TicklishLurker
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Because it requires knowledge I just don't have.
See, I was thinking about all the areas where I'm a failure as a woman. Not able to style my own hair, rude, stubborn, can't walk in high heels, etc. It got me thinking about the Shaw play Pygmalion and how much quicker Higgins could've had Eliza trained and tamed if he had just tied her up and tickled her. Which brought me to the following idea -
The story focuses around a charm school that is kind of a boot camp for uncouth females between the ages of 18 and 50. So it would/should be filled with female characters of all shapes, sizes, and ethnic groups, etc. (Not just skinny little super models in other words.)
The first thing they do when you join is give you a medical exam - determining if you're too thin or too fat or just right. They also test you for allergies. You're then given a special diet, vitamins, and herbs - what no one knows is that they have a special mix in there that increases the sensitivity of your nerves, so women who aren't ticklish at all will become ticklish. Those already ticklish will become more so. Each person is given a different level depending on how ticklish they are - it takes about 2 weeks to take effect, increasing as time goes on - so basically the women have a two week reprieve. (Of course the new ones don't know what happens when you mess up.)
Then they're given daily spa treatments. Again, to increase their sensitivity.
The reason for this - if you mess up in the stuff they're going to teach you - use your salad fork instead of your shrimp fork, belch too loudly, apply your makeup too thick, scratch yourself, etc - you go to the punishment room, where you're tickled and forced to orgasm.
The staff is all made up of happy graduates. The owner can either be a man or a woman. Mostly the staff handles the punishment while the owner watches, but occastionally he (or she) picks a certain woman - either they're especially stubborn or the owner just wants them - to dole out punishment to.
Needless to say this charm boot camp has a high success rate with it's students - and more then a few repeat customers.
The main focus of the story would be someone like me - a stubborn tomboy who feels she's a failure as a woman cause she can't walk in high heels, put on makeup properly, etc. Yet at the same time rebels against being a proper lady. However the punishment of others should be shown as part of mini-stories inside the big one. But the main one is the one who catches the owner's eye. He (or she) waits until she makes a boo-boo....
Now granted, I still want more romantic consensual tickling, but this idea is stuck in my head - but I can't pull it off, I'm sure of it, because you need to know something about ediquite(sp?) to do it and I know nothing beyond your napkin should go in your lap and picking your nose or ears is wrong.
So I was hoping there'd be a writer out there who wants to write some */f tickling but can't think of an idea. Be it F/f or M/f - plus obviously some multiple females tickling one female in the side-stories. Someone who actually had read Miss Manners and can pull off a charm school story. Pretty please?
See, I was thinking about all the areas where I'm a failure as a woman. Not able to style my own hair, rude, stubborn, can't walk in high heels, etc. It got me thinking about the Shaw play Pygmalion and how much quicker Higgins could've had Eliza trained and tamed if he had just tied her up and tickled her. Which brought me to the following idea -
The story focuses around a charm school that is kind of a boot camp for uncouth females between the ages of 18 and 50. So it would/should be filled with female characters of all shapes, sizes, and ethnic groups, etc. (Not just skinny little super models in other words.)
The first thing they do when you join is give you a medical exam - determining if you're too thin or too fat or just right. They also test you for allergies. You're then given a special diet, vitamins, and herbs - what no one knows is that they have a special mix in there that increases the sensitivity of your nerves, so women who aren't ticklish at all will become ticklish. Those already ticklish will become more so. Each person is given a different level depending on how ticklish they are - it takes about 2 weeks to take effect, increasing as time goes on - so basically the women have a two week reprieve. (Of course the new ones don't know what happens when you mess up.)
Then they're given daily spa treatments. Again, to increase their sensitivity.
The reason for this - if you mess up in the stuff they're going to teach you - use your salad fork instead of your shrimp fork, belch too loudly, apply your makeup too thick, scratch yourself, etc - you go to the punishment room, where you're tickled and forced to orgasm.
The staff is all made up of happy graduates. The owner can either be a man or a woman. Mostly the staff handles the punishment while the owner watches, but occastionally he (or she) picks a certain woman - either they're especially stubborn or the owner just wants them - to dole out punishment to.
Needless to say this charm boot camp has a high success rate with it's students - and more then a few repeat customers.
The main focus of the story would be someone like me - a stubborn tomboy who feels she's a failure as a woman cause she can't walk in high heels, put on makeup properly, etc. Yet at the same time rebels against being a proper lady. However the punishment of others should be shown as part of mini-stories inside the big one. But the main one is the one who catches the owner's eye. He (or she) waits until she makes a boo-boo....
Now granted, I still want more romantic consensual tickling, but this idea is stuck in my head - but I can't pull it off, I'm sure of it, because you need to know something about ediquite(sp?) to do it and I know nothing beyond your napkin should go in your lap and picking your nose or ears is wrong.
So I was hoping there'd be a writer out there who wants to write some */f tickling but can't think of an idea. Be it F/f or M/f - plus obviously some multiple females tickling one female in the side-stories. Someone who actually had read Miss Manners and can pull off a charm school story. Pretty please?
