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"This Little Piggy Went To The Market"

tklpkl

tklpkl

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Hi everybody!. I haven't posted anything meaningful in a while. But I've been sitting on a song I wrote and recorded a few months ago and finally uploaded to soundcloud.com. It incorporates the lyrics of everyone's favorite Mother Goose Poem/ Childrens tickling game, "This Little Piggy Went To Market". Any criticism, comments , opinions are welcome. It will soon be available for ringtone purchase. Enjoy.
https://soundcloud.com/beatlab101/all-the-way-home
 
I think you should definitely send it to one of my favourite radios for broadcast - www.WFMU.org It's quite their format 🙂
Something in your recordings reminds me of Black Sabbath 🙂
 
Hmmm....over 230 views of this post and not even 20 plays of my song. It doesn't cost anything to listen.....
 
As a fellow music writer, I will be honest.
I was never a fan of using lyrics that I've already heard elsewhere. I guess I'm more of an emotional worst about my own life. Song titles I've used are take it all back, somewhere to run and my great grandmother's name. She passed last year,naturally a song came to mind.
But,that's just my choice.
If you could speed the tempo of the song up a bit I think it would sound a little better. And if your vocalist (or you, whoever it is) has more range in his voice make use of it.
I think it's a good song and I like the style you write. Again,don't feel attacked by this. Just my honest opinion. And that's what it is, an opinion.
 
frankied21 said:
As a fellow music writer, I will be honest.
I was never a fan of using lyrics that I've already heard elsewhere. I guess I'm more of an emotional worst about my own life. Song titles I've used are take it all back, somewhere to run and my great grandmother's name. She passed last year,naturally a song came to mind.
But,that's just my choice.
If you could speed the tempo of the song up a bit I think it would sound a little better. And if your vocalist (or you, whoever it is) has more range in his voice make use of it.
I think it's a good song and I like the style you write. Again,don't feel attacked by this. Just my honest opinion. And that's what it is, an opinion.
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Thanks. That is me doing 3 part harmonies. I did everything from programming the percussion to the instrumentation and the lead guitar( which took about 200 takes). I put a lot of work into it and I just want to be heard. Sorry if I'm coming across as a whiny little bitch.
 
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