerly and felt every muscle around him grow instantly taut.

She would have torn her shirt and bra clean off if her mind would have been able to perform such a complicated mechanical procedure. Alas her mind instead was flipped over repeatedly as a bombardment of white hot ecstasy ravaged Lilly's delicate love muscles. An inhuman howl of pure animalistic bliss poured from between her O shaped lips as the orgasmic juice poured just as freely down below. Her eyes nearly popping from their sockets Lilly's brain spun and disintegrated when the tickling didn't stop and a second cataclysmic orgasm burned through her soul.

Taking his fingers away Dennis stood shakily and let his khaki's drop around his ankles. Standing only in his straining white briefs he let out a sigh of proud accomplishment as he lustfully watched the naked girl's bottom half shudder through it's fourth or fifth pulse pounding rush of pleasure. Scratching the back of his head Dennis pondered the fact he had still yet to receive any similar primal pay off. Stepping out from between his captives thighs the near nude hunk leaned down and firmly clasped each of her slender ankles in his hands.

"OooOOOohhoo…gahoo…zzz….wazzut?...wha?" Lilly lay with her arms splayed and reddened cheeks resting on the thick carpet while her cracked and crumbled mind attempted to recover from the eruption of unstoppable bliss that had raked across her body when suddenly she felt the grip around her ankles and began weakly clutching the carpet as she was easily pulled back through the hole. "…n-no…noo! No! NO! NOOOOO!"

Kelly brushed her shoulder length chocolate hair behind her ear as she closed the apartment door behind her. Wandering casually down the hall she slung her hand bag off her shoulder and tossed it onto the couch. Examining the book shelf the beautiful brunette removed a recipe book. Glancing down Kelly quickly thought how messy the carpet looked. Lilly must have finally decided to investigate that peculiar hole. Unlike everything else of hers, Kelly thought, at least Lilly put the book shelf back where it belonged.


THE END​
 
Great story. So I guess it ends with Dennis taking Lilly into his apartment and keeping her as his tickletoy, huh? :)
 
I'm glad you liked it!

I left the end open to everyone's imaginations, but that sounds like the most likely scenario! :D
 
I first read this story a long time ago and until I revisited it, I couldn't have told you anything about it. I knew a girl got stuck in an apartment wall, got tickled, and got pulled into her ticklers apartment but beyond that I didn't remember any of the fine details. And boy, are the details mighty fine. Anyhow, I dropped into this archive looking for this story, found it, read through it again. It was even better than I remembered. Eventually, I came back to the archive later found the first Hysteria Lane. I was really taken by it so I kept coming back to read the series. Eventually I got to Hysteria Lane #5: The Long Road Home and when I got to the end, I hated the ticklers in that story.

I wondered if all the ticklers were that bad and that I just usually didn't notice it. So I went back and started reading the Stuck series. I wanted to see just how “bad” the ticklers in these tickle stories were. I went through attempting to pay attention to the stories' structure, the actions of the active characters (the ticklers are usually driving the action), and the language used to describe what was going on. I hadn't really endeavored on such a task before, I just like the stories.

The plan was to provide some sort of examination of both the ticklers and the ticklees but often just ends up as me rambling. I'm better at focusing on sexy details than providing literary analysis, (all the blood ends up going in the wrong direction). I try to examine the villain characters but my comments represent my stream of consciousness as the story unfolds. I think at this point I had read Stuck #1 twice before, and Hysteria Lane #1-5 once. These are all great stories and they're always good despite how I feel about the characters.

Stuck #1: Hole in the Wall

M/f





Lilly had always been curious about the hole. With that small exception the high rise apartment building where she and her roommate, Kelly, stayed was very well kept. But right there behind the waist-high book shelf on the left as you walked in the door of the young women's 14th story apartment was the mysterious hole. Lily knew it had been there since the day her and Kelly moved in, and they'd never bothered to move the book shelf since. But Lily, the short voluptuous olive skinned twenty year old she was, couldn't help but wonder.

Came the day Lilly found out. Common sense told the green eyed girl it was simply a gaping wound in the wall that lead to the neighboring apartment, but common sense never lead anyone to adventure. Had the big breasted amateur detective known what such adventures would entail, Lilly would have tossed her curiosity sailing out the window. Of course she wasn't really a detective of any sort, she worked in a coffee shop thus her experience with adventure proved somewhat limited. None the less, today was her day off so she could be a detective.

The hole itself began at the carpet and wasn't very high at all. It looked like a small cave, or a giant cartoon mouse house door. The edges were slightly jagged where whatever, or whoever it was, had once smashed through. Dragging the book case in short sharp tugs across the floor Lilly took a moment to gather herself, titled forward and with a raised eyebrow peered through. Straight through to the neighboring apartment.

"Huh." Lily sighed to herself somewhat disappointed at the uneventful discovery while she stood in her tight denim blue jeans, thin white cotton socks and casual yellow t-shirt.

Crouching down to her knees Lilly placed her hands on the floor and performed a half push up. Bringing her head close to the soft thick carpet Lilly turned her head and squinted comically while she observed the utterly mundane view through the once intriguing hole. The bottom half of a couch, a book case, some kitchen cabinets at the far back. And empty.

