Package Deal (Part 3)

[Dave2112]

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[OscarTheMonkey]

All of these stories have been very well done- thanks

 

[DJ Tickler]

Firstly... Part 3 YAY...and may I just say thanks for it

Secondly...WHY DO YOU DO IT TO ME AGAIN...WHY!!!

You can your bloody teasers LOL...please get part 4 up ASAP

DJ Tickler

 

[draven]

great writing man!

I often wonder what it would have been like to come across stories like these when i was a young tickle crazed teenager. I PROBABLY WOULD HAVE HAD A HEART ATTACK!!

 

[P4E]

One word sums this up quite nicely...

Wow.

Very good writing Dave...

 

[shanitklr]

WOW!!!!! Part three was well worth the wait, but now craving part four! Fantastic writing. Thanks!!!

Bill

 

[Dave2112]

Thanks for the continued support of this little narrative. I know that Part 3 wasn't very tickle-heavy, but it was necessary to dive into the next part. What happened with Erin was something seriously...different in a most amazing way. So, it deserves it's own chapter.

Part 4 is all tickling...well, mostly. I'm in the middle of a fic-piece right now, and once that's done, I'm going back to this and also back to work on my poor little art saga, HBDP.

 

[tcle1]

Gr8 story! Thx. But where's part 4- i've been waitin for wot feels like months haha!!! :s lol

 

[jj82277]

for the record we HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol. just kidding, but waiting to see erin's submissive indulgence is a tough task to handle.

what can i say about this story... there is so much. there is just something about a Worthy adversary. the person who's submission is reflective of a willing interaction and acceptance on a fundamental level NURTURING the darkest parts of us as doms. the give, the take. the mutual reward. the sacrafice, the redemptive pleasure. it all flows so wonderfully. and above all else the general conversational tone of the piece. it feels like we are just sitting there with you enjoying a beverage as you reccount the lurid tales of your ticklish exploits. i can't wait to hear the next part... it's funny. Erin is a literal manifestation of my base line of attraction and the only thing that will give me satisfaction is intimate knowledge of her ticklish destruction... what does that say about me Jin...

HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHA

 

[milagros317]

Wonderful story, Dave. Fine work.