Saturn&Jupiter
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They were at it again. Tierney and her group of friends were tormenting another innocent student. They loved to draw a crowd if they could manage. They were relentless. So he has a bit of an odd looking nose. Everyone liked the guy. And his nose gave his face some nice character. But someone wrote it in the book, so the guy was going to have to just go through it.
College was supposed to be fun. But in a small town, going to the college in the very town where you grew up, a lot of college simply felt like high school. The same thing that let these girls run amok in high school, let them do it in college. Their parents. Lawyers, city officials, police. You name it. Any complaint brought up against them was not only dismissed, but you and your family were harassed for having the nerve to complain about the “perfect angels” that were Tierney and her gang of friends.
Ava shook her head and headed to class.
“Ugh, I thought this was supposed to stop! College was supposed to be better!” complained Norah, Ava’s usually cheery friend. Injustice was really the only thing that could get Norah down. She was otherwise quite cheery.
“Well,” Ava replied, sighing, “Nothing could hold them accountable then, so I guess nothing is holding them responsible now. Just stay out of their way, and, hopefully in 4 years we can get out of this town.”
“Yeah. But there’s got to be a way. Something!” frowned Norah.
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Ava entered her small apartment. In a little town like that one, a small apartment cost less than a dorm room. As boring as it was to live alone, it saved money and it helped her focus on her studies.
Ava sighed and pulled off her shoes, admired her fun socks that she bought special for college, at the height of her excitement. It was a pair in a whole colorful set. She took off her shoes in every class, hoping to show them off a little. She got a couple looks, but nothing more. In her head somehow they would prompt questions, discussions. She’d take them off and people would want to look closer at the magnificent socks. Maybe show off the pedicure technique she’d perfected after years of practice. Maybe even some touching.
Ava laughed to herself, realizing how silly that was. But nonetheless, she was dissatisfied with the lack of fun that was supposed to happen at college.
Other students that left their hometowns got to meet new friends, have fun sexy flings, get away from bullies, create a new personal identity... Not in this town. Not when your college is in your hometown.
Ava sighed, played with her smooth feet a little, and hunkered down to another slightly lonely night of studying and watching a little tv before bed.
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“Hey Ava!” said Norah, cheerily. “How was that test?”
“Good! I think I aced it! It was a tough one, but I’ve been pushing myself hard, so it’s coming easier to me.”
“Awesome! So hey! Have you thought about some sort of way to put a stop to Tierney yet?” said Norah, with a furrowed brow.
“This again? It’s useless. It’s not possible. We just need to keep our heads down and get through it. I mean, if she targets you, she’s going to get you. And once she gets you, you feel bad, but people don’t hold it against you.”
“But it hurts people in other ways! The whole idea turns people on each other! That stupid Burn Book! Can you believe people actually put stuff in there. It is basically just an ‘Ammo-for-Tierney’ book, if you want to call it what it is!”
“Yeah, I know... I’m sorry. Look I’ll think about it, ok? But you know me, I’d really rather just keep my head down. So the fact that I’m even considering this is a big testament to how much I love you, right girl?”
“Yay!!” clapped Norah, as she hugged her friend a little too aggressively and sped off to class, leaving Ava to chuckle to herself.
Before entering her next classroom, she furrowed her brow, and smiled a little. She had what was the beginnings of an idea.
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“Well, Ava, it’s been a week. Did you come up with anything?” Norah asked Ava, grabbing Ava’s shoulder excitedly. “I’ve been so patient!”
“Kind of. But it’s not really what you were thinking.”
“What is it?” Asked Norah her brown eyes wide with excitement.
“I’ll tell you, but later, ok?”
“Come on!!! We have never had secrets!”
“I know, and I’m sorry that it’s a secret. But it’s better if I tell you after whatever happens, happens.”
“That’s weird. And really unlike you,” said a puzzled Norah.
“Yeah, but that’s kind of the point.”
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“Ava, Ava, Ava. Keeping your nose clean, avoiding me for so long, staying out of trouble. I knew you’d piss somebody off eventually.” Tierney sauntered up, grinning, and got nose to nose with Ava. She smiled cruelly, putting a finger on Ava’s upper chest.
“Oh hey, Tierney, sorry, About to head into class. Gotta go!”
“Your name is in my Burn Book.”
“What? No you must have read it wrong. Maybe it’s someone else. It’s a big school, and Ava is a common name,” shuddered Ava, her nervousness getting the best of her.
She slipped away and darted into the classroom she was due to be in.
Tierney followed, bursting through the doors, hands on hips, eyes squinting with sassy anger.
She saw the whole lecture hall turn to her, wondering why she burst in looking like an action movie assassin.
Not much stopped Tierney when she wanted something, but she knew she had to stay socially popular and on top. She felt the weird nervous shame that accompanied being stared at by a room of strangers. She huffed like a cartoon villain and walked away and out of the classroom.
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Ava plopped down in her typical seat next to Norah and pulled her hoodie up.
“Was that Tierney?” asked Norah. “What is she doing? Why is she after you?”
“Shhh!”
“What is going on?” Norah whispered.
“Later!” Ava whispered, shaking nervously.
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Class let out, and everyone but Ava, Norah, and a few stragglers left immediately.
“Ava, you’re shaking! Don’t go out there! Let me run to my car and I’ll drive up near the building. Don’t go out there.”
“Just let it happen, ok?”
Norah made a face like she’d been asked to get matching face tattoos.
“Ava, no way!”
