Poem 3(Breathless!!!)

[crydun]

This is the third poem I wrote for ticklish_latin. This is my favorite. I get a great visual image. I have posted it on here as you requested. Enjoy!!!

Breathless

At times, the thought of you
Brings me to my knees
Other times, a soft caress
Can put my mind at ease.

My feelings are so deep
I’m walking on the air
I wake up each morning
Hoping you’ll be there.

If I could, I’d climb a mountain
Stand upon its peak
And shout “I love you” to the sky
Till I could no more speak.

There I said it again!!!!!
I guess it bears repeating!

ticklish_latin:

you know the drill!!!!

 

[ticklish latin]

I love this one!

after reading all 3 again i definitely think you are a great poet...

 

[crydun]

only because I have something/someone great to write about!!!!

 

[ticklebunny 2]

I enjoyed reading your poem Breathless. It was really creative and very romantic. Loved reading it. Your poetry is very inspiring and it cheers my weary soul and causes me to smile Thanks for the great poetry that gave my heart the hug it needed. It cheered me that is for sure.

ticklebunny 2

 

[crydun]

thanks so much for your kind words. It lifted me up after that hard math class.

ticklishly yours,

crydun

 

[ForgottenTcklr]

Crydun,

Can you explain the pretenses to your poems. Like, what are your intentions in these and what do they represent?

 

[Krokus]

Yea...

Excellent!! You have some serious talent!