Grammar is a little spotty in parts, but overall not bad. Would love to read another story about the process of torturing and breaking Becky. Revenge tickling is the best type
I mean if you want, in the future before you post stories, you could always send/message them to me and I could try to fix up/improve the grammar for ya. Revenge story? I mean you did a pretty good job with this one. I'd trust you to write a decent sequel. Obviously I'd like her broken and given a taste of her own medicine. But like I said. I don't need to tell you what to write. You obviously know what you're doing