It was certainly a tight squeeze as the sultry young woman squirmed on her well toned tummy through the hole. When it came to her firm plum like butt Lilly found herself having to claw and pull at the carpet only to pop out suddenly startling the young home invader. Climbing to her feet Lilly examined the apartment, it was much the same layout as her own, the carpet was identical.

There were some movie posters, a rather extensive DVD collection on a rack against the wall she'd just wiggled through and the book shelf appeared to be stocked mostly by graphic novels. It was well kept, the kitchen was tidy. There were some magazines and two T.V remotes on a small table next to the couch. The bedroom had more movie posters and a technical book Lilly didn't bother investigating sitting on the bedside table.
Seems like a normal enough guy, thinking maybe a villain character would be a bit more unusual or maybe that’s the point he’s plain and sinister, similar to Will from hysteria lane.
After nearly an hour Lilly had her fill of snooping around and crouched back toward the carpet as she mentally planned the rest of her day. Scooting along her stomach once again Lilly reached her arms through the secret hole and pulled herself forward, the small of her back stroking the wall a moment before the young trespasser's shapely behind struggled to squeeze pass.
Christ above that’s a long time!
"Unh!" Lilly gritted her teeth and tried jolting herself through to no avail.

Laughing to herself Lilly pushed at the wall and scrapped at the carpet while the thought she could have simply used the door popped into her mind. It had been no easy task jamming herself through the first time, what had changed Lilly couldn't possibly fathom but the silly girl was now well and truly trapped.

A half hour or more passed before Lilly succumbed to the fact she wasn't going anywhere under her own strength. Kelly would get a shock upon arriving home, and it would be hours. Sighing with a sense of irony and good natured humor Lilly folded her arms on the floor and rested her head. A moment later the dark haired girl's eyes opened widely when the distinct click of her neighbor's door could be heard from behind.

Good natured, laughs at self , Lilly is a mischievous protagonist.

Dennis closed the door behind him, turned with laptop under one arm and keys swinging in the other and saw a pair of denim blue jeans and white cotton socks sticking out from his wall. Raising his dark eye brows over the rim of his expensive glasses Dennis took a step closer and examined what was quite clearly a young woman's lower half. The wall appeared to cut off about half way along her apparently very well toned butt.

Looking around his apartment curiously Dennis wandered to the kitchen bench where he slowly placed the laptop and keys. Scratching the top of his head, the handsome thirty two year old ruffled his sensible hair cut slightly and blinked with a sense of disbelief. Removing his navy blue over shirt Dennis lay that next to the laptop and stood in his khaki pants, white t-shirt and business shoes.

32-20 =
Sensible haircut? Good Guy?

It took a moment of starring at the squirming legs sticking out of his wall before surprise slowly began to give way to amusement. Opening the fridge Dennis removed a cold can of beer and with a crack and a hiss opened the cool beverage. Smiling at the young intruder's predicament he took a sip and leaned against the bench top casually while trying to decide what one does in such a unique situation.

On the other side of the wall Lilly had been struggling in a fruitless attempt to free herself. If only she could pull herself through whoever was behind her would never see her face and she could deny all knowledge of the incident. Alas, it was not to be and the highly embarrassed girl soon decided it was time to ask for help, hoping whoever owned the apartment she'd snooped around in wasn't already calling the police.

"H-hellooo? Is someone there?" Lilly turned as best she could and called toward the blank wall. "Listen I…I'm really sorry about this…I swear I didn't take anything, I was just interested and I know it was stupid…I'm really trapped here!"

She let a moment pass for response but nothing came. In fact Lilly hadn't heard a thing since the click of the door, perhaps her imagination was getting the better of her. Maybe the door didn't click, it could have been something else, although what was a mystery. Propping herself up on one arm Lilly reached behind her with the other and tried banging on the wall but this too elicited no result.

"Seriously is someone there? Hello? I'm really sorry!" Lilly called again to the faceless wall that kept her in position, her calls seeming to fall only be heard by herself until she felt movement atop her calve muscles. "Hey! Hey who's there?! What are you doing?!"

With his back facing the wall Dennis put his knees either side of the confused girl's lower legs and straddled them comfortably. Placing his beer on the carpet next to him the smiling hunk sat down pinning the two squirming legs underneath. From between his own legs poked two cute little wiggling cotton socked feet. A sudden frantic banging on the wall didn't phase Dennis as he laughed to himself and shook his head at the hilarity of this poor girl's situation.

"Hey! Help me out!" Lilly called as she felt the weight on her lower legs before suddenly feeling someone's finger lightly stroking her sock covered left sole. "Eee-ahh! Hey! Eeeeiii! Don't! Stop that!"

Wiggling his five fingers on the trapped sole Dennis could hear the slightly muffled squeals coming from behind. The girl's right foot began trying to defend it's friend but the kneeling man made short work of that by employing his other hand to dance it's fingers all over it. With increasing speed ten fingers scribbled around the frantically squirming sock covered soles and caused a hail of girlish giggles to project from the wall.

