Nice but if you're planning to write future stories involving tickling I have a suggestion - don't make every women ticklish everywhere coz it's repetitive and kinda boring at least to me. For example have a character that is only ticklish on ribs but not on feet or anywhere else. A character...
I thought we'll see our protagonists get revenge on Prinscilla and Gloria but I guess we'll see that later, though Idk if you're gonna continue the story or not.
It's nice to see the tickling part with consent for a change and without bondage part. That was wholesome. Now If you wanna tickle...
Nice but Darby getting tortured is starting to get repetitive. Since Diabla and her are two main characters and we didn't see that - I hope that in the finale Darby will torture Salem a little :p