First coumple small tries

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In other words, what do you think?

i contributed a little something to the FFVII and KH parts of this
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1215574/action/view/chapter_map/1

go with the upperbody path of this one
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1215574/action/view/chapter_map/1411221

and this one (only the KH 1 path exist so far tho)
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1215574/action/view/chapter_map/14511

ive literally just written about 2 pages, but id like to know what you think, maybe ill write mor ein a few hours, onc emy stomach is pleased, well, enjoy