Beating at the wall soon proved to require too much coordination and Lilly began beating and clawing at the carpet before her. Unfortunately for the pleading young woman she just so happened to be incredibly ticklish, worse still she couldn't stand the thought, let alone the actual act. Being unable to even have a chance at escape was a virtual nightmare, suddenly made all too real.

"Eeeeiiihh! Nono! Heehee stop stop!" Lilly begged as she felt the ten fingers spidering carelessly about the thin cotton covering her delicate soles. "Oh pleaseheeheese! Stopiiiiit! Eeeheee! Stop tickling mehahaha!"

Raking four fingers on each foot from the balls of the helpless feet to the white cotton heels produced new deeper laughter. Dennis turned his head and looked back to see the girl's knees and thighs bouncing on the carpet, the lower half of her trapped butt tensing randomly as he admired the peachy denim cheeks. With a half grin the handsome dark haired man turned his attention to his captive's heels and began drawing small speedy circles with the tips of his index fingers.

"Listen to mehee! Stop! Please! Aha!" Lilly pleaded as she managed to regain some measure of sanity as the heel tickling forced sporadic giggles while she tried to reason with her mystery tickler. "Can yahano! Can you hear me!? Haha! Stop tickling me! Oh no! Please DON'T!"

Pinching the middle of the right thin cotton sock Dennis ceased the tickling and began to slowly slide it from the begging young woman's foot. The muffled pleas from the faceless girl began in panicked earnest and once again loud banging drummed from the other side. Purposely taking his time the intensely amused man watched as a soft wrinkly sole was revealed, high arches and well defined delicate balls that once the sock was finally gone flowed flawlessly down onto five cute nervous looking toes.

"Nono please! I'm sorry! Okay please don't do this!" Screaming at the wall Lilly could scarcely believe her situation as in her heart of hearts she knew what was about to happen. "Don't! No! StopstopstAAAAEEEE!"

So far so semi-playful, fictionally reasonable menace and a punishment for our naughty nosey protagonist

Clenching her eyes shut Lilly slammed the carpet with the bottoms of her fists when five cruel fingers suddenly skated around her silky smooth bare foot. Spreading her cute toes Lilly's still sock covered left foot now tried in vain to protect it's bare friend only to be viciously pounced upon by the other five fingers. The two sensations were driving the poor girl into hysterics as the cotton sock forced girlish squealing and playful giggles while the bare foot assault drowned out everything else producing loud belly laughter and screams for mercy.

In Lilly's wild state of mind she had no manor of time keeping but it was nearly two whole minutes before tears of laughter and dread began streaming down her quickly reddening cheeks. Tears weren't the only thing flowing freely as helpless laughter burst from between the poor girl's full red lips. Although pointless she continued to beat and flail her arms atop the carpet while rolling side to side squishing her large fleshy boobs against the carpet producing beautiful cleavage.

Dennis had never done anything quite like this before, although he was quickly getting the hang of it. Releasing the socked left foot the fast learner took the vulnerable toes of the bare right and pulled them back, forcing the bare sole to stretch taut and holding it firmly immobile. To a chorus of heavy breathing and screaming protest Dennis took his free hand and slowly raked his nails down the bare sole causing a howl of tickled terror.

Becoming the villain? Dennis’s origin story?

"Aaaahahaha! Noohohooo!" Lilly screeched trying to bury her face in the carpet and dig her fingers into the soft floor as the maddening digits danced around her totally trapped and extremely sensitive toes. "Plehahaha! Naahah! Nomoreehahaaaaaa!"

Not content with simply showing the cheeky intruder whose boss Dennis was developing quite a taste for the horrified muffled shrieks that his fingers created with such ease. Sending all ten fingers on a lightning fast attack to the bare foot caused wordless strained cries of laughter to bellow from behind. Without warning Dennis soon deployed all ten fingers to the socked sole causing wild giggles and throat wrenching prayers for a cease fire. Back and forth went the ten wicked fingers, dancing over every inch of the bare right sole and it's wiggling toes then to the twisting socked foot that longed to be left alone.

See above point. Also the uneven morality of fiction: Lilly was wrong and now is being “lightly punished” or Dennis is getting “revenge”

The conflicting sensations of socked foot and bare were splitting Lilly's increasingly fragile psyche. Thinking straight was no longer an option, a thousand broken thoughts stampeded through the screaming olive skinned girl's mind all of which were reaching toward the same conclusion, more than anything she wanted this to stop. Unfortunately as Lilly grit her teeth and stressed to block out the overwhelming sensations constantly stroking her feet she once again felt the ghastly shock of her left cotton sock being quickly pulled away.

Both anxious feet now naked before him Dennis took a moment to admire the smoothness of his tickle toy's soles. Those five cute little toes, the high arches, the creamy balls, soft sides and flawless heels. He'd never had any particular fondness for a woman's feet before but as the handsome attacker pondered the extraordinary effects his lightest touch could cause a new thankfulness dawned on him.

Raising his hands high above him Dennis began wiggling his fingers and slowly descending them towards the helpless panicked bare soles. Each foot was frantically trying to cover it's partner as if they could see what was coming, awaiting the inevitable onslaught with stomach sinking dread. Grinning boisterously Dennis watched as the defenseless soles sensed the warmth of his hands less than half an inch away when the adorable toes spread wide.

