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In Hell final chapter!

TKLVR181

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Here we go, finally the last of it, ending with, of course, tummy tickles. Special thanks to Feathers for giving me permission to do this story! Love ya'll and please PLEASE feedback, it's what I live off of, what I eat!!!:laughing:

IN HELL 2.3

“Eehehe…F-Feathers…thehehere’s no need to g-get my tummy…” I began to stutter as he rolled it up over my ribs.

“Oh, but I think there is…I knoow how much you lo-ove having your belly liiightly tickled and teased…how much you re-eeally want me too…” with that, he began to gently glide his nails up and down my bare belly.

“Eeehhehheeheheheheheheehstahahapihihihtttttt...” I giggled uncontrollably, unable to fight back or wiggle anymore.

“Stop? I don’t think so…tickle tickle tickle…just veery light touches on your ickle belly…only ‘cuz you love it so much…”

Once again I went into silent, uncontrolled giggles. My stomach is my absolutely worst spot, and the light, teasing touches were maddening; but, at the same time, I really did love it. Instead of hard-core, torturous tickles that are to be endured, this was light, teasing touches. And the ability of those light, teasing touches to drive me into complete, giggly hysterics made it even worse, even better.

So he continued; he scratched around the sensitive outside of my tummy, working in. Just like he always does; just like I like him to do. When he got to my bellybutton he let me rest a moment.

“Alright?” He asked. I nodded, catching my breath. “Y-you’re not gonna stop now, are you?!” I giggled, looking him straight in the eye. Yea I was saying, I’m fine and you can tickle me just as long as you want. I’m good.
That was, of course, all the permission he needed. I saw him pull out a large, pointed feather and wiggle it at me.

My eyes got really big. “Y-you not g-g-gonna…” I stuttered.

He nodded. “Put this inside your cute ickle button? Ooh yes!” With that, he sent the feather swirling around my tummy, making sure to cover every millimeter with the large, pointed, stiff tickly feather.

“EEEEEEehehehehahhahehehhhahahahahhahhhaeheehhEHHEHehhehahahtihihckles tickles tihihihickleheesss!!!” I exclaimed, giggling and wiggling.

Finally I could feel it…he was swirling it just outside my large, innie bellybutton. Then I felt it dip inside.


“EEEAAAAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!! THAHAHT TIHIHCKLES SOHOHOHOHO BAHAHHHAD FEHEHEHATHEHEHRSHEHEHEHEAHAHAHHA…” I laughed and shook my head so hard I felt my hair scrunchie fall out of my hair.

“I know, I know…it’s ok…just tell me when you’ve had enough…tickle tickle…” There it was again, that mix of comforting and teasing that drove me completely batty every time. I was shaking my head from side to side, tears beginning to stream down my cheeks. I knew I couldn’t take much more.

“WAHAHHAEEH OKOKHAHEHHE I GIIHIHIHIVEEHHEHHEHEHEHEEHHHE!!” I hollered through my laughter.

Immediately I could feel the feather being taken away, and my arms being freed. He wrapped his arms and tentacles around me, letting me recover by leaning on him. Panting, I pulled off my coat, thankful for a cool breeze that seemed to be flowing through the room. I took a moment to wonder how there was a cool breeze running through a room in Hell, but I didn’t dwell on it. There are some things it’s better I don’t try to figure out.

After a minute I picked up my coat, and retrieved my scrunchie. “Th-thank you…so much.” I said, looking him straight in the eye.

“Anytime, my dear. Anytime.” He said, giving me one last hug. I saw a small portal open up behind him, the bathroom I had left what seemed like hours ago, but in reality no time had gone by, on the other side.

And there I was, hair up in a tight bun, jacket on, tired and worried look on my face. Suddenly the vision I had had earlier of myself made sense; to avoid a time paradox, I would have to return at the exact moment I left. The hair down, jacketless version of myself I had seen in the mirror was me now, after having being tickled into relaxation.

I gave Feathers one last wink, slung my jacket over my shoulder, and approached the other me in the mirror.

She was in for one Helluva ride.

THE END
 
Wow Karen....I take my hat off to you.....that's a well written story-the whole lot of it.You've been so honest about what gets to you whilst being tickled and that's a VEEERRY brave thing to do around here.And no need to be embarrassed about the little things that get you into a giggly mess-that's what makes you such a fun lee-it happends to the best of us!

Congrats on a well written story hun-it was (as Sammi would say) 'freaking' awesome!Hope to see more in the not too distant future!*hugs*
 
tickle_fan03 said:
Wow Karen....I take my hat off to you.....that's a well written story-the whole lot of it.You've been so honest about what gets to you whilst being tickled and that's a VEEERRY brave thing to do around here.And no need to be embarrassed about the little things that get you into a giggly mess-that's what makes you such a fun lee-it happends to the best of us!

Congrats on a well written story hun-it was (as Sammi would say) 'freaking' awesome!Hope to see more in the not too distant future!*hugs*

Thanks a ton Helen, it really does mean a bunch to me that you speak so well if it. I worked really hard to try to say exactly what I wanted to. *hug* Thanks so much!
 
As promised:

t!!1

Amazing stuff!! 😀 In the words of McDonalds, I am verying love it. 😀
 
Senshi said:
As promised:

t!!1

Amazing stuff!! 😀 In the words of McDonalds, I am verying love it. 😀

YAAAY! I have my whole wOOt!!1 !!!!!! *is extremely happy* Glad you are very loving it!!!
 
That was a perfect ending, kiddo! n_n Yeah, Helen was right. Freaking awesome. 😉
 
With this one, we reach the conclusion of our great tale, and what an ending it was🙂 Very well written the whole way through. I really liked seeing the look at the mindset of a very willing lee, as well as learning what gets to her the most. It really does take a lot of guts to be able to write a story from that sort of viewpoint, but you pulled it off brilliantly. I really like this one, and hope you continue to keep writing for a long time to come :super_hap
 
Sockstickler said:
With this one, we reach the conclusion of our great tale, and what an ending it was🙂 Very well written the whole way through. I really liked seeing the look at the mindset of a very willing lee, as well as learning what gets to her the most. It really does take a lot of guts to be able to write a story from that sort of viewpoint, but you pulled it off brilliantly. I really like this one, and hope you continue to keep writing for a long time to come :super_hap

Wow, thanks a ton!! It means a ton to me that you think so highly of it!! :super_hap *frames your reply*
 
Great story Karen - the perfect end to a thrilling story. Of course, having revealed all of your secrets, this can only mean one thing. lol 😉
 
Feathers said:
Great story Karen - the perfect end to a thrilling story. Of course, having revealed all of your secrets, this can only mean one thing. lol 😉

😱 believe me, I'm aaalready feeling it:laughing:
 
*continues taking notes* That it? That's all I get?!?!

Snail Shell
 
great story karen, only thing is that the guy should of been more techilogically inclined and got himself an electric tooth brush 😉. Hell seems that it could be more evilier ya know.....lucky i dont run it 😉 you might die again
 
SS--'fraid so, and trust me. I've said waa-aay more than is good for me😛

Blues--thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!

LIT--there's a reason you weren't running that show, trust me :tounge:
 
Now, as I promised.
After reviewing the pages before me, I grant tklvr18 the Good God Y'all Badge of Approval
 
TKLVR18 said:
SS--'fraid so, and trust me. I've said waa-aay more than is good for me😛

Blues--thanks man! Glad you enjoyed it!

LIT--there's a reason you weren't running that show, trust me :tounge:

😉
 
Journia said:
Now, as I promised.
After reviewing the pages before me, I grant tklvr18 the Good God Y'all Badge of Approval
*yay*wOOt!!!:super_hap
 
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