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First Story

tidoman61

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Okay this is my first story so bear with me!


Britney awoke to find herself tied and blindfolded to a cold meatel tabel. She tried to move but she quickly found out that she was bound with her hands tied above her head and her feet tied spread apart.

She then noticed that she was completley naked expect for the blindfold.

Then She heared something

"Experiment 1653, Multible stimulation Feet and Clitoris"

Multible stimulation Britney thought what the hell is that.
Then all a sudden she heard lots of buzzing and mechanicle sounds. and then suddenley she felt something rub against both of her abnormaly ticklish feet. and she gave a slight EEK and a jump.
Then it came there had to be atleast 20 different things tickling her feet at one time
"Whaaat he he he dieed i Doooo he he"
Then as soon as it came it stoped.

and again she heard more noises. and all a sudden she felt cold meatel rods poking her in the pussy.
then the rods entered her and spread apart and more came until her clit was clearly exposed.
"oh ooo what oh what are you doing"
Then she felt it, some sort of feather of soft object was now actully tickling her Clit.
"OHh hee he hoo OHH"
Britney screamed in a mixture of laughs and moans.
More buzzing noises
She felt something run up her feet, and then IT CAME!
Fuzzies inbetween her toes, Q-tip like rods running up and down her feet, all the while her clit is being tickled.
" oh oh heee ohh my god please stop he he ohh stop it "
She was now getting closer and closer to a orgasam but she told herself that she couldn't.
Then everything sped up.
"oh Ohh he he OHHH" Britney was now starting to enjoy it more and more. She was now moving her hips, actully humping the clit tickling instuments.
"HEE HEE OHH OH HO HO HEE"
It was building up inside of her. A huge orgasam. and she couldnt stop it.
"oh oh OHHHHH YES YES" And finally not being able to handle the mixture of senses she went thru a mind blowing orgasam.
Right after she orgasamed a loud voice sounded,

Test 1653 Feet clitoris over
Test 1654 Feet Armpits Clitors begining!


So what do you think anything i should change or do give me some feed back!!
 
not bad...

Not bad indeed...
A bit short, but interesting...

Why don't you write a follow up, describing Test 1654 in more details?

I would love to read that...

greets, elder...
 
Not bad for a first story but I agree that it's a bit short. Check your spelling too as that is always noticeable, it's table, metal, mechanical and orgasm in case you want to know. Buy yourself a paperback dictionary and check on words you are unsure of. Your writing skills are fine and will improve the more you write. I enjoy writing short stories myself and I always use my dictionary because I am not the best at spelling either.
 
thanks for the corrective critisism

hey thanks alot guys. i will write another, i can usally spell pretty well dont know what happened, must of been tired
 
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