“You know how she is. Please, just, just let it happen. Ok? Promise me.”
Norah huffed, but didn’t agree.
Ava, shaking, slowly walked up the stairs of the lecture hall, and out the door.
The light stung her eyes. As they began to adjust she saw Tierny and her gang of beautiful friends, standing with their hands on their hips like gang of girl bullies from a bad movie.
“You’re in trouble now.” said Tierney, a menacing smile on her face.
Ava began to run, and pushed past one of the smaller ones and bolted for the quad.
She darted through a crowd of students, apologising and changed directions.
It worked!
Ava caught her breath and looked around for the group. She began to shake, her nerves getting the best of her after the adrenaline began to wear off.
Boom!
All of a sudden from behind, one of them grabbed her arms.
Tierney and the rest caught up.
“Come on! You know no one gets away. You are screwed now, Ava,” sneered the evil young woman.
“Someone put your secret in my burn book. Now, I was perplexed at first. Gargalaphobia. I had to look that one up. You must have a pretty bad fear if it’s taken this many years for it to come out. I have dirt on pretty much everybody.”
“You are thinking about someone else! I’m sure of it! I don’t even know what that word means. Leave me alone!”
“You don’t? Oh. Well, it means,” Tierney got right in Ava’s face. “ A fear…” The girl holding Ava tightened her grasp. “Of being... tickled,” she whispered, almost nose to nose with Ava.
Ava’s face gave it all away. The blood drained from her countenance as she stuttered. “I-I don’t know w-why you. I’m not -t-t”
“You can’t even say the word!! Let’s get her gang!”
Tierney reached out and began to tickle Ava’s stomach and ribs with her long cruel nails, smiling the way a cartoon villain would smile.
Ava’s body curled inward like a snail trying to pull into its shell. She tried not to laugh but every touch made her sensitive body convulse in reaction.
With little effort, the long skinny arms of the beautiful Tierney clawed and poked at her sensitive body.
Ava fought with everything she could to both escape and to hold in the awful embarrassment of laughing in response to the sadistic woman’s touch.
“Squeeze her tighter!” said Tierney, her eyes getting big with hunger.
She switched techniques. Tierney leaned down and clawed Ava’s tight stomach with both hands
“AHAHhahahah, No-ho-hohaaa!! Don’t t-ttouchh haha meheheahaaa!!”
“AAHHAAHAA!!!!”
With each cruel stroke Ava screamed with laughter, immediately going back to fighting to stifle any giggling or noise at all, as soon as those long terrible nails stopped making contact.
“Ha ha! Look she’s trying so hard not to laugh! Hey Lacy, you get her. I bet your long nails will make her scream.”
A tall girl approached, smiling. You could tell she was nervous and excited. Lacy was a newer member of Tierney’s group, and was happy to have a chance to shine. She had VERY long, beautifully manicured fingernails, carefully adorned with jewels and little studs.
She quickly tested her tickle skill, gently digging into the poor girl's captive waist and ribs momentarily.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Ava let out a scream that would wake the dead!
A crowd began to gather.
Both Lacy and Ava looked surprised at the effect her nails had on her ticklish torso.
“Yay!! Keep going! Get her!” said Tierney.
Ava made eye contact with Lacy, begging with her eyes and shaking her head ‘no’ rapidly.
When the nails made contact this time, Ava went into hysterics, laughing uncontrollably, bucking and slamming her hips into the girl who held her so tightly!
“Ahahah- no not-meeahahahaha!! AAHAHAA PLEHEEHEHEAHHAA!!! DO-HO-N’T TICKLAHAHhaAAHHAA!!!”
Ava’s hysterics continued for some time, while the crowd of onlookers grew. They were laughing and curious and excited. Tierney’s gang of troublemakers and bullies had enough of a reputation that the few people watching that wanted to help Ava knew that they needed to keep their mouths shut. Most of them anyway.
“Hey, leave her alone! That’s too much!” one young man shouted.
Tierney flashed a look at him. “Ok stop tickling, Lacy. Get your phone. Go take a picture of that guy. We’ll deal with him later.”
Ava was losing strength and it was getting harder to hold her up. Ava and her captor fell to the grassy ground.
“I don’t really tickle people,” said Tierney, “what else should we do to her?” She asked aloud, addressing the growing crowd.
“Keep tickling!” a few people shouted from the crowd.
“Well, obviously, but, like where do we tickle?”
People began to shout from the crowd.
“Get her feet!” Tickle her armpits!” “More tummy!!” “Ooo get her knees!” “Tickle her neck!”
“Geez everybody! I didn’t think you’d be so into it! Ok ok, I think I heard enough to know everyone’s favorites!” Tierney was working the crowd like an improv comedian.
“I heard about a million people say her feet, so we’re gonna do that. I am gonna let someone else do it though if they turn out stinky.”
The crowd laughed.
“What’s the absolute worst spot to be tickled, though? I wanna do that one. Come on folks, let’s hear it!”
People started shouting suggestions.
“Armpits!”
The crowd cheered.
Someone yelled “Knees!”
They cheered.
“Neck!”
A few people clapped.
“So armpits? That sounded like the winner!” Tierney bellowed, addressing the crowd like an infomercial salesperson.
“Yeah!!!” The crowd cheered
As the crowd quieted to see the next tickle attack, a small voice was heard.
“That’s not the worst spot.”
Tierney stopped. “Who said that?”
The anxiety in the crowd was palpable.
