evilghost
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I was chating with someone else trying to make an interactive story, but the other person left without a warning so i finished it myself. Ticklee was suggested by the person who left before finishing the story and the story is posted in almost exact form as it was on the chat. I'm not a native English speaker so there could be some mistakes (so please don't be too grammar Nazi for me). So here it is:
Mickie James was walking through the streets and decided to go to a city park in a night . She was wearing: a jeans shorts with leather belt, white socks, sneakers and white halter top, not covering her belly.
She heard strange rumors about the park and wanted to check them out.
Sometime after she entered the park, she hear some strange voice coming out from the bush. It was a man wearing “anonymous” mask whose voice sounded like the devil is speaking to her by himself. He made compliments about Mickies outfit and look.
She was puzzled at first but then kept listening to the strange man.
The guy said that his name is Vandettorio and he want to show her something about the legend of the park and then he invited her to the van.
At first she wanted to call the cops but his voice sounds strangely familiar to her, so she trusted the man and got in the van.
(They were now heading to an old, abandoned, spooky house in the middle of nowhere. Far from the civilization or even a road.) The man said to her that the whole story about the park started outside in this dark, creepy forest.
"In the past this house belonged to a loving couple, but the girl lost her mind after her sister died. So the man tried everything to make her smile from that moment"
"Only thing that make her smile thou was tickling" (in this moment Mickie got Goosebumps )
"But why is this house haunted?" -she asked.
"Well the guy went crazy when he finally get his wife to smile. From now on he was tickling her every time he can, but it was not enough for him. One day he went too far"
"And what happened?"- Mickie asked. (They arrived at place and both got out of the vehicle.) The man continued: "One night he tickled her so intensive, so mad and merciless that she finally passed out. He was not giving her any breaks"
Mickie and the masked man entered the bedroom in the haunted house: "It happened here" -the masked man said pointing at the bed”
"From the moment it happened man went completely insane and was tickling anyone that entered to this forest till, he finally was killed by a police officer. But not here. In the city park”
"He went there when it appeared that he tickled to death anyone in the forests neighborhood so he moved"
"From now on ghost of him and his victims haunt this forest and the city park"
Mickie then asked the worst question she could ever ask. “Why do you know so much about this story?”
"I know this story because I'm the son of this couple" (dramatic music played in the background ) "and I decided that as long as I live, I will ensure their souls to have fun" (in this moment masked man bashed mickey's head so hard that she lost consciousness)
"And I want to have fun to"
The man grabbed Mickie and place her on an x-frame, laying on the floor (she didn't noticed that it was there before). Then he tied her wrists and ankles to it using specially modified scarfs they were soft from the outside but reinforced with steel wires inside.
"Now we will lift you up sweetie"- the man said.
"Damn you are really unwise girl,… and pretty heavy too” the man lifted the x-frame in standing position screwed it to a wall.
"Wakey, wakey pretty girl"
...
The rest of the story is in the 4th post.
Mickie James was walking through the streets and decided to go to a city park in a night . She was wearing: a jeans shorts with leather belt, white socks, sneakers and white halter top, not covering her belly.
She heard strange rumors about the park and wanted to check them out.
Sometime after she entered the park, she hear some strange voice coming out from the bush. It was a man wearing “anonymous” mask whose voice sounded like the devil is speaking to her by himself. He made compliments about Mickies outfit and look.
She was puzzled at first but then kept listening to the strange man.
The guy said that his name is Vandettorio and he want to show her something about the legend of the park and then he invited her to the van.
At first she wanted to call the cops but his voice sounds strangely familiar to her, so she trusted the man and got in the van.
(They were now heading to an old, abandoned, spooky house in the middle of nowhere. Far from the civilization or even a road.) The man said to her that the whole story about the park started outside in this dark, creepy forest.
"In the past this house belonged to a loving couple, but the girl lost her mind after her sister died. So the man tried everything to make her smile from that moment"
"Only thing that make her smile thou was tickling" (in this moment Mickie got Goosebumps )
"But why is this house haunted?" -she asked.
"Well the guy went crazy when he finally get his wife to smile. From now on he was tickling her every time he can, but it was not enough for him. One day he went too far"
"And what happened?"- Mickie asked. (They arrived at place and both got out of the vehicle.) The man continued: "One night he tickled her so intensive, so mad and merciless that she finally passed out. He was not giving her any breaks"
Mickie and the masked man entered the bedroom in the haunted house: "It happened here" -the masked man said pointing at the bed”
"From the moment it happened man went completely insane and was tickling anyone that entered to this forest till, he finally was killed by a police officer. But not here. In the city park”
"He went there when it appeared that he tickled to death anyone in the forests neighborhood so he moved"
"From now on ghost of him and his victims haunt this forest and the city park"
Mickie then asked the worst question she could ever ask. “Why do you know so much about this story?”
"I know this story because I'm the son of this couple" (dramatic music played in the background ) "and I decided that as long as I live, I will ensure their souls to have fun" (in this moment masked man bashed mickey's head so hard that she lost consciousness)
"And I want to have fun to"
The man grabbed Mickie and place her on an x-frame, laying on the floor (she didn't noticed that it was there before). Then he tied her wrists and ankles to it using specially modified scarfs they were soft from the outside but reinforced with steel wires inside.
"Now we will lift you up sweetie"- the man said.
"Damn you are really unwise girl,… and pretty heavy too” the man lifted the x-frame in standing position screwed it to a wall.
"Wakey, wakey pretty girl"
...
The rest of the story is in the 4th post.
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