"Anything but that! PLEASE!" Lilly gasped for much needed breath and weakly battered the wall with what strength she could muster as she felt the coming assault. "AHA! Noho! NOHO! NOOHOOOO!"

Recognizable words were swiftly swallowed up by uncontrollable laughter as ten fingers ran rampant over every fully exposed inch of bare upturned feet. Tears of tickled terror freely streamed down Lilly's reddened stretched cheeks. Thrashing, pulling, pushing, nothing worked and it drove her completely mad. The dark haired girl's feet were totally trapped and being merciless tickled, it was all encompassing full blown torture.

In his new found intoxication Dennis had lost track of time almost as much as the girl on the other side of the wall. Unwilling to pry his gaze from the quivering feet beneath him the glasses sporting gentleman had no intention of slowing down. Dennis' fingers stroked, poked and evilly caressed the young woman's soles, digging under her unguarded toes. It was quite some time before his conscious mind registered the rock hard erection straining the zipper of his khakis.

Dennis as a torturer? Losing track of time and self-control. The sexual component.

Laying her palms flat on the thick carpet Lilly rested her head face down and sobbed in deep desperate breaths. The weight had finally lifted from her now limp jelly like legs. Lilly didn't know, and didn't want to know, how long whoever-it-was had been entertaining themselves with her luckless bare soles. However long it had been it was far longer than the exhausted girl would ever imagined she could have survived under such ticklish circumstances.

Positive? Neutral? Sarcastic?

Gaining what little composure she could muster Lilly proped herself up with her elbows and wiped the tears from her blurred vision. Still breathing heavily another hopeless tug at the hole proved nothing as she once again collapsed lying flat on the floor. Once her mind had gathered enough sense to reform real thoughts the idea of calling for help soon occurred, shortly followed by the incredibly disappointing fact that if help were coming it would have arrived by now.

"…HEY! Oh my God!" Lilly turned as her eyes shot wide open when a distinct pinching of her lower butt was felt. "Let go! Stop!"

Kicking her legs and bashing at the wall with what limited maneuverability she had Lilly was dismayed to feel room temperature air brushing the back of her right thigh. Someone was holding, and somehow opening, her jeans just below Lilly's well held butt. No amount of bashing or kicking seemed to deter her would be stripper eventually had exposed the entire back of the panicked girl's left thigh.

Gripping the bottom of the left pants leg Dennis used one smooth motion to whisk the carefully cut piece of material away. Discarding the useless piece of denim behind him the proud scissor wielding man lustfully starred at the long smooth leg he had uncovered. Wasting no time imaging what was under the other trouser leg Dennis pinched the material just below his prisoner's butt and began cutting.

Moral Event Horizon? Destruction of Property? Stripping? Lust? Not considering actions. “useless piece of denim” Up until this point more friendly? If the two were friends everything up til now would be justifiable “punishing brat behavior”

Barely able to comprehend her ever worsening situation Lilly felt her second pant leg disappear. With both legs now bare it seemed she lay only in a pair of very short shorts that would make Daisy Duke blush. Squirming her long tanned legs as best she could Lilly froze a moment before pursing her lips and stifling a most involuntary giggle when a single finger stroked the back of her fully exposed thigh. Closing her eyes tight the sensitive young woman clenched her fists and strained to block out more light stroking.

Most involuntary and full exposed as language choices to frame the morality of what is taking place

"Mmfff!" Lilly muffled herself as more fingers joined the slow dancing just below her peach like cheeks, chipping away with painful ease at her wall of protest. "Mmmno…nnnn….eenonnehee! Heeheeno!"

Knowing she wouldn't be able to hold out much longer Dennis skipped the gradual deconstruction of his victim's shield and rapidly spidered all ten fingers over the soft backs of her thighs. His reward was instant as a hail of pleading squeals came through the wall. The eager tickler had never imagined anyone could be so ticklish in that spot, but evidently it was more than enough to turn this young woman into a silly school girl.

Her legs were no longer held in place but Lilly still had no escape from the menacing fingers. The begging girl could kick and dance as much as her limited freedom would allow but five fingers stubbornly followed the exposed flesh in every direction. Poking under her cheeks, raking down her thighs and skating carelessly behind her knees. On several occasions Lilly even tried bringing her feet up for protection, only to receive a quick warning tickle on her soles to hastily scare them away.

Keeping with his theme of cruel variety Dennis gripped the very top of the bare legs where they met the shapely butt and squeezed viciously. Roaring laughter sounded in response as he squeezed all the way down until reaching her knees. Digging his fingers in behind her knees caused the girl to kick up and down wildly, the blue eyed man ever aware of his ravenous lust that grew with every touch and scream.

Some of the more normal language has a menacing tone based on reader’s views

Problematic ‘bottom half of a stranger’ lust

"Aheeheeno! No! Stahap!" Fighting giggles that playfully turned her expression from serious terror to playful idiot Lilly felt that terrible weight descend upon her legs again, although this time higher, just above her knees. "What are you ahaha! going to stopstop! Please nahahahee!"