“Come on!” asked Tierney, losing her cool a little.
The crowd pushed a very small woman to the front.
She was obviously very shy, and incredibly nervous.
“Well, what’s the worst spot then!?” pushed Tierney.
The small young woman shrunk even further, looking like she was nearing tears.
Tierney changed tactics. “It’s ok sweetie, it’s ok, come here, come here” she said sounding comforting, but with a little edge that let you know you had to obey.
Tierney put her arm around her and leaned over. They had a very quiet whispered exchange.
She turned around and said, “My new friend Britt here says that the worst spot to tickle someone is the back of the thighs and the butt.”
The crowd erupted into cheering!
“We have a winner!!!” said Tierney lifting Britt’s small arm into their air victoriously as if she had just won a boxing match.
“Ok everyone! Feet! Our next event!”
Tierney pointed at one of her crew. “You do the honors. You are the one who always does all our pedicures, maybe you’re immune to the smell.”
The girls rolled Ava onto her stomach, bending her knees, facing her soles up into the air. She untied Ava’s sneakers, and tried to pull them off. “She’s gripping them with her toes! I can’t.”
“Ugh!” Tierney marched over and yanked with all her might. She switched to two hands to finally yank the shoe off of Ava’s foot.
“Woah, size 10 huh? Pretty big for a small girl like you, huh Ava?”
The crowd laughed.
The girl started to peel the socks off of Ava’s feet.
“No NO NOO!” Ava protested, as she slid them off.
This seemed to make Tierney more excited. “Looks like feet are the jackpot!”
Ava had smooth, well pedicured feet.
The girl began to stroke from heel to toe, gently, up and down.
From the moment her finger made contact, Ava began to pull and kick and giggle and fight to keep her mouth shut. Several more girls from the crew came to help hold her down.
The girl then began to tickle a little more firmly.
Ava promptly lost it!
AAAAAAAAAAHAHaHAHAHh-nohaAAAAAAH-NO-AAAA!!!!!
Ava laughed loud and hard and began to heave her body against her many captors.
“You’re being so nice! Really get her!” said Tierney cruelly, as the crowd cheered the idea.
The girl turned and said, “They actually don’t smell bad at all. They are, like, perfect.”
“I guess boss bitch has got to do it herself,” Tierney said, loving the crowd’s dynamic as they bought into her villainess attitude.
She marched over and dug all her nails into the soft smooth skin of Avas bare feet!
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAH!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Ava screamed with boisterous powerful laughter! Unable to hold back anything at all, she wailed and bellowed heavy laughter as Tierneys awful nails danced and dug into her velvet soft feet.
Collectively the ticklers decided she needed a break.
“I don’t know about all of you, but I think she can laugh harder!” Tierney made a show of marching over to little Britt. She leaned over and talked with her for a bit.
“My bestie Britt says to tickle her on her toes!”
The crowd cheered!
Tierney leaned over again and whispered with Britt.
Britt nervously began to approach Ava.
“Britt is going to teach us how to do it!”
The crowd cheered harder!
The girls held Ava’s ankles fast, knowing how strong she was.
Britt approached, starting to smile and come out of her shell a little. She mimed a few finger movements, and pointed to some key areas on the feet and toes.
She began to stroke the stems of Ava’s perfect toes with her fingertips.
AhahAHno nohoho nohohohahah!! NAAAAAhaHAHAH!!!!!
Britt tickled with more vigour, firmly stroking Ava’s toes where they met the balls of her feet.
AAAAAAAAAHAHAHh!!
Ava began to get frantic, obviously very susceptible to this technique.
Trying to hide a cute grin, Britt quietly said to Tierney, “Now let’s do the last one I taught you, but you and I together.”
The two slimed lotion onto their hands over-applying it. Simultaneously, they quickly slid the tips of their fingers between Ava’s toes and began to slide and squibble.
“AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! HELP MEAAAAAHAHAAAA!!!!!!”
Ava freaked out! She flailed and flopped bucked and heaved until she reached silent laughter. Laughing both hysterically and silently, she was frozen! The poor woman was momentarily unable to make her body move to avoid the horrible nails. She was in a breathless, silent, frozen freakout.
She took a big breath....
“AAAAAHAHHAh-STOAAAAAAAAHAHAH-PLEASE-NO-HAHAHAHA!!! NO MORE TOESSS AHAHAAH!!!!!”
With her renewed breath and laughter came renewed strength as her body came alive and she bucked some of her captors off of her. This didn’t stop the ticklish assault on her vulnerable toes.
Britt giggled, further coming out of her shell as she made Ava buck and scream with embarrassed laughter.
“AAHAHA GET THEM OUT OF MY TOES!!!!! AHAHAAAA!!!!”
Britt, now completely into it, leaned down to lick and nibble Ava’s poor perfect feet.
“WOAAAAAAHAHAAA!!!!!!! WHAT IS THAAAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHHA?!!!!”
Ava, feeling the new, astonishingly ticklish sensation, flailed and screamed and broke free! She scrambled to run, but was quickly overtaken and shoved to the ground.
Even though the tickles had ceased, Ava continued laughing for a good minute, her toes trying to wiggle away the residual feeling of, what Ava was positive was the most ticklish sensation any person had ever experienced.
“Well that worked out better than we’d expected, didn’t it folks?” shouted Tierney.
The crowd cheered!
“We got her so good, I guess we should just let her go. We can just skip the last tickle…” said Tierney, overacting and shrugging her shoulders for the crowd.
