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A Bit of Serenity

ticklishjewels1

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This is about my alter ego. Hope you like it!

Time: 9:15 pm. Location A Sports bar outside LA County. Players: Serenity Michelle (my ego's name), Leonard Goodman, and Raquel Remiraz.

It's late, and Serenity wanted to just get into a bed. She walks into a sports bar, and sits down at the bar. "What'll you have?" asks the bartender. "Just a beer for now." says Serenity. Little does she know, she's being watched.

"See that girl over there?" asks the female. "Yeah I see her." says the male. "Is she the one we've been looking for?" asks the male. The female nods, and they get up slowly and walk toward her. They sit down a few seats away, and motion for the tender. "Do us a favor and spike her drink with this." The female hands him a hundred dollars and a vial with a clear liquid in it. The tender does what she asks, and then hands the other female the drink. She chugs it, and slumps down in her chair, already past her limit on alcohol. "You want my opinion?" Asks the girl. "I think this place is a dive! You should be ashamed, serving up alcohol in this shit hole. I'm embarrassed to be a paying customer here!" She gets up to leave, and passes out in front of her chair. The male and female sitting a few seats over get to her first, and tell everyone they're her friends, and they stick her in their car, and drive away.

Serenity wakes up, and feels a throbbing in her head. It's a bad hangover. "what the fuck happened last night?" She asks out loud. "You had one too many drinks, Serenity." comes a voice, a females, from the shadows. Serenity is kinda surprised to a response, and then realizes she's in a bad spot. She's tied down to a bed, spread eagle. "where am I?" Serenity asks. "You're in our humble abode." This time, the response came from a man's voice. "What do you want with me, and why am I tied up? Let me go you bastards!" They didn't like her tone. "We want to have a bit of... fun with you. We have a lot to do." said the female. "Let me introduce myself. I am Raquel Remiraz, and this is my partner, Leonard Goodman." They came out of the shadows and took up positions next to Serenity. "What the hell is the matter with you two?? Let me go now or you're gonna regret it!" Raquel just laughed, and sat down next to Serenity. "We haven't had fun yet though, and Leonard knows how much I love having fun!" she said, tracing a single nail up Serenity's tummy. Serenity twitched at the touch, and a giggle escaped her lips before she could hold it back."Oooh!! Someone's ticklish!" cooed Raquel. She traced another line down Serenity's quivering tummy. "heehee!!! Stop! I already told you, you're bastards and you need to let me go!" The next thing she knew, Leonard was tracing lines down her feet. "HEEEEP!!!" squealed Serenity. "Not there!!!" It was too late. They tickled her sides and feet now faster and more vigorously. "AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHNOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOSSTOOOHOHOHOHOHOHPPPP!!!!!!" She begged for them to stop, and was sweating and her sides hurt from laughing. "We've just barely started though, and you are too cute to pass up!" They had just gotten started, and Serenity knew she was about to go into tickle hell.

End of part 1.
 
A nice start Jewel...you should continue with it!
 
Hey Jewels - my comment is quite too late that my comment could motivate you to go on - cause you already did. But anyway: Good way to start it and I will go for part II now 🙂
Take care and best greetz from Germany.
Hardy
 
Hi jewels! I had a lot of fun with these stories. So much fun, I wrote a riffs-track style commentary for it, but out of respect for you and your work, I'll follow the teachings of Weird Al and won't post it without your permission.

I'll give you fair warning, I do poke fun of it a bit, but I do so only in jest. It is the sort of thing one needs to take in good humor and understand that I mean no hard feelings or ill intent. I'd be more than happy to PM it to you, if you'd like to see it.
 
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