It was a quiet monday afternoon so I decided to take a couple of hours off and go down to my favorite strip club. I like to go in the afternoon because it isn't busy so the dancers take more time. The other reason I like this club is that they have a room in the back with a couch you can go to...
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When Susan finally regained consciousness she found herself back in the training room where she had first met Fatima. Only this time she was naked and strapped...
After a long sleepless night filled with frustration Susan was dragged from her cell by the guards. Susan was expecting another session with Fatima so it was with relief whens she was brought into another room. Susan glanced about her taking in her surroundings. The room was opulent and in the...
"Oh my dear I am sure that you could deal with pain. Most women have a quite high pain threshold. But tell me what is your pleasure threshold."
Fatima then went over to a small armoire and came back with a wicked looking dagger. Depite her brave words Susan flinched as the blade flashed about...
It was a combination of the lurching motion and the awful smell that brought her to semi consciousness. Susan could not understand what was happening to her, all she could tell was that she was draped face down over something that was moving almost like a ship in a heavy sea. That with the smell...