“BOOOO!!” the crowd responded, loving the whole thing.
“What? REALLY? You want more? Well, Ava, blame them, not me. I wanted to let you go. I guess we gotta keep on tickling. Hmmm… Where was that last tickle spot, I can’t seem to recall…”
“Butt and legs! Butt and legs!” the crowd began to chant on cue.
Tierney sat on Ava’s lower back, facing Ava’s butt. Britt, now showing no previous signs of shyness, sat between Ava’s feet, also facing her butt.
They both began to claw tickle Ava’s thighs, going up and down with their horrible honed nails.
JJUUUAAAA HAHA!!!! AH! AH AH HA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!”
Ava’s surprise at how much this tickled was evident in the way she began to laugh, quickly reaching higher and higher pitches of screaming laughter.
“AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! AHAHAHHAHAHHHHEHAHAHAHH!!HHELP MEEEAHHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ava screamed with higher and higher pitches of wild laughter, but the girls would not relent!
The terrible team tickled Ava’s poor legs until even the most sadistic person would have stopped, brought her a warm beverage and apologized!
The crowd stopped cheering and grew silent.
The terrible tickling duo noticed, and stopped tickling.
Ava sucked air in, breathing hard and deep. She was clearly nearing a point of passing out.
Tierney turned to the crowd, angry.
“What?! YOU IDIOTS ASKED FOR THIS!!”
The crowd grumbled, not having fun anymore, feeling a little ashamed.
She stood up. “SCREW ALL OF YOU!!!” Tierney bellowed.
Britt looked ashamed too. Leaning close to Ava’s face, she whispered, “I’m sorry. I went way overboard.”
“Ugh, you too?” Tierney shouted at Britt. “Out of my way, I’m not done! Lacy, you’re in!”
She shoved Britt aside, plopped firmly on Ava’s back. Lacy took Britt’s spot and they both began to gently tickle Ava’s captive butt!
“GAAAAAAHAHAHAAH!!!!!! AAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAH!!!! NOOOAAAA!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!”
Ava’s entire body was completely at mercy to the tickling! The girls clawed and stroked, swirled and skittered along her poor defenseless butt. Mercy was not even considered as Ava hurled and crashed and thrashed and slammed herself against the girls holding her down.
Beyond reason, every second her butt’s sensitivity grew and grew, as the awful girls tickled her.
“PLEAADAHJAHAAHAA!!!!!! AHAHAHHA!!!!”
The poor girl’s pleading laughter grew higher and more desperate. But so did, thankfully her strength! Soon the tickling sensations grew so intense that she turned into the Hulk, being able to throw off anyone trying to hold her down. The awful tickling nails, however, did not stop. More are more girls piled on top of her, and she bucked and laughed and screamed and threw more and more off of her, with her newfound massive tickle-strength.
Finally, Lacy decided to switch to tickling Ava’s still bare feet! That was the nail in the coffin! With someone tickling her on her more-sensitive-by-the-second butt, AND on her soft feet, she couldn’t flop and crash and slam in the right ways and respond to the tickling at once. She just flopped like a dolphin, wailing with frenzied ticklish laughter!
“AAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!!!!!!!!!”
Her laughter must have been audible for miles and it reached new peaks as Lacy’s awful long nails slid over the soft lotioned feet and against her wildly sensitive toes.
It tickled so badly, and her body reacted so violently, that, even though she was near passing out before, she couldn’t pass out now, and she desperately wanted to! The adrenaline forced her to vividly live every second!
“AAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH HAAHAHAHAHHAHH!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAAAAAA!!!!
BOOM!!
Out of nowhere, the tickling stopped. Norah had sprinted full speed, dived and tackled Tierney to the ground.
The crowd had mostly dispersed, but those who saw it gasped. Norah had hit her so hard she was bleeding from the mouth a little.
“What the HELL!!!!” Tierney bellowed.
“I told you if you touched my friend you would pay!” Bellowed Norah, looking ready to kill Tierney right then and there, come what may.
Tierney saw the look in Norah’s eyes, and it frightened her.
“My dad will take care of this. Come on crew, let’s get out of here.”
Tierney and her crew feigned a tough look, and left, nervously glancing back at Norah, who was on fire with rage.
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One month later
“Hehe hehehee!” Ava giggled.
“Sorry Ava,” Jeremy said, shy to be stroking Ava’s beautiful bare foot.
“I didn’t say you needed to stop,” said Ava, with a cheeky look on her face. “If they don’t like it, a librarian will come by and scold us.”
Jeremy continued to play with Ava’s toes as she smiled, studying for her next exam.
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“Jeremy, huh? Isn’t that the third handsome new friend you’ve made this month?” asked Norah, elbowing Ava.
“Fourth, but who’s counting?” Ava beamed.
“Well I guess some good did come of that Tierney mess. You are getting that new reputation, new image, new start you wanted,” Norah said, smiling.
“How ‘bout that?” beamed Ava, giving her friend a knowing look.
Norah gasped. “It was you? Ava! Did you put your OWN burn into the Burn Book?”
“I might have.”
“Oh my gosh!!! What were you thinking?”
“Well, I didn’t think the whole thing would be that ticklish!! That’s for sure! It was totally insane!”
“Yeah, I could hear you for miles! It was horrible!” Norah said.
“Horrible, or… secretly fun?”
“Oh my gosh Ava! I didn’t know this about you! I can’t believe it!” she said pausing. Turning to smile she grinned, “You know, knowing all of this just makes me want to tickle you, right?”
