Tee request

Tee's story is finished. At least with me as its author. It was my first multiple chapter story and I enjoyed writing it. But I believe that my writing skill is just terrible. Spelling, punctuation, sentence and paragraph structure leave much to be desired and the tickling sessions I feel could be improved a lot also. In fact the Spa scenario at the end should have been mostly a tickling session with three girls tickling both Sam and Tee. But I felt like my descriptive capabilities just weren't up to the task.
So if there are any writers who read the story and liked it but feel like you could have done the story more justice. You have my blessing and request to take the story, clean it up, abbreviate it if necessary, and completely rewrite the tickling scenes. Any writers are also invited to take the characters and do with them as you please. Her entire story is linked below.


http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291232-the-interview

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291295-the-second-interview

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291297-third-and-final-interview

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291505-Tee-s-first-session

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291550-Tee-s-first-session-part-2

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291942-tee-s-first-challenge-part-1

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291949-Tee-s-first-challenge-part-2

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291968-TEE-S-first-challenge-part-3

http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292009-Tee-s-transformstion-part-1


http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292034-Tee-s-transformation-part-2-(Tee-s-final-chapter)

Respectfully;
Lyn74

Here are the characters in the story as I imagined them.

Character tree:
Place; law office
1) Matt (Mathew heinze), Caucasian, younger 30's, lawyer
2) Sam (Samantha), Hispanic, younger 30's, legal assistant and Secretary.
3) Tee (tiesha), African American, 22, exotic dancer, two older brothers tyrone and Thomas both in the army.
Stip club
1) Jennifer (tee's good friend), Caucasian, 18 to 21 years old. Exotic dancer.
Hypno-therapy office
1) Peter, Caucasian, 50's
Spa
1) Seven unnamed women, Asian, one in her 40's (the mama in charge) and six girls in their 20's
Matt's poker game (at his office On Saturday nights)
1) No named characters
Ymca that sam is a member of
1) No named characters

This series is outstanding! You have great talent.

I just got around to reading it, although I downloaded it some time ago. I've come back to see if there is anymore.