Once again kneeling either side of her legs Dennis straddled the young woman's thighs. Free to kick up and back to the carpet from the knees down the smooth helpless feet did just that. Even faster did they kick after the smiling tormentor took a refreshing sip of beer and then proceeded to pour the rest of his can all over the bare soles.

The fizzy liquid caused a sudden tingling and a burst of high pitch giggles and sporadic spreading of toes ensued. Ignoring the results of the intentional spill, and the now damp carpet beneath the distracted girl's feet, Dennis took an ankle in each hand and pulled them toward him. Pressing the heels to his strong chest the wickedly leering man wrapped his arms tight around the panicked woman's shins and with a tilt of his head now had the sweet beer soaked soles only a half inch from his face.

Lilly didn't even laugh at first. The fingers were one thing, truly shocking and horrible but a sensation she had felt before. Of course, having fingers dance about her bare feet had never been dished out in such large quantities but it wasn't an unimaginable feeling, as terrible as it was. This however, was something new entirely and it took more than a couple of seconds to even fathom what was going on. Someone, as much as the wincing young woman didn't want to admit even to herself, was licking her tingling bare soles.

She tensed and frowned, and then her mouth opened a little, the corners of her lips dropping like a sad clown. Lilly's body didn't know how to react for the briefest of moments. Such a thought, such a concept, the frozen young woman had no idea what was happening. A broken gasp wavered in through her trembling lips, and then the laughter came, but not in volume. Silent, tormented laughter that squeezed tears from Lilly's eyes.

Nothing came from the wall but Dennis knew after a brief moment that he was certainly getting a reaction. Savoring every sweet drop as his long tongue slid it's tender point along the bare wrinkly arches the ravenous gent could feel the tension in his captive's legs. Every muscle was tensing and her feet were wriggling in a fruitless attempt for escape. Those ten cute little toes were spreading and making tight desperate little curls.

Objective or Dennis’s point of view?

Lilly had gone berserk, her long dark hair an utter mess, her face drenched in sweat and tears. Every time she felt that cruel tongue cruise over the balls of her feet and inbetween her toes it would cause a brand new fright and squeal, every single time. The poor girl's mind was now utterly unhinged, all she could do was react to what could only be defined as pure unbridled tickle torture. It was beyond any playful tickle she'd experienced as a child, beyond even the cruelest of tickles dispensed by ex boyfriends or older cousins. If Lilly's mind hadn't of been so broken she'd have soon realized whoever was doing this to her was obviously enjoying it a great deal.

Does Dennis realize this?

It took longer than expected to clean all the beer from the silently suffering girl's vulnerable soles, not that having lapped it all up was any reason to stop. With an ever increasing hunger in his eyes Dennis took the big toe of the girl's right foot and it's two neighbors into his mouth and swirled his tongue around as if they were the most delicious candy. Naturally the left foot pressed against his cheek trying helplessly to assist it's friend but by that point whoever this girl was had grown so weak the protest was barely even a blip on his radar.

A long strained breath rushed into Lilly's lungs when finally she collapsed to the carpet and felt her feet do the same. The weight from her legs lifted and with a loud sob the olive skinned girl lay thoroughly shattered. As it was the young damsel's awful ordeal wasn't over and perhaps worse still was the fact Lilly was unsurprised. Feeling the pinching of her butt once again she knew the intent of her cruel neighbor and would have figured it out sooner had she not been totally insane with ticklish sensations. Of course, just because she'd figured out what they were doing didn't mean she wanted it to happen.

"N-NOOO!" Lilly wrenched her throat and weakly patted the wall with the bottom of her loosely clenched fist as she felt the tug of the scissors slicing just above the very bottom of her sexy butt. "Please NOHO! Don't do this!"

Cutting across the top was easy enough but the bottom half would have to be torn. Tossing the scissors behind him Dennis clutched a side each of the half sliced short shorts and pulled slowly. With a satisfying shrrrrip the lustful chap easily removed the small strip of denim over the bare legs sticking out from his wall and revealed a pair of thin cotton panties. He took a moment to admire the shapely woman's butt pressed down by the top of the hole until his attention was interrupted by the portion of material between her legs that sat closest to the carpet.

Why? Why now? What changed? Emboldened? More Ravenous?

Taking a step back Dennis scratched the back of his head as he wasn't quite sure what to make of it. None the less, there it was, plain as day. Right there between her thighs, on that sweet pink cotton covering this intruder's womanhood was a soaking wet patch. He considered the possibilities, it could be sweat, she may have wet herself. She was certainly sweating, but not enough for such obvious soak through. Opposingly if the young ticklish girl had indeed wet herself they'd be far more of it. No, this was what it was, as undeniable as Dennis' near aching boner, the tickling turned her on.

Lilly’s enjoyment is irrelevant although it feels almost wrong to say that. Although at this point Dennis is clearly shown to be contemplating. Although as the text suggest he may not be thinking completely rationally

A minute passed by, Lilly couldn't see the clock in her kitchen. It had to have been at least a minute, maybe more, her ability to guess time was slowly returning. Hope, that dangerous little light in the back of her mind, began to shine. The mystery neighbor, more than likely a man the young woman had decided, had seemingly disappeared. Lilly knew he could be right there, only an inch away, even less. In her hyper alert state she could have felt the warmth of his breath, but there was nothing. Maybe at last he'd set her free, or maybe he was on the phone inviting his buddies around. Various scenarios battled one another, Lilly's imagination unwilling to suggest anything but the worst possibilities.