Ava smiled, looking truly happy since her college journey started. “Get in line.”
College was supposed to be fun. But in a small town, going to the college in the very town where you grew up, a lot of college simply felt like high school. The same thing that let these girls run amok in high school, let them do it in college. Their parents. Lawyers, city officials, police. You name it. Any complaint brought up against them was not only dismissed, but you and your family were harassed for having the nerve to complain about the “perfect angels” that were Tierney and her gang of friends.
Ava shook her head and headed to class.
“Ugh, I thought this was supposed to stop! College was supposed to be better!” complained Norah, Ava’s usually cheery friend. Injustice was really the only thing that could get Norah down. She was otherwise quite cheery.
“Well,” Ava replied, sighing, “Nothing could hold them accountable then, so I guess nothing is holding them responsible now. Just stay out of their way, and, hopefully in 4 years we can get out of this town.”
“Yeah. But there’s got to be a way. Something!” frowned Norah.
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Ava entered her small apartment. In a little town like that one, a small apartment cost less than a dorm room. As boring as it was to live alone, it saved money and it helped her focus on her studies.
Ava sighed and pulled off her shoes, admired her fun socks that she bought special for college, at the height of her excitement. It was a pair in a whole colorful set. She took off her shoes in every class, hoping to show them off a little. She got a couple looks, but nothing more. In her head somehow they would prompt questions, discussions. She’d take them off and people would want to look closer at the magnificent socks. Maybe show off the pedicure technique she’d perfected after years of practice. Maybe even some touching.
Ava laughed to herself, realizing how silly that was. But nonetheless, she was dissatisfied with the lack of fun that was supposed to happen at college.
Other students that left their hometowns got to meet new friends, have fun sexy flings, get away from bullies, create a new personal identity... Not in this town. Not when your college is in your hometown.
Ava sighed, played with her smooth feet a little, and hunkered down to another slightly lonely night of studying and watching a little tv before bed.
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“Hey Ava!” said Norah, cheerily. “How was that test?”
“Good! I think I aced it! It was a tough one, but I’ve been pushing myself hard, so it’s coming easier to me.”
“Awesome! So hey! Have you thought about some sort of way to put a stop to Tierney yet?” said Norah, with a furrowed brow.
“This again? It’s useless. It’s not possible. We just need to keep our heads down and get through it. I mean, if she targets you, she’s going to get you. And once she gets you, you feel bad, but people don’t hold it against you.”
“But it hurts people in other ways! The whole idea turns people on each other! That stupid Burn Book! Can you believe people actually put stuff in there. It is basically just an ‘Ammo-for-Tierney’ book, if you want to call it what it is!”
“Yeah, I know... I’m sorry. Look I’ll think about it, ok? But you know me, I’d really rather just keep my head down. So the fact that I’m even considering this is a big testament to how much I love you, right girl?”
“Yay!!” clapped Norah, as she hugged her friend a little too aggressively and sped off to class, leaving Ava to chuckle to herself.
Before entering her next classroom, she furrowed her brow, and smiled a little. She had what was the beginnings of an idea.
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“Well, Ava, it’s been a week. Did you come up with anything?” Norah asked Ava, grabbing Ava’s shoulder excitedly. “I’ve been so patient!”
“Kind of. But it’s not really what you were thinking.”
“What is it?” Asked Norah her brown eyes wide with excitement.
“I’ll tell you, but later, ok?”
“Come on!!! We have never had secrets!”
“I know, and I’m sorry that it’s a secret. But it’s better if I tell you after whatever happens, happens.”
“That’s weird. And really unlike you,” said a puzzled Norah.
“Yeah, but that’s kind of the point.”
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“Ava, Ava, Ava. Keeping your nose clean, avoiding me for so long, staying out of trouble. I knew you’d piss somebody off eventually.” Tierney sauntered up, grinning, and got nose to nose with Ava. She smiled cruelly, putting a finger on Ava’s upper chest.
“Oh hey, Tierney, sorry, About to head into class. Gotta go!”
“Your name is in my Burn Book.”
“What? No you must have read it wrong. Maybe it’s someone else. It’s a big school, and Ava is a common name,” shuddered Ava, her nervousness getting the best of her.
She slipped away and darted into the classroom she was due to be in.
Tierney followed, bursting through the doors, hands on hips, eyes squinting with sassy anger.
She saw the whole lecture hall turn to her, wondering why she burst in looking like an action movie assassin.
Not much stopped Tierney when she wanted something, but she knew she had to stay socially popular and on top. She felt the weird nervous shame that accompanied being stared at by a room of strangers. She huffed like a cartoon villain and walked away and out of the classroom.
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Ava plopped down in her typical seat next to Norah and pulled her hoodie up.
“Was that Tierney?” asked Norah. “What is she doing? Why is she after you?”
“Shhh!”
“What is going on?” Norah whispered.
“Later!” Ava whispered, shaking nervously.
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Class let out, and everyone but Ava, Norah, and a few stragglers left immediately.
“Ava, you’re shaking! Don’t go out there! Let me run to my car and I’ll drive up near the building. Don’t go out there.”
“Just let it happen, ok?”
Norah made a face like she’d been asked to get matching face tattoos.
“Ava, no way!”
“You know how she is. Please, just, just let it happen. Ok? Promise me.”
Norah huffed, but didn’t agree.
