Whats the most difficult part of a story?

For me, the most difficult part of the story is writing the laughter. I believe to make a story memorable, you have to make it innovative. That's why i like to keep my stories a bit controversial.

But the toughest part is the victim's innovative laughter. What should she be saying while laughing, how would it make the reader feel? Would the reader feel sorrow for her? Would he want the tickling and her laughter to continue?

That's why im not a fan of stories with no tickling laughter.

Whats the toughest part for other writers?

Hi - funnily ehh completely agree with you. As a relative story newbie I found writing the laughter really tricky - how do you try and make it authentic (I find myself sitting there making all sorts of weird noises to come up with ideas) and equally how do you differentiate say between foot and upper body tickling - the sound a lee makes is definitely different IRL. My other 2 challenges for what it’s worth:

1) How do you balance a good story with the tickling without the story taking over

2) No secret I’m a committed nylon tickling fan, so this is just a personal - how do you avoid writing about yet another pair of the same old “sheer black stockings”

khorne said:

1) How do you balance a good story with the tickling without the story taking over

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If you're interested, I wrote about this very subject in a three part blog series.

Wow - that’s a comprehensive exploration �� - thanks for sharing it and apologies for missing it the first time. You point to some great truths (in my humble opinion) “write the story you want to read” and at the end of the day, yes, we are writing “smut” (that word made me smile) ��

Wow - that’s a comprehensive exploration 😊 - thanks for sharing it and apologies for missing it the first time. You point to some great truths (in my humble opinion) “write the story you want to read” and at the end of the day, yes, we are writing “smut” (that word made me smile) 😂

The beginning is always the most difficult part for me. Once I've got the set-up written well, the story flows.