Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles: Clavat in stocks!

[That]

About bloody time eh?

aaaalllright, so, down in the mines, laughter echoes through the dimly lit tunnels...and guess whats going on down there? perhaps ill draw the Lily the Selkie later..If anyone wants me to

smaller versions included(if i did this thing as i should anyway, lol)

thanks to Brennan, for writing the awesome stories that inspire me to draw.
and garmito, whos constant hard work motivates me.

also, lemme know what you suggest i do to improve, ive darkened the lines around Isla a bit, maybe i should darken them more?

 

[Wii]

Cute to the extreme. Very nicely done, That! This makes wanna hijack someone's comp and make a new chapter. ^^

 

[FT Genikit]

Nice one!

 

[Sockstickler]

This is a really well done picture. I like how you captured the atmosphere of the Mine of Cathuriges. You even have the little creature in the lantern on the ceiling. Nice touch there.
Hmmm, things to improve on or change... well I'd love to see Isla in this predicament in socks, personally. That was my favorite part of the story. As for actual critiques, one thing that stands out to me is the absence of teeth. I feel that adding teeth would really help her laughing smile and make her look like the young adventurer she is. I also thought that the Clavat kind she is has darker brown hair, though I could be wrong. Other than that, I really like it🙂

 

[That]

Glad you like it guys, thanks for the feedback ^^

Socks? yeah sure, ill try in my next one, even if i have to make 2 versions 😀
teeth, gotcha

...ooops, youre right, dark hair, shouldnt have used my wallpapers as reference after all >_<

well, looking forward to the next chapter