Recent content by DrBabinski

Hello there! Time for the second episode of this long story. It took me some time to go and correct the errors of the translator, so please give me some feedback just to know if it is worthy to spend time on the translation of this story. Maybe you don't like, or maybe the IA transalated it in...

Ohhhh!!! I loved this story, and the ending is really perfect!

Love the story with a plot, and this one is really nice. Excellent work!

Uhhh... I think Margaret deserves some punishment! :devilish:

Oh, don't be surprised. I've posted one story (The fugitive), some days ago, asking for feedbacks because it was originally written in Italian, then translated with the AI in English, and, so far with 970 views, only two guys gave me some indication. So, I don't know what to think about this...

That's funny... now we need the sequel! :devilish:

Meanwhile someone else add other feedback, I've corrected (I hope) all the mistakes about he/she and him/her, so now the story should be fine. BTW your opinion would be helpful.

ohhh... and I was thinking in the first two episodes the story could be considered closed... what a misateke!!! As usual, excellent work! Keep going, now I'm curious about the fate of the poor Jane! :devilish:

I'll give you my honest opinion: in a real world a tortured woman would never be "consentive" in having sex with her torturer, nor get excited or whatever. However, and luckily, here is a whole world where a woman get wet few seconds after being tickled, and is always forced to orgasm against...

Yes, that is the most common error the AI does. I've manually corrected some of them, but I've lost some occurrence. Do you think I should go for a deeper check, or it is understandable enough?

Happy you appreciate it. So, no big mistakes in the transalation? Any other feedback?

Hello folks. Last year I spent a lot of time reading stories in this forum. Some of them were not interesting (for my taste, of course, nobody get offended), some were nice, some of them really excellent. Talking with some of the author I did a preliminary experiment submitting a...

Cool... Waiting for the 4th part, maybe with more nudity and sexual stuff. I think that Sharon's husband, after loosing a couple of fingers, deserves a kind of "compensation" ;)

I'll be honest. Time by time I come here to read some new stuff, but usually I'm not really satisfied because the story is bad written, or 200% unplausible, or many other reasons. But this one... guys, you wrote a great one indeed!!!

To be honest, the story is really envolving, but I think it is quite off topic here. I mean, this is not tickle; tickle make the victim laugh, scream and shake trying to escape the torture. Your story it is beatifull, but in my opinion is much closer to an orgasm play (forced/denied) in the BDSM...