Ava, shaking, slowly walked up the stairs of the lecture hall, and out the door.
The light stung her eyes. As they began to adjust she saw Tierny and her gang of beautiful friends, standing with their hands on their hips like gang of girl bullies from a bad movie.
“You’re in trouble now.” said Tierney, a menacing smile on her face.
Ava began to run, and pushed past one of the smaller ones and bolted for the quad.
She darted through a crowd of students, apologising and changed directions.
It worked!
Ava caught her breath and looked around for the group. She began to shake, her nerves getting the best of her after the adrenaline began to wear off.
Boom!
All of a sudden from behind, one of them grabbed her arms.
Tierney and the rest caught up.
“Come on! You know no one gets away. You are screwed now, Ava,” sneered the evil young woman.
“Someone put your secret in my burn book. Now, I was perplexed at first. Gargalaphobia. I had to look that one up. You must have a pretty bad fear if it’s taken this many years for it to come out. I have dirt on pretty much everybody.”
“You are thinking about someone else! I’m sure of it! I don’t even know what that word means. Leave me alone!”
“You don’t? Oh. Well, it means,” Tierney got right in Ava’s face. “ A fear…” The girl holding Ava tightened her grasp. “Of being... tickled,” she whispered, almost nose to nose with Ava.
Ava’s face gave it all away. The blood drained from her countenance as she stuttered. “I-I don’t know w-why you. I’m not -t-t”
“You can’t even say the word!! Let’s get her gang!”
Tierney reached out and began to tickle Ava’s stomach and ribs with her long cruel nails, smiling the way a cartoon villain would smile.
Ava’s body curled inward like a snail trying to pull into its shell. She tried not to laugh but every touch made her sensitive body convulse in reaction.
With little effort, the long skinny arms of the beautiful Tierney clawed and poked at her sensitive body.
Ava fought with everything she could to both escape and to hold in the awful embarrassment of laughing in response to the sadistic woman’s touch.
“Squeeze her tighter!” said Tierney, her eyes getting big with hunger.
She switched techniques. Tierney leaned down and clawed Ava’s tight stomach with both hands
“AHAHhahahah, No-ho-hohaaa!! Don’t t-ttouchh haha meheheahaaa!!”
“AAHHAAHAA!!!!”
With each cruel stroke Ava screamed with laughter, immediately going back to fighting to stifle any giggling or noise at all, as soon as those long terrible nails stopped making contact.
“Ha ha! Look she’s trying so hard not to laugh! Hey Lacy, you get her. I bet your long nails will make her scream.”
A tall girl approached, smiling. You could tell she was nervous and excited. Lacy was a newer member of Tierney’s group, and was happy to have a chance to shine. She had VERY long, beautifully manicured fingernails, carefully adorned with jewels and little studs.
She quickly tested her tickle skill, gently digging into the poor girl's captive waist and ribs momentarily.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Ava let out a scream that would wake the dead!
A crowd began to gather.
Both Lacy and Ava looked surprised at the effect her nails had on her ticklish torso.
“Yay!! Keep going! Get her!” said Tierney.
Ava made eye contact with Lacy, begging with her eyes and shaking her head ‘no’ rapidly.
When the nails made contact this time, Ava went into hysterics, laughing uncontrollably, bucking and slamming her hips into the girl who held her so tightly!
“Ahahah- no not-meeahahahaha!! AAHAHAA PLEHEEHEHEAHHAA!!! DO-HO-N’T TICKLAHAHhaAAHHAA!!!”
Ava’s hysterics continued for some time, while the crowd of onlookers grew. They were laughing and curious and excited. Tierney’s gang of troublemakers and bullies had enough of a reputation that the few people watching that wanted to help Ava knew that they needed to keep their mouths shut. Most of them anyway.
“Hey, leave her alone! That’s too much!” one young man shouted.
Tierney flashed a look at him. “Ok stop tickling, Lacy. Get your phone. Go take a picture of that guy. We’ll deal with him later.”
Ava was losing strength and it was getting harder to hold her up. Ava and her captor fell to the grassy ground.
“I don’t really tickle people,” said Tierney, “what else should we do to her?” She asked aloud, addressing the growing crowd.
“Keep tickling!” a few people shouted from the crowd.
“Well, obviously, but, like where do we tickle?”
People began to shout from the crowd.
“Get her feet!” Tickle her armpits!” “More tummy!!” “Ooo get her knees!” “Tickle her neck!”
“Geez everybody! I didn’t think you’d be so into it! Ok ok, I think I heard enough to know everyone’s favorites!” Tierney was working the crowd like an improv comedian.
“I heard about a million people say her feet, so we’re gonna do that. I am gonna let someone else do it though if they turn out stinky.”
The crowd laughed.
“What’s the absolute worst spot to be tickled, though? I wanna do that one. Come on folks, let’s hear it!”
People started shouting suggestions.
“Armpits!”
The crowd cheered.
Someone yelled “Knees!”
They cheered.
“Neck!”
A few people clapped.
“So armpits? That sounded like the winner!” Tierney bellowed, addressing the crowd like an infomercial salesperson.
“Yeah!!!” The crowd cheered
As the crowd quieted to see the next tickle attack, a small voice was heard.
“That’s not the worst spot.”
Tierney stopped. “Who said that?”
The anxiety in the crowd was palpable.
“Come on!” asked Tierney, losing her cool a little.
The crowd pushed a very small woman to the front.
She was obviously very shy, and incredibly nervous.
