It's ok---Poem

[TKLVR181]

Just some fluff I wrote this morning--first verse is from the female's perspective, the second from the male's. Feedback welcome! ^__^

~K

Sometimes I get insecure.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get scared.
It’s ok. I love you.
Of you!
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get emotional for no reason at all.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I cry.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I yell!
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get mad.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I can’t even say what I want.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I don’t even know what I want.
It’s ok. I love you.

Sometimes I get jealous.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I badmouth other people because I’m jealous.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get insecure.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get scared.
It’s ok. I love you.
Of you!
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I cry.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I throw a fit.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get distracted.
It’s ok. I love you.
Sometimes I get embarrassed.
It’s ok. I love you.

 

[Master Chief]

Nice poem. It tells of some big emotions swirling in your heart. Yet the forgiveness is always steady. It's ok. I love you.

 

[tickle_fan031]

Wow that's pretty cool hun.You're making me jealous of your poetry skills(there's prob a better way of saying that but can't think of it right now)...but it's ok I love you.


(soz couldn't resist that.had to follow suit.lol.)

 

[Featherdemon]

Nice poem bud! Its nice and soothing but at the same time brimming with meaning. 😀😀

 

[FT Genikit]

Well said, my friend. It will always touch my heart.

 

[Reed_7891]

Absolutely Beautiful 🙂

makes me wanna dig out some of my poetry XD

 

[TKLVR181]

Thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :super_hap

 

[FT Genikit]

Thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :super_hap

You're welcome. :happy: