In Detention f/f foot

[rajee]

What detention is like in Tickle High School.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

Well, I reckon that will teach her to misbehave in class. Good theme.

I might work on the size of the feet in relation to the person tickling them though. I realize you are trying to use perspective, but the foot doesn't need to be that big nor does her head. In fact, to counter this and make it look as it should, simply draw her head smaller, since it's the farthest thing away, and then make things progressively bigger, with the tickler being the biggest since she/he is in the front.

Unless of course theres a reason you drew it this way. In that case you don't need to change anything.

Either way its a good job.

 

[rajee]

Thanks CE! I'll try! Would you recommend using Paint Shop pro to resize the head or try drawing smaller. I don't want the features of the head to look crowded, smushed or unnatural.

I took a page out of Tickle's book and used color option for scanning.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

I didn't mean to change this picture (as it might be too late). Rather, I was giving suggestions for future ones.

 

[rajee]

Good. I was inquiring for my next cartoon. I agree it is too late for this one.

 

[Celtic_Emperor]

It could have been meant or taken either way.

 

[Lauren Tyler]

Good thing I'm not a girl or else detention would've been hell for me there!

 

[Falcon Tk]

Interesting Return of one good Artist !

Good day and Good luck.