Hi! This is my first story since ages, and my first try with a POV story. Please, let me know what you think, and if you have any advice!
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So... we're really doing this... yeah?
I mean, I'm already tied down, I'm in my underwear, we are really doing this
W-why aren't you saying anything..? You're usually very talkative, it's making me a bit tense, ahah.
Stop staring at me! You're making me blush... and now you're smiling. You're really enjoying this, aren't you? I didn't know you were this sadistic... Good to know
Ok, I really can't stand this anymore, just staHArt-
Crap, I was so focused on you staring at me, I didn't notice your hand coming closer to my foot. So you start like this, huh? A gentle rub? I must confess that it's working more than I thought
O-ohohokay, you're really tick- AHAHAH Wait!
Both feet now? God, I'm already laughing so much, and we just started
N-NOHOHOHOH WAHAHAHAHIT PLEAHAHAHAHSE STOHOOHOHOHOHOP
Thanks for stopping... I still have to regain my breath... wait, why are you smirking?
N-no wait, don't come closer! No, no no not my armpits pleaAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSE NOOHOHOHOHOHO NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO
You went for my sides?! Why are you so evil with me?
NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHO STOP PLEAHAHAHAHAHASE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I CAHAHAHAHN'T TAHAHAHAHAHAKE IT
T-that was intense... I don't honestly know how much more I'll be able to take... and why the hell am I still giggling?! What are you doing? Why did you turn around? Please, I can't stand this! Oh. Oh no. Nononononononono, not a feather... wait, you have two?!
Ohohk, thaht's seems a bit ohverkill... Nono wait not my feet not my feeeehehhehehehehet pleahahahahase nohohohohohoh ahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
Oh no, oh no, it's bad, it's really bad... the cycling motion of the feathers, the fact that the intensity is so low... it's driving me crazy! I can't stop laughing, I really can't... I preferred the hands tickling by a lot!
Pleahahahahahase noohohohohohohoho it's kihihhihihilling me ahahahhahahahahah
Finally, you stopped! I thought I was gonna faint... why are you giggling? You are really enjoying yourself, you love seeing me here, helple- nonono don't use them on my stomach please no
Nnnnnnngh stooohohohop it's too much ahahahahahah nnnnnstoooohohohop
I don't even know how this is making me feel... my stomach is moving on its own! Oh god, it's not as bad, but it's still driving me nuts. Oh, thanks, you got rid of one of the feathers- no wait, it can't be a good thing, wait no not my armpit
NnnNOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOH STOP AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA IT'S KIHIHIHIHIHHILING MEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
No please don't get rid of the other feather no please go back to the feathers please go back to them why did I consent to this please not both armpits
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH PLEAHAHAHAHAHAHASE I'M BEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEGGING YOUHUHUHUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH WHYHIHIHIHIHIHIEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH STOHOHOHOP
Don't
STOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP PLEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSE
Go on
I CAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAN'T STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAND IT NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO
Is... it over? It was... why did I like it so much? It felt... Good... I'm still laughing, even if you're not touching me anymore... well, I had fun. We should do it again!... uh... what's that bottle? Ah, its content is cold! Are you... massaging my feet...? Oh, so you are a cutie after all, huh? Man, it does feel good... I feel all of the tension going away...
T-thanks... !
Wait. No. You just... barely touched my foot. Why did it... tickle so much? What did you do to my feet? Oh no, please don't turn around again, don't don't don't don't... wait now why are you getting low? I can't see a thing... please don't do anything... please... please...
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHT IS THAT AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
What is that? What are you doing to me? It feels like... dozens of... pointy, crazy tickly feathers... I really can't take this
NOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH STOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP
Oh... here you are again... obviously you're smiling... you like this eh? I'll be honest... I'm loving this too. But I'll never admit it, heh. Oh, so your devilish torturous machines were... two hairbrushes? It's kinda scary how you managed to turn them into a deadly weapon... So, we're finished? I almost feel bad...
Please, don't... stop
Did I... say it out loud...? All of this tickling really messed with my mind. And here it is your big smile again. This smile though... it's different. You're happy I'm enjoying this? Well, it doesn't matter, I see you're going to continue using the hairbrushes...
