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This is the last one of my story. Let me just say that I'm not taking anyone's idea, becasue the others story about becoming a genikit, was mine, since I decided leave my account from 11225 and make a new one.
HDS, Mistress Val (or others mods), if you want , you can delete my old account (11225), so I can start over, since I can't close it myself.
Here's the last part, and enjoy.
David woke up the next morning. It was his last day of his trial and he’s determined not to blow it. He left the forest and looked at the lake and only to find out that no one is sitting by the lake. He began to wonder and decided to head to town…only to find out that no one was around. He became worried that he might did something wrong and began exploring every piece of town. As he got to the exit of the Town, he grew more worried as he could not find anyone and felt to search even more. But then suddenly he heard someone.
Woman: Well, well, well…I didn’t expect to find out that one is missing,
David: (Turned around) Who’s there?
Woman: (Magically appeared by the exit, while giggling evilly) And I was hoping that I caught every last one.
David: Who are you? And what have you done to the citizens?
Woman: Now, now…no need for rude question. (Laughs)
David: (Getting upset) I’m not kidding! So answer my question!
Woman: (laughs) I like your attitude. My name is Raven, and don’t worry about them…they’re not hurt…yet.
David didn’t like Raven now that her personality is shown he wanted to use his magic on her, but from the looks of her clothes, he’s not sure if it’s a good idea. Raven is wearing the same clothes David’s wearing but the difference is that it’s black and so is her hair.
Woman: Anyway, I heard that you love to tickle women’s feet, so I have a deal…. If you can catch me and tickle my feet, I’ll let them go without even hurting them…and your best friend.
David was shocked to hear that word. As he realized the Jennifer was also taking, and he growled at Raven, even though she likes him getting mad. Raven added…
Raven: However, if you don’t catch me and tickle me when the sun sets…then you can kiss the citizens good bye.
David:!!
Now it became unfortunate for David. He has only one day left and he doesn’t want to ruin his chance. But at the same time he doesn’t want the citizens to be gone because of him. It took a while from him to think of his plan. However, Raven smiled and added new rules.
Raven: And one more thing…. I don’t like it when someone does nothing, so catch me and tickle my feet now, or you’ll regret it!
David: Fine. When to begin.
Raven: Oh and by the way, no magic allowed.
David: Why not? Give me one good reason.
Raven: I know very well that you can use your magic, better than I can so, neither you or me should be using it.
David: All right then…no magic.
Raven: Well then…ready…set…
As soon as Raven said, “go” she started running so fast, that she was one foot away from David. David couldn’t believe how fast Raven can run, and as he stood there watching, the ground grew hot on his barefeet, making him hop one foot after another.
David: Hot, Hot, Hot!! Gotta catch her soon or the citizens are goners!
And so, David went after Raven as fast as he could. He arrived at the lake, and since the ground is full of grass, it stopped heating up. He looked around to find Raven, but while doing so, the grass slowly began to grow taller. He had to find her fast, before it gets too tall, so looked around the lake, keeping an eye out for her.
As the grass got to his knees, it started to become more difficult for David to walk, but he still has trouble finding her, until he felt something hit his head. He looked up and discovered Raven sitting on the branch.
David: Aha! There you are!
Raven: (giggles) Not bad, but you still have to catch me!
So, Raven jumped off and ran toward to forest as the grass was soon back to normal. David felt a bit frustrated, and decided to go after her, before the grass starts growing again. He was on her tail for a while, until she jumped up on one of the branches. David wasn’t a good climber for all he knows, and he can’t use his magic to even get up there, so he continued on until Raven was out of sight again. David was getting annoyed, and was about to turn back, but soon noticed that the trees had blocked his exit.
David: (Upset) That’s not fair! You said no magic!
Voice of Raven: (Giggles) Who says I’m using my magic now? I just did it before I made the rules. Ha ha!
David: (Growls) You little…
Raven: Oh and by the way, I hope you not too ticklish, because the trees are getting hungered for laughter.
David: What do you mean?
Just then, the trees began to vibrate and one of them slid its leaves on his sides. David jumped away from the trees, almost giggled and turned around noticing the trees shaking and waving it leaves toward him.
David: You can’t be serious!!
