Have to pay the rent" girlfriend " got the job.

[Jk1974]

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[robmic]

Pretty good job for your first time. Read and re-read it a few times and correct a few mistakes next time and you'll have a great start on a second career!

 

[milagros317]

Very nice story! 😀

 

[Jk1974]

Thanks

 

[Pghtkltorture]

Good stuff. I would reccomend some paragraph breaks though. Good stories often aren't appreciated enough because they're physically challenging to read without those breaks

 

[Jk1974]

Thanks again.. A lot of times I just use voice recognition software.. Typing with my hand size is a challenge all its own.. It's literally two fingers.. Normally my pinkies.. I'm waiting for the Jitterbug of keyboards.. We've all seen those commercials look at the big numbers.. Easy to push buttons.. Even if you're four buttons off.. By the time you push the button 80% of the time you'll have the right one.. Voice software with accents.. Different pronunciations.. Are slightly a challenge for myself.. I hope I want to get better.. I will work on it. Typing Exedra Exedra.. But the story itself? The premise.. Plot if you will.. Good okay?.. I love this forum!! It's like my old speak and spell toy.. Your spelling is wrong,, but good try.

 

[Jk1974]

Any suggestions for part two?

 

[Jk1974]

Thank wolf.. and others like him the reason this story was deleted.. To the other 90% I'm sorry..