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Nice Outfit, Jerk! (Bait scrap panel 1) (F/F)

The faces on this one need a little bit of work, especially the torturer's. But it's otherwise a great picture, and funny to boot!

I am laughing at this girl's foolishness. When you're chained up, half-naked and at the mercy of someone, the last thing you wanna do is make fun of them. Granted, it can be a form of defense mechanism, like in that famous scene on Casino Royale, but you better know what you're doing. Could be fun to see a continuation of this one, with the girl either broken by her captor's wrathful ministrations (which she brought on herself). Or in a more humorous tone, to see the torturer's utter frustration at her inability to break her victim while the latter doubles down and keeps poking fun at her (ridiculing her hair, the way she talks, etc...).

By the way, it's nice to see an F/f from you, and I am still a big fan of your style!

EDIT: personally I like her outfit, somewhat reminiscent of Mad Max. But then again I have very bad taste when it comes to clothing; my wife often jokes that I am the French guy with the least sense of style, and she's right :blaugh:
 
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The faces on this one need a little bit of work, especially the torturer's. But it's otherwise a great picture, and funny to boot!

I am laughing at this girl's foolishness. When you're chained up, half-naked and at the mercy of someone, the last thing you wanna do is make fun of them. Granted, it can be a form of defense mechanism, like that famous scene on Casino Royale, but you better know what you're doing. Could be fun to see a continuation of this one, with the girl either broken by her captor's wrathful ministrations (which she brought on herself). Or in a more humorous tone, to see the torturer's utter frustration at her inability to break her victim while the latter keeps poking fun at her (ridiculing her hair, the way she talks, etc...) even more.

By the way, it's nice to see an F/f from you, and I am still a big fan of your style!

EDIT: personally I like her outfit, somewhat reminiscent of Mad Max. But then again I have very bad taste when it comes to clothing; my wife often jokes that I am the French guy with the least sense of style, and she's right :blaugh:

Lol, I like the outfit too... it's easy to shade. I guess I'm still struggling with expressions... I honestly thought this one was a step forward. I thought the antagonist in this had a bit of a cocky "gotcha" smirk... or at least that's what I was going for. I'm going to put some extra effort into the faces next time, so you'll have to let me know if it improves or not. This one was a struggle, and I posted it at full size. Honestly, the size should be about 1/3 of what you see here, so if you were to shrink it down the loss in detail would be less noticeable. Since it's just a frame, though, I posted it full size.

I'll work on it, though. Thank you for your thoughtful critique! Also, yes, there's more to this story. I'm going to do a whole comic series... I just didn't exactly like the way this frame turned out (in context with the others), and instead of just deleting it I cut it and put it up.
 
Oh my mistake, it appears I misled you: it is not the expressions that are lacking here, rather the heads' proportions. I kinda get a feeling that the torturer's face looks odd, a little bit "alien". I agree with you, this time the expressions are flawless here: the eyes are sparkling with life! Sorry for the misunderstanding, I know you're working hard on these drawings!
 
Oh my mistake, it appears I misled you: it is not the expressions that are lacking here, rather the heads' proportions. I kinda get a feeling that the torturer's face looks odd, a little bit "alien". I agree with you, this time the expressions are flawless here: the eyes are sparkling with life! Sorry for the misunderstanding, I know you're working hard on these drawings!

Lol I am, but I'd be headed in the wrong direction if it weren't for the helpful critique of this community, so please don't ever feel like I would be discouraged to hear it. I will simply try harder haha. Maybe I'll try less hard angles. That does help, I was looking at some of the pages I've already drawn just now and was looking at the expressions, but I think I'll go back and soften up some of the angles. Sometimes, in my eagerness to capture some of the more extreme comic book style I really love, I get very angular. Unfortunately, I can't draw like some of those greats, but I try to mimic their linework technique and it really comes down to trial and error.

Your input is much appreciated, and I'm always happy to hear it! And I hope married life is treating you well, even though you think clothing reminiscent of Mad Max is acceptable fashion.
 
Remember also that personal tastes also comes into play. When I criticize something, even though I try my best to remain objective, it is inevitable that personality will get in the way. You may like angular features, and I really don't blame you if you want to incorporate that in your style. But I guess my distaste for Picasso has influenced my aesthetic canon :D

Your input is much appreciated, and I'm always happy to hear it! And I hope married life is treating you well, even though you think clothing reminiscent of Mad Max is acceptable fashion.

I know, right? I am hopeless :rolleyes: The only thing I have a good taste for are perfumes and fragrances, but other than that... I am greatful I wear suits at work, so that I do not have to ask my wife every morning: "Does this [insert random shirt design here] go well with [insert random pants design here]?"
 
I love that. I've been in that situation where my let was wearing something silly and I couldn't hold my laughter in cause thereally look was making me laugh
 
Excellent, I love it. Do more upperbody drawings like this!

Thanks! I will! I'm very much into feet tickling, but upper body tickling can be so much more unbearable sometimes that it keeps pulling me in. Will do!

Very nice drawing! :feets: Thanks for sharing it here. :D

Thanks!!

Good work.

Thanks, dude!

I love that. I've been in that situation where my let was wearing something silly and I couldn't hold my laughter in cause thereally look was making me laugh

That must have been a funny situation! I've never been in that situation, myself, but I can imagine it would be a quite strange place to be. Tickled on one hand, and sarcastic on the other. I love it!

I like the position. Quite a decent art :)

Hey, thanks! I'm a fan of this position as well. I appreciate it!
 
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