David quickly notice one of the leaves getting close to him and began running as fast as he legs could move, only to find out that more trees began to chase him. Luckily for him it can’t go very fast, but by numbers, he had to dodge as much leaves as he can. Some of it leaves manage to touch his sides, tummy, and armpits. Soon David saw the exit and without hesitating, he went for it and soon got out of the forest. He looked back to see the forest back to normal again.
David: Whew! That was close….
Raven: It was, wasn’t it?
By surprise, David turned around and saw Raven standing face to face, about a half feet to him. David jumped back, and was about to make his move, but he hesitated.
Raven: You manage to get through two traps, so far. Very good, but I’m afraid you have to hurry, because you only have about a half an hour to catch me and tickle my feet. Or else, it’s bye, bye citizens. (Giggles evilly)
David: Darn you! (Began chasing after Raven)
Raven dashed again, going everywhere in town, while David continued chasing her, soon, they headed back to where it all began and David was gaining on her. Raven was amazed and also noticed that David had completely forgot his promise. So she continued running. Just then, David lunged forward and caught Raven’s legs. Forced her to fall on her face.
Raven: Ooff!
David: Now I’ve got you.
As it went down to one second, David began wiggling 5 fingers on Raven’s soles without hesitating, making her laugh, squirm, and thrash on the ground. The sun soon set, and David stopped and released her feet, and looking down at Raven as she get up, he crossed his arms.
David: There, I beat you and your game. Now return the citizens.
Raven: (Pant) No.
David: NO!? Why not? I just did your game!
Raven: I know. But before I started the game, I lied about taking the citizens. They’re not really captured. In fact, they’re right behind you.
David turned around and noticed all the citizens staring at him. David was surprised.
Raven: I made the illusion to make you think I captured them, of course, everyone was still here, watching you. While getting out of our way?
David: I can’t believe it…. I was tricked…
Raven: Yup. Not only that…there’s something an officer has to say.
David: Huh?
Familiar voice: David the Genikit.
David looked carefully and saw Daisy coming out from the crowd. She was happy, yet disappointed at the same time. David only noticed her happy face as he felt surprised.
David: Officer…
Daisy: I must say, I’m impressed that you decided to save all of us, and I…no…we’d like to thank you for your effort.
David: You don’t have to thank me. I was just trying to help.
Daisy: Indeed you did. However… I’m afraid that you failed to complete the trial.
David: What??
Daisy: The trial was that you’re forbidden to tickle anyone’s feet, even if a little girl somehow starts feeling blue.
David: (realized) Oh…I forgot about that…
Daisy: And so, tonight…you are hear by exiled from our town, until you show proof of honor. Tonight, you must leave and never return.
David: (feeling sad) I understand. I fail to earn trust, huh.
Raven: (silent)
David: Very well, but before I go…I would like to go to the forest one last time.
Daisy: Understood. I’ll give you 10 minutes to stay. After that, you have to go.
David: Thank you.
So David headed to the forest, to where he first became a Genikit. He stood to where he first met Laura and began thinking if he’s really a bad Genikit. He began shedding tears as he looked down on the ground.
David: I’m sorry…
Ten minutes had passed and he was now at the exit of town. Daisy, reached in her pocket and took out a bracelet, placed it on David’s left wrist.
Daisy: As long as you wear that bracelet, the people will know that you are no longer welcome until you come back with proof of honor.
David: (Nods) Well…this is good bye then.
Jennifer: Wait!
David: Jennifer?
Jennifer: (rushed toward David, then stopped and was out of breath)
David: What are you doing here?
Jennifer: Do you really have to go?
David: I’m afraid so. I’m no longer welcome, so it’s time I leave.
Jennifer: But I don’t want you to go! (Hugs David, tightly)
David: I’m sorry…
Jennifer began crying while holding on to David tightly, refusing to let him do. Raven, grabbed Jennifer gently, and pulled her away from David. She began struggling, tying to force Raven to let go.
Jennifer: (crying) No! Let me go!
David: Good bye.
David turned around and slowly headed west, leaving the town. Soon Jennifer broke loose, but was unable to go after him. She tries to stop crying, as she waved good-bye to David. David looked back, and waved good bye to Jennifer and all the citizens, while shedding tears once again. Daisy slightly waved good-bye to David as she shedding tears as well, until David was out of sight…never to be seen again.
