Glenhaven Happiness Manor (a tickle torture story) F/M ... (PART 4) !

[LisaLisaJam]

Carrie's researches will lead to her tickling Silas into a puddle of helpless ticklish flesh.

Very studious that girl is! Such a good student.

 

[yankeerose]

This is PART 4 of this Glenhaven story! Regarding the first four parts, I currently feel like Part 1 was the best out of the first three.
However, I feel PART 4 is amazing! With its conversations between the two people, the fears, the desires, the cunning, and just the way it all plays out. See the pictures way down in the #20 post of this thread.

If you do read this PART 4 then please please please do me the favor of commenting and tell me what you think of it!?!?

Lisa this an absolutely jamming story wow! Very rarely do I bother to comment but the concept and writing style in this story is electryfying

 

[LisaLisaJam]

Lisa this an absolutely jamming story wow! Very rarely do I bother to comment but the concept and writing style in this story is electryfying

Awe yay!!! Thank you so much @yankeerose
I'm quite proud about the story concept I dreamed up. 🙂

 

[yankeerose]

Awe yay!!! Thank you so much @yankeerose
I'm quite proud about the story concept I dreamed up. 🙂

That's some hell of an imagination you have never seen anything quite like it it's absolutely amazing

 

[LisaLisaJam]

That's some hell of an imagination you have never seen anything quite like it it's absolutely amazing

I like how he is trying to keep her tickling as minimal as he can, by offering that she can tickle him a little bit, with his plan being that it will stop her from tickling him a whole bunch. Couple that with the fact of her ever growing curiosity of what his ticklish reactions would be like if she touched him. It's all good stuff! 🙂

 

[yankeerose]

I like how he is trying to keep her tickling as minimal as he can, by offering that she can tickle him a little bit, with his plan being that it will stop her from tickling him a whole bunch. Couple that with the fact of her ever growing curiosity of what his ticklish reactions would be like if she touched him. It's all good stuff! 🙂

There are several points in the story that just reach out and grab you and pull you in I found my heart pounding as I was reading some of it

 

[yankeerose]

I like how he is trying to keep her tickling as minimal as he can, by offering that she can tickle him a little bit, with his plan being that it will stop her from tickling him a whole bunch. Couple that with the fact of her ever growing curiosity of what his ticklish reactions would be like if she touched him. It's all good stuff! 🙂

You sure have a way of wording things and also making the reader visualize what's going on in her head and his head you got some really razor sharp Talent for this stuff

 

[LisaLisaJam]

There are several points in the story that just reach out and grab you and pull you in I found my heart pounding as I was reading some of it

Your heart pounding while reading it is super interesting. Was it because you were worried for him? Or what?

 

[LisaLisaJam]

You sure have a way of wording things and also making the reader visualize what's going on in her head and his head you got some really razor sharp Talent for this stuff

I wonder what you think? What makes someone more able to write a story like this? My thoughts are that they really must enjoy the subject of tickling, very much, have a vast knowledge of it, if that makes any sense? @yankeerose

 

[yankeerose]

I wonder what you think? What makes someone more able to write a story like this? My thoughts are that they really must enjoy the subject of tickling, very much, have a vast knowledge of it, if that makes any sense? @yankeerose

Yes I suppose I agree with you they must enjoy the subject of tickling however you with that some people still just do not have the ability to express their thoughts and ideas as effective I've read a lot of these stories and they're just not interesting to me not that the people don't have good ideas but the way some people Express their ideas out for others to read just I don't know some of it is predictable some of its just not interesting however with you you have a different kind of style you get into deep details and you make the reader really envisioned what's going on it's a little hard for me to explain but not everybody has this unique talent like you

 

[yankeerose]

Your heart pounding while reading it is super interesting. Was it because you were worried for him? Or what?