Interesting. Wonder why she reached this conclusion.

"Ahha!" A big goofy smile grew on Lilly's face before quickly transforming into a look of cheerless mirth when an abrupt invasion of light brushing was felt right between her thighs. "Naha! HeeeEeeeiiiiee!"

Dennis flicked the bright yellow feather duster rapidly around her thighs. Holding the white plastic handle the hunk of a man barely had to move his arm as a flick of the wrist was more than enough to produce a storm of girlish giggling. The long bare legs bought themselves together but couldn't help trying to escape the feather touch and parted, only to leave the beautiful center piece exposed once again. Kneeling on next squirming legs Dennis put his ear to the wall and managed a slightly better reception from his muffled wall reception.

“Invasion”. Language explores the paradox of tickle torture.
Sadistic

"Hahaaaii! Ohgod! Naha!" Although somewhat of a relief from the lung straining belly laughter it was little comfort that this new sensation forced a torrent of unwanted squealing and still managed to send Lilly to the moon with ticklish terror. "Eee! Stopstop! Hahano!"

As the wet patch between her legs grew noticeably darker Dennis wondered if the silly girl was even aware of her own perverted excitement. It wasn't beyond reason, the feather duster wielding fellow mused as he brushed it behind her knees and darted it back between the hysterical girl's thighs, that with all her attention squarely focused on the near relentless tickling she hadn't even registered the randy yearning of her womanhood. Dennis then recalled something about looking at the mouths of gift horses and sped up the feather duster assault.

She’s the pervert? And he muses.

Unlike his randy tickle toy, Dennis was more than aware of his own enlarging lust. Something would have to be done, and soon, tossing the feather duster aside the hunk of a man was equally as careless with his stylish glasses which were thrown without a second a thought across the room. Hurriedly untucking his shirt Dennis messed his hair even more as he swooped it over his head and discarded it, revealing a smooth well toned chest. Now only in khaki trousers and socks he began to feel a slight relief from the sexual tension with the new found freedom. Picking up the scissors once again it was clear he wanted the bottom half of this young woman to feel the same.

Wants his captive to feel freedom?

"Ahahee aha…heehee…" Unable to quite shake the giggles Lilly lay shuddering like a lunatic as she could still feel the hundreds of feathery tips dancing atop her thin panties. "hahaohnoho….ohno what now? Please…no more…"

Pressing a knee between her thighs Dennis eased the weakly struggling girl's legs apart and kneeled comfortably between them. Using his own frame to keep the long bare legs from meeting he granted himself full access to the soaking panties which he wasted no time in hooking his index finger under. A loud disgruntled gasp muffled through the wall as the shirtless hunk stretched the thin material away from the delicate skin and easily opened the wet cotton with his scissors.

Feeling the bottom half of her panties cut away from her Lilly screamed before pursing her lips with sudden surprise and humiliation. Feeling the room temperature air caress against the bottom of her smooth shaven mound, and the fact it was spine tinglingly cold by comparison, told the young woman of her lustful problem. Taking a moment to bury her initial panic Lilly sunk deeper into the sea of disbelief that this unbearable experience was turning her on. Figuring she'd argue the facts with herself later panic quickly set back in as the last of the thin material disappeared from half way down her plum like cheeks. From her lower butt cheeks on down, Lilly was totally nude.

Problematic and seemingly self-explanatory

How much does this matter? How does the argument go?

"Oh! Ahaha! AhaNO! NOHO! Not there! NOT THEAHOO!" Digging her nails into the carpet Lilly pressed her forehead to the floor and fought between giggles and the rush of warm pleasure, neither of which she wanted and both of which competed for attention as five fingers skated recklessly over what soaking wet mound they could reach. "PLEAAH! NAooOOO! AHR! AhahaEEE!"

Lilly had never been tickled there before, even with the limited access it sent her through the roof with a mix of involuntary reactions. This was too much, something would have to give and unfortunately the emotionally exploding girl knew exactly what it would be. Worse still she knew whoever was tormenting her on the other side knew as well. There was no stopping it, just as there had been no stopping any of what had come before. The feathers, the tongue, the fingers, the endless unmerciful fingers which tickled and tickled and just wouldn’t stop tickling.

He could sense it coming, the muscles of his helpless victim tensing and throbbing. Dennis thought about stopping here, but it would have made no difference, it was inevitable now. The gates were opening and the moans were beginning to significantly drown out the girlish squealing, there was no stopping it. With his free hand he unbuckled his belt and then took one of her lovely butt cheeks in hand, with a cruel tickling squeeze. Speeding up the five fingers down there Dennis grinned eagerly and felt every muscle around him grow instantly taut.

