I Miss the Old Days

[crydun]

Here is a poem I just wrote today. Wanted to share it with you all. Feedback is always welcome.

I Miss the Old Days

I miss the old days
being young and carefree
We were much more connected
and talked so easily.

I miss the fire
that burned in your heart
You wanted to know me
and hated to part

I miss the kindness
I felt in your soul
Eased inside of me
and vowed to never let go.

I have cried out in passion
I've cried many tears
I've clung to your intrigue
that's drawn me in for years.

But the ice is getting thin
and the tide is getting high
So, with love and deep regret
My heart and I wave good-bye.

written by Crystal Dunson

11-22-05

Written for and dedicated to someone who shall remain nameless at this point in time.

 

[SyDemon1]

*sheds a tear*

sniff....that is so beautiful.....

 

[Faramir]

yes, that is good. why is it that this time of year always brings out the melancholy in me?

 

[Hungarian21]

I guess the writer was heartbroken.....its a good poem. :happy:

 

[piercearrow33]

Crydun
I'll never be known as a great poem expert. Nonetheless, it was beautiful. Hopefully, the nameless person reads it.

 

[coloman]

Your poem is well writen plus it's romatic and beautiful too. I enjoy writing poetry myself and I really apppreciate your poetic skills.

 

[HOLLYWOOD]

the hollywood brother can dig your cool poem. it has some true words as the hollywood brother knows first hand that the fire within can go out at any time when you grow up. however it do not have to be. look at the hollywood brother. he know that the hollywood brother will never find true love ro happiness but the hollywood brother still rocks on and on and even if his fire gets real low, the hollywood brother do not allow it to go out all the way. The way the hollywood brother do this is by going to wildwood new jersey and just walking around. The place is amazing and electrifying at the same time. The hollywood brother go there, drive down to some heavy metal 80's style and walk the boards. Then by theend of the day, the hollywood brother batterries is recharged, reloaded and ready to rock and roll

 

[crydun]

thanks for all your replies.