“Well, what’s the worst spot then!?” pushed Tierney.
The small young woman shrunk even further, looking like she was nearing tears.
Tierney changed tactics. “It’s ok sweetie, it’s ok, come here, come here” she said sounding comforting, but with a little edge that let you know you had to obey.
Tierney put her arm around her and leaned over. They had a very quiet whispered exchange.
She turned around and said, “My new friend Britt here says that the worst spot to tickle someone is the back of the thighs and the butt.”
The crowd erupted into cheering!
“We have a winner!!!” said Tierney lifting Britt’s small arm into their air victoriously as if she had just won a boxing match.
“Ok everyone! Feet! Our next event!”
Tierney pointed at one of her crew. “You do the honors. You are the one who always does all our pedicures, maybe you’re immune to the smell.”
The girls rolled Ava onto her stomach, bending her knees, facing her soles up into the air. She untied Ava’s sneakers, and tried to pull them off. “She’s gripping them with her toes! I can’t.”
“Ugh!” Tierney marched over and yanked with all her might. She switched to two hands to finally yank the shoe off of Ava’s foot.
“Woah, size 10 huh? Pretty big for a small girl like you, huh Ava?”
The crowd laughed.
The girl started to peel the socks off of Ava’s feet.
“No NO NOO!” Ava protested, as she slid them off.
This seemed to make Tierney more excited. “Looks like feet are the jackpot!”
Ava had smooth, well pedicured feet.
The girl began to stroke from heel to toe, gently, up and down.
From the moment her finger made contact, Ava began to pull and kick and giggle and fight to keep her mouth shut. Several more girls from the crew came to help hold her down.
The girl then began to tickle a little more firmly.
Ava promptly lost it!
AAAAAAAAAAHAHaHAHAHh-nohaAAAAAAH-NO-AAAA!!!!!
Ava laughed loud and hard and began to heave her body against her many captors.
“You’re being so nice! Really get her!” said Tierney cruelly, as the crowd cheered the idea.
The girl turned and said, “They actually don’t smell bad at all. They are, like, perfect.”
“I guess boss bitch has got to do it herself,” Tierney said, loving the crowd’s dynamic as they bought into her villainess attitude.
She marched over and dug all her nails into the soft smooth skin of Avas bare feet!
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAH!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Ava screamed with boisterous powerful laughter! Unable to hold back anything at all, she wailed and bellowed heavy laughter as Tierneys awful nails danced and dug into her velvet soft feet.
Collectively the ticklers decided she needed a break.
“I don’t know about all of you, but I think she can laugh harder!” Tierney made a show of marching over to little Britt. She leaned over and talked with her for a bit.
“My bestie Britt says to tickle her on her toes!”
The crowd cheered!
Tierney leaned over again and whispered with Britt.
Britt nervously began to approach Ava.
“Britt is going to teach us how to do it!”
The crowd cheered harder!
The girls held Ava’s ankles fast, knowing how strong she was.
Britt approached, starting to smile and come out of her shell a little. She mimed a few finger movements, and pointed to some key areas on the feet and toes.
She began to stroke the stems of Ava’s perfect toes with her fingertips.
AhahAHno nohoho nohohohahah!! NAAAAAhaHAHAH!!!!!
Britt tickled with more vigour, firmly stroking Ava’s toes where they met the balls of her feet.
AAAAAAAAAHAHAHh!!
Ava began to get frantic, obviously very susceptible to this technique.
Trying to hide a cute grin, Britt quietly said to Tierney, “Now let’s do the last one I taught you, but you and I together.”
The two slimed lotion onto their hands over-applying it. Simultaneously, they quickly slid the tips of their fingers between Ava’s toes and began to slide and squibble.
“AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! HELP MEAAAAAHAHAAAA!!!!!!”
Ava freaked out! She flailed and flopped bucked and heaved until she reached silent laughter. Laughing both hysterically and silently, she was frozen! The poor woman was momentarily unable to make her body move to avoid the horrible nails. She was in a breathless, silent, frozen freakout.
She took a big breath....
“AAAAAHAHHAh-STOAAAAAAAAHAHAH-PLEASE-NO-HAHAHAHA!!! NO MORE TOESSS AHAHAAH!!!!!”
With her renewed breath and laughter came renewed strength as her body came alive and she bucked some of her captors off of her. This didn’t stop the ticklish assault on her vulnerable toes.
Britt giggled, further coming out of her shell as she made Ava buck and scream with embarrassed laughter.
“AAHAHA GET THEM OUT OF MY TOES!!!!! AHAHAAAA!!!!”
Britt, now completely into it, leaned down to lick and nibble Ava’s poor perfect feet.
“WOAAAAAAHAHAAA!!!!!!! WHAT IS THAAAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHHA?!!!!”
Ava, feeling the new, astonishingly ticklish sensation, flailed and screamed and broke free! She scrambled to run, but was quickly overtaken and shoved to the ground.
Even though the tickles had ceased, Ava continued laughing for a good minute, her toes trying to wiggle away the residual feeling of, what Ava was positive was the most ticklish sensation any person had ever experienced.
“Well that worked out better than we’d expected, didn’t it folks?” shouted Tierney.
The crowd cheered!
“We got her so good, I guess we should just let her go. We can just skip the last tickle…” said Tierney, overacting and shrugging her shoulders for the crowd.
“BOOOO!!” the crowd responded, loving the whole thing.