Context is incredibly important

She would have torn her shirt and bra clean off if her mind would have been able to perform such a complicated mechanical procedure. Alas her mind instead was flipped over repeatedly as a bombardment of white hot ecstasy ravaged Lilly's delicate love muscles. An inhuman howl of pure animalistic bliss poured from between her O shaped lips as the orgasmic juice poured just as freely down below. Her eyes nearly popping from their sockets Lilly's brain spun and disintegrated when the tickling didn't stop and a second cataclysmic orgasm burned through her soul.

Blurring the lines

Taking his fingers away Dennis stood shakily and let his khaki's drop around his ankles. Standing only in his straining white briefs he let out a sigh of proud accomplishment as he lustfully watched the naked girl's bottom half shudder through it's fourth or fifth pulse pounding rush of pleasure. Scratching the back of his head Dennis pondered the fact he had still yet to receive any similar primal pay off. Stepping out from between his captives thighs the near nude hunk leaned down and firmly clasped each of her slender ankles in his hands.

Definitely not a nice guy

"OooOOOohhoo…gahoo…zzz….wazzut?...wha?" Lilly lay with her arms splayed and reddened cheeks resting on the thick carpet while her cracked and crumbled mind attempted to recover from the eruption of unstoppable bliss that had raked across her body when suddenly she felt the grip around her ankles and began weakly clutching the carpet as she was easily pulled back through the hole. "…n-no…noo! No! NO! NOOOOO!"

Kelly brushed her shoulder length chocolate hair behind her ear as she closed the apartment door behind her. Wandering casually down the hall she slung her hand bag off her shoulder and tossed it onto the couch. Examining the book shelf the beautiful brunette removed a recipe book. Glancing down Kelly quickly thought how messy the carpet looked. Lilly must have finally decided to investigate that peculiar hole. Unlike everything else of hers, Kelly thought, at least Lilly put the book shelf back where it belonged.


THE END​

It may just be me but something about the Kelly part at the end made me think that all was right. Now that I’m in the over-analyze business/mode. How’d the bookshelf get put back? Lilly’s previous objections to what was happening to her were eventually “rewarded” To be honest, this is a very generous interpretation but I cannot convince myself it is a wrong one.
 
I first read this story a long time ago and until I revisited it, I couldn't have told you anything about it. I knew a girl got stuck in an apartment wall, got tickled, and got pulled into her ticklers apartment but beyond that I didn't remember any of the fine details. And boy, are the details mighty fine. Anyhow, I dropped into this archive looking for this story, found it, read through it again. It was even better than I remembered. Eventually, I came back to the archive later found the first Hysteria Lane. I was really taken by it so I kept coming back to read the series. Eventually I got to Hysteria Lane #5: The Long Road Home and when I got to the end, I hated the ticklers in that story.

I wondered if all the ticklers were that bad and that I just usually didn't notice it. So I went back and started reading the Stuck series. I wanted to see just how “bad” the ticklers in these tickle stories were. I went through attempting to pay attention to the stories' structure, the actions of the active characters (the ticklers are usually driving the action), and the language used to describe what was going on. I hadn't really endeavored on such a task before, I just like the stories.

The plan was to provide some sort of examination of both the ticklers and the ticklees but often just ends up as me rambling. I'm better at focusing on sexy details than providing literary analysis, (all the blood ends up going in the wrong direction). I try to examine the villain characters but my comments represent my stream of consciousness as the story unfolds. I think at this point I had read Stuck #1 twice before, and Hysteria Lane #1-5 once. These are all great stories and they're always good despite how I feel about the characters.

Wow! Thanks so much for the kind words longstory, and the thoughtful analysis! I was pretty darn amazed to check this thread and find such a detailed response- not usually what pops up! :D

Given how much thought you've put into your examination of both this and it's followup, I'll do my best to contribute and hope I can offer some insight. I'm more than happy to discuss all things tickle-fiction here or in PM, so feel free to take that route too if you feel the urge! Also, if you haven't read it already, I did an interview with my good friend Primetime a couple of years ago that might be of interest.

Your note about hating the ticklers in Hysteria Lane #5 is something I've discussed once or twice before, and is kind of a curious fact that it doesn't come up more often. While the villains aren't necessarily written to be hated in most of my stories, it's fascinating to me that more people don't express disdain for 'lers across all of tickle-fiction. The easiest explanation of this I can think of is; most readers are more than likely putting themselves in the 'lers shoes. A smaller group are probably using the 'lee as their window into the world, and in either instance the fantasy is achieved. Unlike a standard hero/villain story where audiences naturally side with the hero, readers of tickle-fiction are generally going to have an innate desire to be either hero, villain, or even both.

That being said, I would guess someone without a tickling fetish would almost certainly end up hating the 'lers in most of the more sadistically themed tickling fiction. It's honestly a pretty sensible reaction, because -and I'm speaking for my stories alone here- the bulk of 'lers in these stories are certainly performing some level of sexual assault. While I tend to tiptoe carefully around avoiding outright rape, there's no denying that forcibly tickling a person against their will, often stripping them nude and doing all manner of nastiness to them, is heinous and would almost certainly result in varying degrees of trauma. These are heavy subjects to bring up and rightfully so, which is why they don't show up in the stories themselves.

