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Bellas new life p2 "Brought to heel" (F/F) (FF/F)

Great story so far, can't wait for the next part!
 
these are pretty damn good my friend. a bit too intense for my liking and yet... here i find myself, reading through Bella's tortures. Good always beats evil though, right.... right?!
 
these are pretty damn good my friend. a bit too intense for my liking and yet... here i find myself, reading through Bella's tortures. Good always beats evil though, right.... right?!

The intensity thing was something i was conscious of. The story just seemed to lend itself to that way. Im trying to build part 3 up a bit now…i mean who is to say this isn't something Bella wants?! Maybe part 3 will explain!!

haha thanks for the feedback mate
 
back soon, the spelling mistakes were doing my head in and I've slowed down the pace of p3 so I'm taking the time to clean them up a bit and re-inspire the 3rd instalment
 
Part 1 was the best story I have ever read. I have been a member for probably over a decade lurking. Please repost or an administrator repost. I feel TMF is being cheated out of an amazing work of erotica worthy of an award.
 
Part 1 was the best story I have ever read. I have been a member for probably over a decade lurking. Please repost or an administrator repost. I feel TMF is being cheated out of an amazing work of erotica worthy of an award.

Yess ... and we need part 3 as well
 
Thanks for the notes guys. I know a few have messaged me and I'm not being ignorant. I've taken a step back from this to concentrate on other things. However I have got a fantastic TMF artist to draw up a scene for this story. Once that's completed I will repost 1&2 with the artwork. However you'll have to wait on p3. Writers block and other priorities have taken their toll. Please be patient. Thank you for the kind words.
 
It looks like the stories raising up the fifteen positive comment must be removed...
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not even for Christmas!!!! but.. but but WHYYYYYY you re not our good tickle santa ??? :imthedj:
 
Well even part 1 and 2? Where are they? It's been removed for edit and I'm still waiting for it to come back :cry1:
 
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