No not necessarily it being worried for him per se but knowing how intense and underestimated pickling can be like there was a part in a story where you describe how he is strapped down there on this table or whatever just lying there unable to move she's at the desk reading the book looking over the edge of the book at him seeing him trapped and cannot get away and she's reading about what she's going to do to him he then help us to do anything else races his head and tries to talk to her and question what she's doing what she's reading telling her not to believe everything she's reading somehow trying to convince her not to do what she's thinking of doing but she's not listening to him it's those kind of details

 

[LisaLisaJam]

Yes I suppose I agree with you they must enjoy the subject of tickling however you with that some people still just do not have the ability to express their thoughts and ideas as effective I've read a lot of these stories and they're just not interesting to me not that the people don't have good ideas but the way some people Express their ideas out for others to read just I don't know some of it is predictable some of its just not interesting however with you you have a different kind of style you get into deep details and you make the reader really envisioned what's going on it's a little hard for me to explain but not everybody has this unique talent like you

Awe. Well again thank you for saying so and I'm just happy the stories make people feel. Tickling really is mostly about control of someone, in my opinion. So, a lot of dominant submissive story lines can be involved. It's really SO VERY interesting as I think about new ideas.

 

[yankeerose]

Awe. Well again thank you for saying so and I'm just happy the stories make people feel. Tickling really is mostly about control of someone, in my opinion. So, a lot of dominant submissive story lines can be involved. It's really SO VERY interesting as I think about new ideas.

Yes I agree you do a really good job and you're right tickling is mostly about control and I like the dominant submissive parts of the story sometimes more than a tickling part so keep that gold in mind of yours working the way it is because you're doing it right at least for me anyway

 

[yankeerose]

Yes I suppose I agree with you they must enjoy the subject of tickling however you with that some people still just do not have the ability to express their thoughts and ideas as effective I've read a lot of these stories and they're just not interesting to me not that the people don't have good ideas but the way some people Express their ideas out for others to read just I don't know some of it is predictable some of its just not interesting however with you you have a different kind of style you get into deep details and you make the reader really envisioned what's going on it's a little hard for me to explain but not everybody has this unique talent like you

Awe. Well again thank you for saying so and I'm just happy the stories make people feel. Tickling really is mostly about control of someone, in my opinion. So, a lot of dominant submissive story lines can be involved. It's really SO VERY interesting as I think about new ideas.

I also love the idea that they person was created for tickle torture and to crave actually desire and needs it but on the surface tries to still get out of the torture and his tickler learns of this You thought of everything

 

[LisaLisaJam]

No not necessarily it being worried for him per se but knowing how intense and underestimated pickling can be like there was a part in a story where you describe how he is strapped down there on this table or whatever just lying there unable to move she's at the desk reading the book looking over the edge of the book at him seeing him trapped and cannot get away and she's reading about what she's going to do to him he then help us to do anything else races his head and tries to talk to her and question what she's doing what she's reading telling her not to believe everything she's reading somehow trying to convince her not to do what she's thinking of doing but she's not listening to him it's those kind of details

Ah yes! I absolutely love that part of the story. She's reading and learning, and beginning to want to try tickling him, and he's stuck helpless, trying to talk her out of it. Yet his beautiful stretched out naked body is constantly inviting her to get started. I love those parts too!

 

[ashbabe410]

Why on earth would Silas tell her where the fork thing is when she didn't even ask! Maybe he really does like being tickled to insanity lol

 

[ashbabe410]

That "I'm helpless and can't do anything to stop it" line would and has worked on me when it's coming from a guy I'm attracted to lol. I don't know why but I don't like the idea of them being helpless when I'm attracted to them! Definitely wrong thing for him to say to her though since she obviously liked that aspect of it lol!

 

[LisaLisaJam]

Yes I agree you do a really good job and you're right tickling is mostly about control and I like the dominant submissive parts of the story sometimes more than a tickling part so keep that gold in mind of yours working the way it is because you're doing it right at least for me anyway

@yankeerose
Those are some great thoughts you expressed. I agree with you very much. The control, dominance and submissive aspects are a huge part of tickling someone. Without those feelings and emotions involved, I'm not sure tickle torture could exist. Thanks again for having a conversation on my story writing.