HDS, Mistress Val (or others mods), if you want , you can delete my old account (11225), so I can start over, since I can't close it myself.
Here's the last part, and enjoy.
David woke up the next morning. It was his last day of his trial and he’s determined not to blow it. He left the forest and looked at the lake and only to find out that no one is sitting by the lake. He began to wonder and decided to head to town…only to find out that no one was around. He became worried that he might did something wrong and began exploring every piece of town. As he got to the exit of the Town, he grew more worried as he could not find anyone and felt to search even more. But then suddenly he heard someone.
Woman: Well, well, well…I didn’t expect to find out that one is missing,
David: (Turned around) Who’s there?
Woman: (Magically appeared by the exit, while giggling evilly) And I was hoping that I caught every last one.
David: Who are you? And what have you done to the citizens?
Woman: Now, now…no need for rude question. (Laughs)
David: (Getting upset) I’m not kidding! So answer my question!
Woman: (laughs) I like your attitude. My name is Raven, and don’t worry about them…they’re not hurt…yet.
David didn’t like Raven now that her personality is shown he wanted to use his magic on her, but from the looks of her clothes, he’s not sure if it’s a good idea. Raven is wearing the same clothes David’s wearing but the difference is that it’s black and so is her hair.
Woman: Anyway, I heard that you love to tickle women’s feet, so I have a deal…. If you can catch me and tickle my feet, I’ll let them go without even hurting them…and your best friend.
David was shocked to hear that word. As he realized the Jennifer was also taking, and he growled at Raven, even though she likes him getting mad. Raven added…
Raven: However, if you don’t catch me and tickle me when the sun sets…then you can kiss the citizens good bye.
David:!!
Now it became unfortunate for David. He has only one day left and he doesn’t want to ruin his chance. But at the same time he doesn’t want the citizens to be gone because of him. It took a while from him to think of his plan. However, Raven smiled and added new rules.
Raven: And one more thing…. I don’t like it when someone does nothing, so catch me and tickle my feet now, or you’ll regret it!
David: Fine. When to begin.
Raven: Oh and by the way, no magic allowed.
David: Why not? Give me one good reason.
Raven: I know very well that you can use your magic, better than I can so, neither you or me should be using it.
David: All right then…no magic.
Raven: Well then…ready…set…
As soon as Raven said, “go” she started running so fast, that she was one foot away from David. David couldn’t believe how fast Raven can run, and as he stood there watching, the ground grew hot on his barefeet, making him hop one foot after another.
David: Hot, Hot, Hot!! Gotta catch her soon or the citizens are goners!
And so, David went after Raven as fast as he could. He arrived at the lake, and since the ground is full of grass, it stopped heating up. He looked around to find Raven, but while doing so, the grass slowly began to grow taller. He had to find her fast, before it gets too tall, so looked around the lake, keeping an eye out for her.
As the grass got to his knees, it started to become more difficult for David to walk, but he still has trouble finding her, until he felt something hit his head. He looked up and discovered Raven sitting on the branch.
David: Aha! There you are!
Raven: (giggles) Not bad, but you still have to catch me!
So, Raven jumped off and ran toward to forest as the grass was soon back to normal. David felt a bit frustrated, and decided to go after her, before the grass starts growing again. He was on her tail for a while, until she jumped up on one of the branches. David wasn’t a good climber for all he knows, and he can’t use his magic to even get up there, so he continued on until Raven was out of sight again. David was getting annoyed, and was about to turn back, but soon noticed that the trees had blocked his exit.
David: (Upset) That’s not fair! You said no magic!
Voice of Raven: (Giggles) Who says I’m using my magic now? I just did it before I made the rules. Ha ha!
David: (Growls) You little…
Raven: Oh and by the way, I hope you not too ticklish, because the trees are getting hungered for laughter.
David: What do you mean?
Just then, the trees began to vibrate and one of them slid its leaves on his sides. David jumped away from the trees, almost giggled and turned around noticing the trees shaking and waving it leaves toward him.
David: You can’t be serious!!
