Oh, and something I forgot to mention to help the actual tickling part of the tickling scenes. I avoid using the word tickle as much as possible during them. Same with short laughter phrased like, she laughed, she giggled, she screamed. It really helps to set a mood and make the imagery much...
Hello. What really helped my pacing for tickling scenes was embracing a really sloppy first draft, followed by one or two heavy rewrites. I'll write the tickling scene vaguely; go over the position the lee is in, where the tickles happen, how the ler is tickling them, and any lines that pop into...