I'm sure there's rare exceptions, but most readers aren't going to want to have their fantasy ruined by reminding them how much jail time the 'lers should get, and how much therapy the 'lees are going need afterward. In the interest of maintaining the fantasy the more realistic impacts on our characters are purposefully -at least on my end- glossed over. Like every other genre these things don't usually hold up under scrutiny. It's why when people do hate the 'lers, or feel sympathy for the 'lee, my reaction isn't confusion, it's "Yes, that is totally understandable.". The 'lers in these stories might not always start out as terrible people, but they almost always end up as absolute scum -at least when viewed through a real world lens, rather than the narration. Which brings us, in a roundabout kind of way, to our friend Dennis.

Dennis, of Stuck #1, is the kind of character who I tend to lean toward when writing 'lers more often than not. He starts out friendly and maybe teasing with no real plan, but before long gets carried away. It's an idea I find truly fascinating and enjoy playing with, this idea that a seemingly normal person -going about a normal day with normal plans- can lose all sense of who they thought they were by day's end due to circumstance and a lack of willpower. A character like Dennis has probably never given much thought to tickling people, no more than the average person on the street. But because I write tickle fiction, when the opportunity arises to freely tickle someone who's outrageously ticklish, this excites him. It's a different kind of motivation than say, a character like Mr. Lucas from the Tickle Tutor series, because that desire for cruelty isn't there from the start -it might not even ever be there.

Over in the Stuck #2 thread, you talk about the character Sam and how his naivety is a big part of what causes him to take part in a preexisting situation (Kelly has been tickling a rather distraught Joanna when Sam walks in). This was a great observation, because it's what's so key to tickling going beyond playful to uncomfortable for a person being tickled in both fiction and real life. To offer a real life example, a girlfriend of mine had never considered that tickling could be a domination/submission activity, she made a point to remark on this once. In hindsight for her it was obvious that tickling could be viewed in such a manner, but until that realization it had always remained a silly children's game, or something friends and lovers do to playfully tease one another. For a character like Sam who holds that same mentality, he's just having a playful game with a friend, he doesn't realize -at least not until it's too late- that Joanna is far beyond the point of having fun. Tickling is silly and the people laugh when you do it, so it must be okay...right? Additionally, in some cases the 'lee gets turned on involuntarily, like Lily in Stuck. Noticing this arousal gives characters like Dennis a sort of justification -they might still know it's wrong, but it's a similar argument to "if you're laughing, you're enjoying it." It's not true, but it's enough of a sign to make a (shaky) argument for consent.

On the far-off other end of that line is the previously mentioned Mr. Lucas. Here's a character, for those unfamiliar, who usually plans his attacks and lives for the suffering of his victims. While one could certainly make an argument that characters like Sam and Dennis aren't villains up until a certain point, I think anyone would be hard pressed to suggest the same of Mr. Lucas. He is an out and out bad guy, holding no illusions nor ignorance as to the effect his actions will have on the people he tickles, and he likes it very much. In fact, Mr. Lucas even uses that general idea of tickling being a silly game to lure his victims into more dire circumstances.

Of course there are many variations on these ideas about villains and their motives, but those are the broad strokes as I see them so far. I hope I've given you at least a little of what you were looking for in your analysis, which I enjoyed very much indeed by the way.

Oh, no, I'm not going to tell you who put the bookshelf back :D. I know who did it, but I also like the ambiguity and the thought that every reader has their own idea of how it got there. I don't want to give a definitive answer because, much like what happens to Lily after Dennis drags her through the hole, it's a lot more compelling to leave such things to the imagination.

Thanks again longstory, this was a lot of fun! Feel free to continue the discussion -I have a working keyboard and more free time these days, so I should respond fairly quickly. All the best!
 
Looking back, I'm not 100% on why the Magurtys are so much worse. I'm starting to think it's a moving target. Not to get too much into it, I think it’s some combination of other factors. In Hysteria Lane #5, the balance just wasn’t on with the Magurtys, which in the end doesn’t even mean much because I still enjoyed the story. It’s all on a curve. I just did a write up for Stuck#3 and in the early going I was pretty cool with it because of what Kelly did to Joanna, but that just baseless rationalization. In Stuck #1, it’s very easy to get into Dennis’s shoes as he gets Lilly out of hers.

Another big thing is my views on tickling are so far away from someone without a tickling fetish, so I can’t be sure how far any of these situations would go.
Karmic punishments are always so great. They allow for retribution while continuing the fantasy. Revenge stories are usually great, as is seeing someone get their just desserts. In connected stories like these, it’s enjoyable to see a tickler get theirs, as in Stuck#3. It works even better for me when I have that knowledge.

There is some satisfaction that comes from the fact that the heroes and villains come in all shapes and sizes. It lends to the richness of the world.
As far as the bookshelf, I was thinking it would have to be Lilly herself and that she did it of her own free will. It may just be optimism though. Maybe Lilly doesn’t get her happy ending. The possibilities are numerous. I think the one I go with is Dennis and Lilly, somehow, end up taking a liking to each other and have various tickle shenanigans that spill over into the universe but I have my doubts about this.

I’ve been going back and forward on how connected the stories are and how the timeline all fits together. It’s not a huge deal. I just mention it sometimes.
Reading through that interview was very enlightening.Thanks for the link.
 
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