Recent content by Sun80

Beloved Tonya I miss her

She’s incredible

This reminds me of the first story I head of yours. The Mickie James Trish Stratus story. A fan of the business and you capture it amazingly. Fun and erotic

What an amazing journey you took us on. It’s not just the tickling, and fetish scenes but the arcs these characters undergone. Darby’s journey as a sheriff who gets into tickling hijinks with her arch rival/nemesis for them to become lovers. But Darby grows and takes down crime rings. As for...

Wow, just wow. I did not see that coming at all. Things just kept getting more and more intense. If the next chapter is the true finale, I hope Darby and Salem can finally be together truly then ride off to Gertrude’s house where Salem can finally get her feet played with. Very honored to...

Agreed Sylvia and Pilar. I’m glad Salem left a lasting imagine with her. But she’s going down a dark road. I hope Darby can help her begin healing.

Thank you for your sacrifice

Oh no. I hope you’re not setting up a how far is too far kind of thing

I really thought this story would go sienna dark road. Not the fun dark Salem righteously will seek but a not fun dark road. But thankfully Salem has her mother free. Now she’ll be uncaged in vengeance. You definitely had me scared though. Hopefully the villains get theirs and we can have a...

I wish I could find scenes when Darby is being tickled less erotic because this is rough. She’s being tortured and humiliated but jeez if it isn’t hot. She can’t help but get aroused every time. Now Salem, I feel like we’re building this crescendo.

Darby’s tickle scenes never fail to be sexy even when they’re torturous. She’s going through it and the worst may be yet to come. Salem steals this chapter for me though. The small tender moments in between watching the love of her life get tortured are tough.

Gertrude is an MVP. She can make tickling fun and torturous. Just like Salem. Darby, it feels like she hadn’t been tickled in awhile so im looking forward to it.

This really felt like a payoff and setup chapter. The culmination of Darby and Becky’s growth of a characters. I agree with Curiouslee1. I feel the long term fans enjoy the development chapters as much as the tickle focused one.

I really enjoyed the more heartfelt opening and the gradual increase in tension as this chapter went. Becky feels more at peace and I love that for her. Marge is getting what she deserves. I don’t really relish villains getting this kind of punishment but there are exceptions. I agree as...

We’re really moving towards the end. Ingrid got what she deserved in the end. I’m so happy for Becky. What a big step for her character and it looks like there’s still more to come. Sorry for the late comment. Life came at me pretty quickly