David quickly notice one of the leaves getting close to him and began running as fast as he legs could move, only to find out that more trees began to chase him. Luckily for him it can’t go very fast, but by numbers, he had to dodge as much leaves as he can. Some of it leaves manage to touch his sides, tummy, and armpits. Soon David saw the exit and without hesitating, he went for it and soon got out of the forest. He looked back to see the forest back to normal again.
David: Whew! That was close….
Raven: It was, wasn’t it?
By surprise, David turned around and saw Raven standing face to face, about a half feet to him. David jumped back, and was about to make his move, but he hesitated.
Raven: You manage to get through two traps, so far. Very good, but I’m afraid you have to hurry, because you only have about a half an hour to catch me and tickle my feet. Or else, it’s bye, bye citizens. (Giggles evilly)
David: Darn you! (Began chasing after Raven)
Raven dashed again, going everywhere in town, while David continued chasing her, soon, they headed back to where it all began and David was gaining on her. Raven was amazed and also noticed that David had completely forgot his promise. So she continued running. Just then, David lunged forward and caught Raven’s legs. Forced her to fall on her face.
Raven: Ooff!
David: Now I’ve got you.
As it went down to one second, David began wiggling 5 fingers on Raven’s soles without hesitating, making her laugh, squirm, and thrash on the ground. The sun soon set, and David stopped and released her feet, and looking down at Raven as she get up, he crossed his arms.
David: There, I beat you and your game. Now return the citizens.
Raven: (Pant) No.
David: NO!? Why not? I just did your game!
Raven: I know. But before I started the game, I lied about taking the citizens. They’re not really captured. In fact, they’re right behind you.
David turned around and noticed all the citizens staring at him. David was surprised.
Raven: I made the illusion to make you think I captured them, of course, everyone was still here, watching you. While getting out of our way?
David: I can’t believe it…. I was tricked…
Raven: Yup. Not only that…there’s something an officer has to say.
David: Huh?
Familiar voice: David the Genikit.
David looked carefully and saw Daisy coming out from the crowd. She was happy, yet disappointed at the same time. David only noticed her happy face as he felt surprised.
David: Officer…
Daisy: I must say, I’m impressed that you decided to save all of us, and I…no…we’d like to thank you for your effort.
David: You don’t have to thank me. I was just trying to help.
Daisy: Indeed you did. However… I’m afraid that you failed to complete the trial.
David: What??
Daisy: The trial was that you’re forbidden to tickle anyone’s feet, even if a little girl somehow starts feeling blue.
David: (realized) Oh…I forgot about that…
Daisy: And so, tonight…you are hear by exiled from our town, until you show proof of honor. Tonight, you must leave and never return.
David: (feeling sad) I understand. I fail to earn trust, huh.
Raven: (silent)
David: Very well, but before I go…I would like to go to the forest one last time.
Daisy: Understood. I’ll give you 10 minutes to stay. After that, you have to go.
David: Thank you.
So David headed to the forest, to where he first became a Genikit. He stood to where he first met Laura and began thinking if he’s really a bad Genikit. He began shedding tears as he looked down on the ground.
David: I’m sorry…
Ten minutes had passed and he was now at the exit of town. Daisy, reached in her pocket and took out a bracelet, placed it on David’s left wrist.
Daisy: As long as you wear that bracelet, the people will know that you are no longer welcome until you come back with proof of honor.
David: (Nods) Well…this is good bye then.
Jennifer: Wait!
David: Jennifer?
Jennifer: (rushed toward David, then stopped and was out of breath)
David: What are you doing here?
Jennifer: Do you really have to go?
David: I’m afraid so. I’m no longer welcome, so it’s time I leave.
Jennifer: But I don’t want you to go! (Hugs David, tightly)
David: I’m sorry…
Jennifer began crying while holding on to David tightly, refusing to let him do. Raven, grabbed Jennifer gently, and pulled her away from David. She began struggling, tying to force Raven to let go.
Jennifer: (crying) No! Let me go!
David: Good bye.
David turned around and slowly headed west, leaving the town. Soon Jennifer broke loose, but was unable to go after him. She tries to stop crying, as she waved good-bye to David. David looked back, and waved good bye to Jennifer and all the citizens, while shedding tears once again. Daisy slightly waved good-bye to David as she shedding tears as well, until David was out of sight…never to be seen again.