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH
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So... we're really doing this... yeah?
I mean, I'm already tied down, I'm in my underwear, we are really doing this
W-why aren't you saying anything..? You're usually very talkative, it's making me a bit tense, ahah.
Stop staring at me! You're making me blush... and now you're smiling. You're really enjoying this, aren't you? I didn't know you were this sadistic... Good to know
Ok, I really can't stand this anymore, just staHArt-
Crap, I was so focused on you staring at me, I didn't notice your hand coming closer to my foot. So you start like this, huh? A gentle rub? I must confess that it's working more than I thought
O-ohohokay, you're really tick- AHAHAH Wait!
Both feet now? God, I'm already laughing so much, and we just started
N-NOHOHOHOH WAHAHAHAHIT PLEAHAHAHAHSE STOHOOHOHOHOHOP
Thanks for stopping... I still have to regain my breath... wait, why are you smirking?
N-no wait, don't come closer! No, no no not my armpits pleaAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSE NOOHOHOHOHOHO NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO
You went for my sides?! Why are you so evil with me?
NOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHO STOP PLEAHAHAHAHAHASE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I CAHAHAHAHN'T TAHAHAHAHAHAKE IT
T-that was intense... I don't honestly know how much more I'll be able to take... and why the hell am I still giggling?! What are you doing? Why did you turn around? Please, I can't stand this! Oh. Oh no. Nononononononono, not a feather... wait, you have two?!
Ohohk, thaht's seems a bit ohverkill... Nono wait not my feet not my feeeehehhehehehehet pleahahahahase nohohohohohoh ahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
Oh no, oh no, it's bad, it's really bad... the cycling motion of the feathers, the fact that the intensity is so low... it's driving me crazy! I can't stop laughing, I really can't... I preferred the hands tickling by a lot!
Pleahahahahahase noohohohohohohoho it's kihihhihihilling me ahahahhahahahahah
Finally, you stopped! I thought I was gonna faint... why are you giggling? You are really enjoying yourself, you love seeing me here, helple- nonono don't use them on my stomach please no
Nnnnnnngh stooohohohop it's too much ahahahahahah nnnnnstoooohohohop
I don't even know how this is making me feel... my stomach is moving on its own! Oh god, it's not as bad, but it's still driving me nuts. Oh, thanks, you got rid of one of the feathers- no wait, it can't be a good thing, wait no not my armpit
NnnNOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOH STOP AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA IT'S KIHIHIHIHIHHILING MEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
No please don't get rid of the other feather no please go back to the feathers please go back to them why did I consent to this please not both armpits
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOOOOOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH PLEAHAHAHAHAHAHASE I'M BEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEGGING YOUHUHUHUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH WHYHIHIHIHIHIHIEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH STOHOHOHOP
Don't
STOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP PLEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSE
Go on
I CAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAN'T STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAND IT NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO
Is... it over? It was... why did I like it so much? It felt... Good... I'm still laughing, even if you're not touching me anymore... well, I had fun. We should do it again!... uh... what's that bottle? Ah, its content is cold! Are you... massaging my feet...? Oh, so you are a cutie after all, huh? Man, it does feel good... I feel all of the tension going away...
T-thanks... !
Wait. No. You just... barely touched my foot. Why did it... tickle so much? What did you do to my feet? Oh no, please don't turn around again, don't don't don't don't... wait now why are you getting low? I can't see a thing... please don't do anything... please... please...
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHT IS THAT AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
What is that? What are you doing to me? It feels like... dozens of... pointy, crazy tickly feathers... I really can't take this
NOOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH STOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOP STOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOP
Oh... here you are again... obviously you're smiling... you like this eh? I'll be honest... I'm loving this too. But I'll never admit it, heh. Oh, so your devilish torturous machines were... two hairbrushes? It's kinda scary how you managed to turn them into a deadly weapon... So, we're finished? I almost feel bad...
Please, don't... stop
Did I... say it out loud...? All of this tickling really messed with my mind. And here it is your big smile again. This smile though... it's different. You're happy I'm enjoying this? Well, it doesn't matter, I see you're going to continue using the hairbrushes...
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH NOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOH
