interesting Idea man...but we really loved yours!!! it wouldn't be right if we did this (that's when after I say this everyone goes and writes one) But seriously, we fell in love with the first two and we wanted you to write the last one
DO NOT LISTEN TO THAT CRAZY MAD MAN!!! THAT WAS ONE OF THE MOST AWESOMEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ!!! MY GOD IT ROCKED!
seriously I loved it, I love the whole lost in the sea of zombies...but yeah the non paragraphs were a put off...
finaly, you made us hold out for a long frigen time...but it was so worth it!!! The Scrofed Demon was a funny guy haha, made me laugh (get it, cos he's a tickle demon!!! eh eh)
Hey nice story, it was actually suspenseful...Time is running out...what'll happen now???!!! DUN DUN DAAAAAAH!!
hahah awesome story, waiting for part 2.
Oh and nice characters, I thought they most were believable.