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Ericas 1st Comic

Dark Convoy

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As promissed, I finaly finished it and have the busted wrist to prove it 😀 , this is my first time doing anything of theis size and I hope its not the last. Any and all feedback is welcome, and apricated, feel free to make any coments (good or bad) about it, id like to know what people really think, if I suck, then say so. anyway, here it is so sit back relax and enjoy, Abduction.


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Dang, Your Good

WOW!:yowzer:

Love the artwork, story, and tickling fashion. Man, you are such a great artist. All I can really say it, when is the next one coming out?😉
 
There's always room for a little improvement

You have a very nice style, really enjoy your work. But I think you could work a little more on ur facial expressions, specifically the eyes when open. Other then that, its awesome.
 
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Great job DC. I see Erica is really becoming a star with your work..
 
Erica is cute, no question! I think she'll be given the Poisonous Monkey treatment one day! Great comic, mate.
 
Wow, didnt expext to get this many responces, Thanks people.

Dalsine: I noticed the defect right after I posted this, and smacked myself for being so careless, ah well, live and learn I guess, but thanks for the feedback.

critterlord: next one will be soon I hope, gota think up a new story.

grippedchimp: go for it, Id love to see Erica getting it from your crew, that would be really cool.

This was the first time iv done anything like this, and so far its going good, thanks for all the Feedback people.
 
Hello Dark One

I really checked your artwork a few months ago on a club/site I can't remember where they didn't credit you or else; but just lately I found out your Erica 1 & 2 drawing, and the Han/Leia piece (amazing) and that really kicked me in the butt to write in to say how much I like your work; obviously you're starting to develop your style and the new comic proves that I hope you can continue working... and maybe we can see a 'sequel' or 'prequel' of the Leia-slave incident in the future
Best Regards
Darth Godflesh
 
my words are not enough to express how great this comic is. i can only salute you. you along with chimp still remain among my favorite. just........:wow: damn.(in a good way, very good way)
 
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