Excellent story! For my tastes, just the right combination of back story, motivation, and tickling action. Very believable set up and reactions from all the main characters. Love the wrinkle with Jodi giving the room key to the frustrated young ladies. They are looking for a good time and...
Simple, efficient and elegant!
Your Snow White hands are a nice contrast with his pink soles
Those nails look like they’d be quite effective!
Thanks for posting- hope you’ll have some more fun (at your boyfriend’s expense, of course) and post it soon!
Love this story!
Thanks for posting (and re-posting!)it.
I was going to comment on it a few weeks ago, and then it was gone. I was bummed - but I’m so happy you reworked it.
It has a lot of my favorite aspects.
In no particular order:
I like the backstory and the plausibility of the...