“What? REALLY? You want more? Well, Ava, blame them, not me. I wanted to let you go. I guess we gotta keep on tickling. Hmmm… Where was that last tickle spot, I can’t seem to recall…”
“Butt and legs! Butt and legs!” the crowd began to chant on cue.
Tierney sat on Ava’s lower back, facing Ava’s butt. Britt, now showing no previous signs of shyness, sat between Ava’s feet, also facing her butt.
They both began to claw tickle Ava’s thighs, going up and down with their horrible honed nails.
JJUUUAAAA HAHA!!!! AH! AH AH HA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!”
Ava’s surprise at how much this tickled was evident in the way she began to laugh, quickly reaching higher and higher pitches of screaming laughter.
“AHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! AHAHAHHAHAHHHHEHAHAHAHH!!HHELP MEEEAHHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ava screamed with higher and higher pitches of wild laughter, but the girls would not relent!
The terrible team tickled Ava’s poor legs until even the most sadistic person would have stopped, brought her a warm beverage and apologized!
The crowd stopped cheering and grew silent.
The terrible tickling duo noticed, and stopped tickling.
Ava sucked air in, breathing hard and deep. She was clearly nearing a point of passing out.
Tierney turned to the crowd, angry.
“What?! YOU IDIOTS ASKED FOR THIS!!”
The crowd grumbled, not having fun anymore, feeling a little ashamed.
She stood up. “SCREW ALL OF YOU!!!” Tierney bellowed.
Britt looked ashamed too. Leaning close to Ava’s face, she whispered, “I’m sorry. I went way overboard.”
“Ugh, you too?” Tierney shouted at Britt. “Out of my way, I’m not done! Lacy, you’re in!”
She shoved Britt aside, plopped firmly on Ava’s back. Lacy took Britt’s spot and they both began to gently tickle Ava’s captive butt!
“GAAAAAAHAHAHAAH!!!!!! AAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAH!!!! NOOOAAAA!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!”
Ava’s entire body was completely at mercy to the tickling! The girls clawed and stroked, swirled and skittered along her poor defenseless butt. Mercy was not even considered as Ava hurled and crashed and thrashed and slammed herself against the girls holding her down.
Beyond reason, every second her butt’s sensitivity grew and grew, as the awful girls tickled her.
“PLEAADAHJAHAAHAA!!!!!! AHAHAHHA!!!!”
The poor girl’s pleading laughter grew higher and more desperate. But so did, thankfully her strength! Soon the tickling sensations grew so intense that she turned into the Hulk, being able to throw off anyone trying to hold her down. The awful tickling nails, however, did not stop. More are more girls piled on top of her, and she bucked and laughed and screamed and threw more and more off of her, with her newfound massive tickle-strength.
Finally, Lacy decided to switch to tickling Ava’s still bare feet! That was the nail in the coffin! With someone tickling her on her more-sensitive-by-the-second butt, AND on her soft feet, she couldn’t flop and crash and slam in the right ways and respond to the tickling at once. She just flopped like a dolphin, wailing with frenzied ticklish laughter!
“AAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!!!!!!!!!”
Her laughter must have been audible for miles and it reached new peaks as Lacy’s awful long nails slid over the soft lotioned feet and against her wildly sensitive toes.
It tickled so badly, and her body reacted so violently, that, even though she was near passing out before, she couldn’t pass out now, and she desperately wanted to! The adrenaline forced her to vividly live every second!
“AAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH HAAHAHAHAHHAHH!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAAAAAA!!!!
BOOM!!
Out of nowhere, the tickling stopped. Norah had sprinted full speed, dived and tackled Tierney to the ground.
The crowd had mostly dispersed, but those who saw it gasped. Norah had hit her so hard she was bleeding from the mouth a little.
“What the HELL!!!!” Tierney bellowed.
“I told you if you touched my friend you would pay!” Bellowed Norah, looking ready to kill Tierney right then and there, come what may.
Tierney saw the look in Norah’s eyes, and it frightened her.
“My dad will take care of this. Come on crew, let’s get out of here.”
Tierney and her crew feigned a tough look, and left, nervously glancing back at Norah, who was on fire with rage.
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One month later
“Hehe hehehee!” Ava giggled.
“Sorry Ava,” Jeremy said, shy to be stroking Ava’s beautiful bare foot.
“I didn’t say you needed to stop,” said Ava, with a cheeky look on her face. “If they don’t like it, a librarian will come by and scold us.”
Jeremy continued to play with Ava’s toes as she smiled, studying for her next exam.
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“Jeremy, huh? Isn’t that the third handsome new friend you’ve made this month?” asked Norah, elbowing Ava.
“Fourth, but who’s counting?” Ava beamed.
“Well I guess some good did come of that Tierney mess. You are getting that new reputation, new image, new start you wanted,” Norah said, smiling.
“How ‘bout that?” beamed Ava, giving her friend a knowing look.
Norah gasped. “It was you? Ava! Did you put your OWN burn into the Burn Book?”
“I might have.”
“Oh my gosh!!! What were you thinking?”
“Well, I didn’t think the whole thing would be that ticklish!! That’s for sure! It was totally insane!”
“Yeah, I could hear you for miles! It was horrible!” Norah said.
“Horrible, or… secretly fun?”
“Oh my gosh Ava! I didn’t know this about you! I can’t believe it!” she said pausing. Turning to smile she grinned, “You know, knowing all of this just makes me want to tickle you, right?”
Ava smiled, looking truly happy since her college journey started. “Get in line.”
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