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Hai everyone. I usually just hang out in the chat rooms here, but I wanted to try my hand at writing, and since most of you seem like decent people I figured I'd post it here. Please give legit criticism on what can be improved and such. Don't worry, I won't cry!!! :lol



This is all I got so far (no title yet):



In this world, we live under the radar. We live in a society that exists just outside of most people’s collective consciousness. We are just under the counter at the store, in the dark room, separate. What I should say is that this is the world us druggies live in every day. We walk through the streets while everyone else is miserable, in a state of pure sublime. My name is Lucy and this is my story. I live in Pittsburgh, and I wanted to tell somebody about my life. I’ll come out with the obvious first, I’m what most of you would call a stoner. This story however isn’t just condoning or condemning the drugs that let you see the iguanas in your eyeballs.
 
theres not really enough to give legit critisism yet but so far from what i can tell is that you do at least seem to have your thoughts in order... im never happy with how my stories ever turn out. i do like it so far though
 
I gotta say...you made a pretty good story and also some interesting into. 🙂
 
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