Recent content by alvpryce

Have I gone crazy, or is the girl being tickled in the last picture in desperate need of a torso?

Are there no comments at all? Really, I don't want to write stories if nobody is going to comment or at least criticize it. I just want some feedback, is that too much to ask for? Sorry if I'm coming of as a loser, but I don't have to write stories if nobody likes them, and right now I don't...

This is a sequel to my other two stories. This takes place directly after "Haley's Tickling 2". I'm just going to be lazy and post what the two girls look like before the story. This should help you get a better mental image in your head. Haley - Haley is 5'5" and 120 lbs. She has slightly long...

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll get to work on part 3.

Does anyone have any comments or critique? Any places I can improve?

HALEY'S TICKLING - PART 2 Some of you may have read my first tickling story posted here, Haley's Tickling. Well, I've decided to make a sequel. Once again the same things apply, the story is for entertainment, not grammar *****s. Also, I'm a foot guy, so most of my stories are going to focus on...

My words exactly.

This is the first tickling fiction I've ever written, so it's not going to be that good. I'm not going to worry about proper grammar, run-on sentences, or fragments, I'm just going to focus on making an enjoyable, readable story. So read on and enjoy! :) ---------- Haley, a stunningly...

I second this comment.

Well, this is the first drawing I've ever made of a person being tickled; or even tied up; or even doing anything before, so it probably won't be that good. The face and arms are pretty distorted, and her feet seem just a little too big, but oh well, it's cool. This is a picture I made of my...