I read this a long time ago, but I can't agree with what Carrot said more. A lot of empty praise is thrown around this community, but your story is really well written.
I don't often log in to post, but I really loved your story. I love the build up and slow torment of this girl as she slowly begins to realize that she can't win. Very nicely done. The ending isn't my cup of tea -seems kind like a 180 for what was established(or at least what we knew) about...
Good stuff, Yann. I've always been a big fan of sequence pictures, and it seems like you got a lot going on with this one. Waiting to see what you can do with it. : )